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tessa's eyes and she said,"what is it?" will sat up and told her," i have been meaning to tell you this for a while now i i dont want you to marry jem. i know its selfish of me but i want you and what i mean to say is i love you with all my heart but i want jem to be happy. so i went to magnus today and he said he will help me find the cure for jem. so do you want in?" tessa stared at will for a while and was speechless but after what felt like fifteen minutes she said in a hoarse voice," why dont you tell jem and let him in? look he is dying and i want him to die happy i love him and i will marry him but i ...
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want him to know the truth." Tessa said, calmly."No." Will shook his head. "He wont allow it. He wont let us go."
Tessa nodded, "Okay, I don't want him to die. I'll help."
"alright first,don't tell jem about this ok''said Will. "don't tell me what'' said Jem.he was by the door looking curious.Will panic.what will he say, he thought.
"Nothing." Tessa smiled, and Jem didn't look worried at all. They moved closer to each other, and Will cleared his throat loudly enough to be heard.
"This is my room." He said, raising his eyebrows.
"sorry"they both said together.they looked at each other and smiled.Will feels awkward at the moment."me and jem will be else where,if you need us let us know "said Tessa. "lets go Jem"she said.she grab jem's hand and off they left. smiling,laughing,blushing,and kissing Will thought in his head after they left.Will feel a pang of jealously. He's the one who should be marying Tessa,the one to make her smile and laugh,but then he thought about Jem cause he deserves to be happy and he is happy with Tessa, he thought again.
He got up from his bed, he hadn't been bothered getting up when Tessa was here-but he should have. They had to leave soon, before Jem caught on.
tessa lead jem into her room and closed the door. jem took this as his que and leaned in and kissed her putting one hand o her neck and the other on her waist so gently that tessa sighed but she pulled away very reluctantly and said,"listen Jem i know i promised will but i need to tell you and you have to hear me out. will, magnus, and i are going on a little journey possibly around the whole world to ummm find the cure that will heal you and dont argue you cant come please just trust me you are not able to.""are you calling me too weak to not even come and protect you? as your husband technically i will not allow this.............
ps: will in the meantime went back to magnus's. PLEASE CONTINUE
Tessa gazed deep into his intense eyes. "Yes Will?" she asked. Will scrambled for words. "I-I-I..." he stammered. Tessa laughed the laugh that Will adored. "I think this is a first! Will, the smooth talker, the silver tounge! Lost for words."
please go back to the story georgia and allow me to continue so jem continues to say, "as your husband technically i will not allow this mission. its hopeless. but i think i have been needing the drug way less these days because i am happy in love with you and that is the only thing stronger and more powerful then any sickness curse. please don't go." tessa stared in jem's eyes with such intensity and then she swooped forward and hugged him. "jem, you are my husband but you do not control my choices i have to go i... i want to go with Will and magnus to do anything for you i will go completely out of my way to make sure you live a long life. i promise it that you will be with me in that life", tessa whispered in his ear. she then put her lips on his and kissed him. tessa dug her hands in his shoulders and jem responded by pulling her in closer and feeling his hand through her beautiful brown curls. after what felt like 1001 nights passing they pulled apart and tessa headed to will's room only to find........
I JUsT LOVE TO WRITE SO I MAY AS WELL CONTNUE only to find he wasnt there but there was a note that read 'i went to magnus's if tessa is reading this please join us on the journey' tessa quickly ran out of will's room only to bump into cecily.........
(If you just waited a little while longer... :)Her arms were crossed across her chest, her eyebrows raised,
"So, Where do you think your going?" She asked her
Tessa fumbled for words. and Cecily sighed, "Will already told me. He's at Magnus's now-If your looking for him."
Tessa nodded, "Yes. I know, i was just heading over there..."
She trailed off and Cecily got out of her way. "Just go."
((Did Tessa and Jem already get married?..i thought they were only engaged))"Wait!" called Cecily.
"Yes" said Tessa, turning to face the younger girl.
"I've seen how you are with my brother Tessa." she said in an accusing tone.
"How do you mean?" asked Tessa,feeling flustered all of a sudden.
"It seems you've given Will hope to believe that there may be a possibility for you two but at the same time you call Jem your husband. That's not very ladylike is it" asked Cecily folding her arms in front of her.
"I've told Will that I love Jem!" explained Tessa.
