My own Zombie Story

[David]

I want people to critique my zombie story because i wanna know what I am doing well on and what I need work on. So yea. http://www.wattpad.com/story/1604357-...

[Robin]

Side note: I love Wattpad.

Anyway...Reading it.

[David]

Same here.
And thanks haha:D

[Robin]

I read the first chapter so far.
I liked the bit about Joe more than the bit about the government, but I understand why that explaining was necessary. I'm interested to keep reading, which is good 'cause I don't tend to read zombie stories.

{Just me being stupid and paranoid, but in case some kid stumbles upon this I gotta put a language warning.}

[David]

OK:P And thanks. And yea, the government kind of plays a role in the story somewhat.

[Kyra]

So far, I haven't been able to get very far. I intend to finish soon, but so far it's amazing.
I love the character development!!! Joe's relationships as of yet have been very clear, and the intent of the plot is sound. Also: very intriguing theme. Definitely a good read. XD

[David]

Thanks:D

[David]

How yall likin it??

[Robin]

It moves fast, which is nice. I'm looking forward to more.

[David]

Sweet:D