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Jul 11, 2012 12:46PM

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hey Clhoe-Mai i LOVE your girl. My favourite is the way she looks, its so discriptive its amazing :)
thanks :) the main king is just kinda there and not very discriptive casue im planning on making him die :P just a spoiler lol
hahaha
and ya me to :) ill start it once i have invited more people and they have made their characters (hopfully soon). and im working on one more character :P
and ya me to :) ill start it once i have invited more people and they have made their characters (hopfully soon). and im working on one more character :P

thanks :) im really exited too, i think it will be awesome. Hopfully go on for a long time. And i will let you know if i need anything k? Thanks for joining :)
hey, i guess i should have mentioned this before, my bad, but you know how the witches have the specialties? well if you could just add that into the Species part please? If they dont know what there specialty is yet just put in brackets (dont know yet) or somthing please. Thanks, sorry for not putting that on there. Ill add it
Also, we need some leaders... so like the leader for Dorian, Sorret, Milton. If you want to be the Lord then you can make one. its fine :) we just need them lol Dorian would be good if you wannt to be a war tactic or whatever :P just kinda thinking to myself lol
Also, we need some leaders... so like the leader for Dorian, Sorret, Milton. If you want to be the Lord then you can make one. its fine :) we just need them lol Dorian would be good if you wannt to be a war tactic or whatever :P just kinda thinking to myself lol

and if i make a lady, i will make her where she has a big hand in tactics and stuff and tough kinda like the queen in Thrones but not so much a b***h LOL))

i admit it has been a while since i have made some in depth charries so I am open to help
lol Cerci is just a mess, i hate her. But it would be kinda fun if the lady was like that :P and if no one else takes the Lady then ill make her, just to balance it out since you have 3 characters in Dorian already. But the Lord looks really good and should be fun to war against lol
As for your other characters they are awesome! i didnt find anything wrong with them other than if you could add what specialty the Witch dude was in into the Species part (unless you alrady did that, i havnt read it yet) :P lol but ill read through them again and let ya know
As for your other characters they are awesome! i didnt find anything wrong with them other than if you could add what specialty the Witch dude was in into the Species part (unless you alrady did that, i havnt read it yet) :P lol but ill read through them again and let ya know

lol i think we have the same favs in GOT. And im not sure... we can see where we need more characters after but it would be fun to make one like her. But i dont want to completely copy GOT. Good idea though :) and why odnt you make some characters(if you want more) in other houses so you have more veriety. Only if you want to :P

Anyway, the midget.....can i make a charrie thats a dwarf? Not in Dorian like my other charries.

Hey, thats cool, thanks for letting me know before hand. And you dont have to delete any of your characters just yet cause i dont think we will get started for a while, seeming as no one is really active ATM. So just keep them on here until you get back, Ill message you if i have to delete them, which wont be likely
Hey, so i realise some people are away or busy, i know im busy and cant get on as much. So, i was thinking that you guys could let me know when your ready to RP, i mean we need more people so if you guys could let other people know as well... So thanks :) Please get back as soon as you can.


Ya I have only about an hour difference than Savannah. Just make your characters and we can start the RP soon :)
Kk, probably... Soon cause I'm gone all next week and I'm not sure how often ill get online. But defiantly soon :P you can start if you want but I won't be responding often
Alrighty, so this RP had been at a stand still for a WHILE. So how about we get to actually RP??
Hey, anyone who is listening and wants to find a spot to start RP. We need Lords or rulers for some of the cities, if you are interested you should make them right away cause were going to have a court meeting and there supposed to be there.
Also, we need a Kings Hand, so kinda like his advisor, if you are interests in that you can make it also, he needs to be at he meeting to.
Any questions in this just ask :) thanks
Also, we need a Kings Hand, so kinda like his advisor, if you are interests in that you can make it also, he needs to be at he meeting to.
Any questions in this just ask :) thanks

