Parrot and Olivier in America - Section 1 - Olivier I to VII (August 2012)

[Lily]

Jeremy wrote: "I agree with some of Lily's comments earlier about some of the comparisons coming off a little bumpy. I remember thinking to my self several times, what does that have to do with this? And severa..."

Thx! Somehow, I haven't found myself being quite so picky as I have moved on. Don't know if I'm just not reading as carefully, if I am getting used to Carey's style, if the text is solidifying with the story, or if awkward comparisons are turning out to be appropriate to the story! lol.