"Why" questioned Cecily "because you pity Jem for being ill? is that why you're breaking my brother's heart?"
tessa was out of words and her stomach dropped and her head swarmed with confusion and then anger came out,"look i love jem and i admit there was a time iloved will but i am an engaged woman and being a faithful wife i am going to find a cure for my husband,cecily."
"just go"said Cecily. In Tessa mind she thought "is it true,that I only love jem cause he's Ill or because I really love him"she thought. Then she thought about Will,does she really have feelings for him,she sigh at the thought.later she found will and mangus . "are you guys ready"she asks. They nod there heads in response ,"alright then let go"she said. Like 2 h. Later of walking in the woods it was dark so they slept on the ground but Tessa couldn't sleep.(please make a romantic moment for Will and. Tessa )
Tessa heard a sound at the edge of the clearing and turned to see the last of Will heading into the darkness of the woods. Immediately she got up to follow him, surprised at her desire to know what inspired his leave. She follows him and watches as he merely walks in silence. Soon the urge to speak with Will alone that has been nagging at her heart for too long becomes too much. She rushes out and touches his shoulder, "Will.."
She didn't have time to finish her sentence. At that moment a werewolf leaped from behind the trees and bit into Tessa's throat. Will gave a cry of rage and pain and hurled himself at the creature. He stabbed the wolf in the eye's. The wolf howled in agony and threw Will off his shoulders. Tessa made gurgled noises as the blood pooled out of her throat and onto the grass beside her. Will stuggled off of the ground only to be knoked back down by the werewolf. The werewolf towered over Will, his breath hot on Will's face. Before the creature could do more harm, Will reached for his blade and stabbed it in the throat. The werewolf gave one last howl and then fell limp on Will. Will pushed the creature off of him. He struggled to get up then made his way toward Tessa.
tessa, will, and magnus packed three bags filled with a few extra clothes, knives, swords, water, food, and a bit of money each. and they started their journey. "i was thinking about this and i think our first stop should be to china in the beijing institute and around it. we should go to start of the problem to find it," will said quietly. tessa answered,"your right but how to get there any ideas?" "how about a magic carpet ride? i know it is a bit odd but i invented it and put a wee bit of magic in it or a ship ride.." suggested magnus but that just ended tessa in hysterical giggles one that will adored. so they hiked for three hours to the nearest harbour. "i ll go ask some people when is the next ship to china leaving and you guys settle a shelter in those woods nearby ok?'" said magnus. will and tessa were alone. "so lets start then shall we," said will. just as they finished making a decent shelter thunder roared and rain fell hard. both of them ran inside soaking wet. tessa shivered in her light spring dress."hear let me warm you up take my extra coat," will added as he moved closer towwards and wrapped his brown coat around her. "thank you," tessa whispered through the shivering. "have you thought about what i said before that maybe you could you know...," said will. "will i bumped into cecily and we had a conversation about me breaking your heart? but you broke mine first with what you said and i just get more confused day by day. after everything we have been through together and know i am engaged to jem....." but tessa was interuppted as will swooped down and kissed her cheek. blood rushed through her and she just loved the feel of his full lips on her skin that somehow a kiss on the cheek wasn't enough. surprising even herself she pounced on will knocking him down and kissed him hard. the coat fell off but she was warmed enough being so close to will literally attached on him as they kissed mouth on mouth. tessa felt fire boil her insides up and her heart was hammering harder than ever before. will held her tightly but then pushed her off. "tess, i cant believe i am saying this but you are engaged to jem and seccretly your kissing me behind his back. you need to decide now who you want to be with because i cant have a two timer. but i love you even though you pick jem because yeah you will make him happy in his long life. "but i thought this is what you wanted. i came on this journey to. i am in love with you will i have been secretly but i pushed my feeling back for jem whom i do love. but as it says in the book "there is a difference of being in love and loving someone." please give me a chance. will stared in her gray eyes and just leaned in close enough to his nose touch hers when magnus appeared with the news......
what happened to the part when Tessa got bitten by the wolf part?
where did this come from?
MAC wrote: ""Wake up!...Wake up!.. you're having a nightmare!" said Jane, Will's Mum. "Your Dad's up at the crack of dawn, and the last thing he needs is you sleep talking all night. Who the hell's Tessa anywa..."Why?!