I've made a Lord for Sorrel, though i want to ask if it's okay with you Hannah because one of your character's is the son of the guy I made lord. So, I killed your bastard son's father lol. Check and see if it's okay? I hope so because one of my most valued characters stem from parts of Max's life. I posted my dragon master in the Sorrel thread.
i read it all and i love them so far :) except i think you should change Max's last name to Sorret (pretty sure that the Sorrels family name) But if you have a different perspective just let me know
oh and i think im going to re-word a little in my dragon masters personality, because i like how yours is taking more of the leadership role, son like all of them work together (right?) so like Arcadia is going to be like...the supporter? Like to keep everything in controll, not sure if that the right wording but ya haha
oh and i think im going to re-word a little in my dragon masters personality, because i like how yours is taking more of the leadership role, son like all of them work together (right?) so like Arcadia is going to be like...the supporter? Like to keep everything in controll, not sure if that the right wording but ya haha
I changed his last name :). Sorry for that mix up :/. Glad you liked them otherwise :).
Yeah, I focused on the stronger attributes for my dragon master like leadership, courage, etc. And...well, I kinda went a bit all out-ish to make him. But I'll add more to the history probably later. Idk, I felt I needed to make him fit the part fantastically, ya know? Lol
Oh! Here was my idea. Sabrina (thief I made) is going to steal something that was found deep in Sorrel forest 23 years ago. That thing is the egg of a dragon. Its been bedazzled with jewels and locked away in the castle. It was created in the universe when Braylin had been conceived since it is the dragon that will belong to him. The egg is going to be darker in color though due to the darker vibe of Sorrel. Sound good thus far?
Yeah, I focused on the stronger attributes for my dragon master like leadership, courage, etc. And...well, I kinda went a bit all out-ish to make him. But I'll add more to the history probably later. Idk, I felt I needed to make him fit the part fantastically, ya know? Lol
Oh! Here was my idea. Sabrina (thief I made) is going to steal something that was found deep in Sorrel forest 23 years ago. That thing is the egg of a dragon. Its been bedazzled with jewels and locked away in the castle. It was created in the universe when Braylin had been conceived since it is the dragon that will belong to him. The egg is going to be darker in color though due to the darker vibe of Sorrel. Sound good thus far?
Yes! that sounds super fantastic! you should try and pick uup arcadia and Echo along the way, well maybe that wont work...i kinda want a character of mine to be in this little adventure ya got brewing lol any particular person you want? Cause i will make one.
Oh and another thing for EVERYONE, if you havnt made a character yet you should lol there is lots of positions open, but im pretty sure all the Lords spots are full. There is still spots open for ladys though.
So, just to recap, King of Barath is: Lawrence-hannah and to be king is Asher-Savannah
Lord Dorian: Willaim- jessica
Lord Sorrel: Max-Savannah
Lord of North City: To be made- Hannah (unless anyone else wants it)
Good??
Oh and another thing for EVERYONE, if you havnt made a character yet you should lol there is lots of positions open, but im pretty sure all the Lords spots are full. There is still spots open for ladys though.
So, just to recap, King of Barath is: Lawrence-hannah and to be king is Asher-Savannah
Lord Dorian: Willaim- jessica
Lord Sorrel: Max-Savannah
Lord of North City: To be made- Hannah (unless anyone else wants it)
Good??
You can make any character you want to join in Sabrina's theft lol. It can be a random or a thief or anyone that would run into her. I actually have her in the castle right now, but I'm not sure if I'll let her be successful just yet. I think I will and then have her carry the egg with her only to find that others are after it and everything seems to be turned against the protection of the egg. So, she has to keep it safe and at some point realizes what it was/is. Maybe even at some point sabrina and whoever else is with her will cross paths with your dragon master and echo and those two know what it is and all of them start to hunt down the owner of the egg?
I'll make more characters to spread out other places when they are needed since we don't have many.
I'll make more characters to spread out other places when they are needed since we don't have many.
lol idk but it all sounds like a fantastic starting plot :) i think this rp will be amazing just with everything going on in it. And i still need to figure out how Arcadia will get her dragon (which i am going to add to her character soon)but it'll all work out. ill let you know when i have an idea for the person going to run into Sabrina
Works for me :). If you need help coming up with a way to make your dragon master find her egg, im of course willing to help :)
i have an idea! to get involved with your character Sabrina. So you know West from sorret? K well he is the commanders of their Knights so, he is going to be in Maneara and can see Sabrina sneaking around and being rebelious he follows her or whatever and notices what she has but doesnt know any information about it himself. But when they go back to Sorret when your dragon rider gets all flusterd about it, West will realise what he did and go off searching for Sabrina, finding her before your dragon rider does -hopefully- so then he is officially involved. Hows that sound?? lol
And help with comming up with how she finds the egg would be fantastic, thanks :)
