I noticed some funny stuff when I was reading too. I'm not a copy editor, so I'm sure I didn't see all you did. I just noticed some typos (easy to spot) and some mangled sentences that didn't make sense. I'd wondered a little about the quality of the edits and why it wasn't done better.
There are typos, fragments, dropped words and continuity errors all over the place. Whoever proofed this edition's galleys should be fired.
I was wondering if anyone else's editions were so mangled?