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My Song! > I wrote this song, I need a few pointers!

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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

Ok its stupid i no...
but my friends said to share it to people. and see what they think so ya. (see next comment for lyrics)

message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

your smile brightens my day,
in every single way.
Your voice makes me melt.
It's something i've never felt.
When you come my way.
I don't know what to say.
Your laugh is like nothing i've ever heard before.
and when your gone my heart is sore.
Your eyes are blue like a summer day.
I never want it to go away.
Your all I think about.
I can get you out,
of my mind.
I'll never leave you behind.

I no it sux.
but ya.. thats all i have so far.
Feel freee to post your own songs too!

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