And help with comming up with how she finds the egg would be fantastic, thanks :)
Sounds mostly good. But, I don't intend on Braylin figuring out he's a dragon master until he comes across the egg when it hatches or when the dragon itself finds him. I either planned on the egg hatching when he comes across it
Or
Something horrible happening that brings on Braylin's temper as well as his leadership role and courage and what not that results in the hatching of his dragon. The baby dragon then quickly starts to rush off to find her master. But Sabrina and whoever is with Vortex (the dragon) help the baby find Braylin and in the process of hunting for him (but they don't know who he is, just following Vortex) Vortex grows a lot. But (like in Argon (at least the movie not sure about the book)) Vortex grows to full size like "BAM" in one second which would be triggered by Braylin needing her help. She then rushs to help him and saves him just in time.
I'll come up with something. Gives me a sec :). Whats the north city like?
Or
Something horrible happening that brings on Braylin's temper as well as his leadership role and courage and what not that results in the hatching of his dragon. The baby dragon then quickly starts to rush off to find her master. But Sabrina and whoever is with Vortex (the dragon) help the baby find Braylin and in the process of hunting for him (but they don't know who he is, just following Vortex) Vortex grows a lot. But (like in Argon (at least the movie not sure about the book)) Vortex grows to full size like "BAM" in one second which would be triggered by Braylin needing her help. She then rushs to help him and saves him just in time.
I'll come up with something. Gives me a sec :). Whats the north city like?
oh okk trhat stil-i like the second option myself :)- but ill just have West find out some other way, and go try and find Sabrina.
And the North City is really cold and fierce, since most of the outlaws and refuges that were killers or theifs seaking refuge from the other cities prisons. So it is very...brutal i guess the word would be. It is like...i keep thinking of references to the Game of Thrones series but if you can understand this, it is like the metal steal, very hard and gold and strong, sunlike gold and jewles that can bend and break easily.
So i was plannin on having the dragon a male, and be very tempered and so Arcadia calms him down but the dragon still keeps Arcadia motivated and convinced that she needs to do certain things. So they balance eachother out. Not sure if that helps you with figuring anything out but whataver :P
And the North City is really cold and fierce, since most of the outlaws and refuges that were killers or theifs seaking refuge from the other cities prisons. So it is very...brutal i guess the word would be. It is like...i keep thinking of references to the Game of Thrones series but if you can understand this, it is like the metal steal, very hard and gold and strong, sunlike gold and jewles that can bend and break easily.
So i was plannin on having the dragon a male, and be very tempered and so Arcadia calms him down but the dragon still keeps Arcadia motivated and convinced that she needs to do certain things. So they balance eachother out. Not sure if that helps you with figuring anything out but whataver :P
I liked the second one as well, but the only down side would be that he wouldn't be there when she was born. But that's not a huge issue. So, I'll probably play with that one. West could hear legends about it or something or maybe he can come across the mysterious shadow trainer that taught Braylin. Incase it wasn't evident, the trainer was sorta just brought up by like destiny to train Braylin. Lol. The shadow trainer could tell West that he needed to go get the egg and bring it to Sorrel but not tell him why because the trainer didn't believe Braylin was ready to know yet? Idk. Just throwing out ideas ^_^
Well, you could always have something like this happen:
arcadia was walking along an icy path of a mountain side that maybe lead from the north city to the rest of the world and the path breaks under her feet and she slips off the edge of the straight plummet down. The wall is made of just silk ice and nothing to grab. But as fate would have it, 30 feet down was a very small ledge that she lands on. She isn't hurt to bad. She looks up to see there's a thin layer of ice blocking an entrance to a cave in the side of the mountain.
Next either she could break through it and find her egg OR her dragon could have been born awhile back when something else had happened and just asleep at full size waiting to have reason to leave and when she falls he wakes up and busts out of the ice blocking the cave (freaking her out of course). Lol
Well, you could always have something like this happen:
arcadia was walking along an icy path of a mountain side that maybe lead from the north city to the rest of the world and the path breaks under her feet and she slips off the edge of the straight plummet down. The wall is made of just silk ice and nothing to grab. But as fate would have it, 30 feet down was a very small ledge that she lands on. She isn't hurt to bad. She looks up to see there's a thin layer of ice blocking an entrance to a cave in the side of the mountain.
Next either she could break through it and find her egg OR her dragon could have been born awhile back when something else had happened and just asleep at full size waiting to have reason to leave and when she falls he wakes up and busts out of the ice blocking the cave (freaking her out of course). Lol

Later today, I most likely will make more charries too...

about a person running into ur thief, how about i make a charrie (if i dont have one already) that will just run into her in the castle but lets her go?