Marie wrote: "She didn't have time to finish her sentence. At that moment a werewolf leaped from behind the trees and bit into Tessa's throat. Will gave a cry of rage and pain and hurled himself at the creature...."(Lets just go back to the werewolf part. I'm sick of this randomness.)
"Tessa? Tess. Look at me." Will said as Tessa struggled to breathe. Will stood up "Magnus! MAGNUS!!" Suddenly Magnus appeared, he took one look at Tessa and kneeled down next to her.
Magnus snap his fingers and the wound was gone but Tessa faint. "she will be alright,but she does need to rest"said Magnus. Will was so scared that he almost lost her. he set her down and hold her hand.
"I'll have to make a portal for us to get to the Beijing Institute quicker, it's clearly quite dangerous out here" said Magnus."Good." said Will getting up. Because Tess doesn't look to well" he looked down worriedly at Tessa's pale face as he helped her up.
Magnus created a portal and they went through it.
will was frightened. tessa just had to be okay or he would rather die. the portal got them through but it had drained alot of magnus's energy. "come on we'll get her to the institute hospital wing. there was a short chinese woman who looked surprised and yelled something in chinese but then saw tessa and directed them to set her down. she then spoke in chinese which magnus surprrrisingly understood by saying,"she does not look good i am afraid to say she might......
"die'' said Magnus sadly. "Tessa won't die" said Will crying. Tessa put her hand on his forehead. "don't need to worry,I just need some rest'' said Tessa.she looked pale and exhausted. Will couldn't loose Tessa ,and not now.he hold her hand. "don't leave me Tessa" said Will.he was still crying.
(please don't make her die)
magnus then spoke after the long silence,"there might be a way to cure that werewolf bite if tessa is able to that is. tessa you are a shapeshifter, if you turn into the werewolf who bit you then you can get that out of your system with a little help of my magic. it mostly might work." will looked sympathetically at her as he firmly grasped tessa's hand then kneeled down and whispered in her ear,"you have to be strong enough to try this please i believe in you and if you dont live to see the end then nor will i. i love you and i cant live without you." will then butterfly kissed her forehead in stepped back........
Then the little Chinese woman shooed him out and shut the door firmly behind him.
Magnus sadly smiled at Tessa. "Ready?" He asked
She nodded slightly.
(I'm not good with this kind of stuff...)
I had to get out,having will tell her he was still in love with was to overwhelming.Will called out Tessa r you ok you look pale.Im fine just going to bed.I walked out of the study then ran to the bridge to calm myself down.Sitting down on the side if the bridge so lost in though i didn't see the magister until he was putting his hand over my mouth.He was facing me with my back pressed against the bridge with my arms pinned behind me and he had a hand over my mouth and the other on the small of my back that sent chills up and down my spine. He said if i fought him he would knock me out would be dragged back to his house by a clockwork.but i wasn't letting him get me without a fight.I kicked him right in crowned jewel.He smiled icily a me and said i have been kicked there so many times it down hurt so you lose.Now your mine your stupid shadow hunters cant get u back with there little metal swords and fancy daggers.I started to squirm and wiggle the Magister smiled and took a needle out at put on my arm.The magister said any last words until u black out.Then he pushed down on syringe my knees bucked and the madister caught me and threw me over his shoulder and the i blacked out.
(Who is 'I'? What is happening! and could you please use Speech marks, they look like this "" See?)
(Who is the first person narrator?! is it Magnus?..I want to continue but I don't know who this is :S)Meanwhile at the Beijing Institute Will was feeling relieved that Tessa was in good hands. He decided to look around the intsitute.
"Excuse me" Will said, stopping a shadowhunter that was passing by.
"Yes" smiled the dark haired girl.
"My name is Will Herondale, from the London Institute-"
"Ah yes, welcome to our institute Mr Herondale!"
"Thank you." smiled Will shaking her hand.
"I wonder if you can direct me towards the library, my friend is quite unwell and I wanted to bring her some books in order to take her mind of the pain." explained Will as the girl nodded and started walking him in the direction of the institute library.
"Plus, I need to do some research on a Demon that killed my friend's parents and made him addicted to Yin Fen" added Will as they arrived at the entrance of the library.
"You mean Yanluo?" asked the girl fearfully.
"There are awful stories of how he tortured the inhabitants of the Shanghai institute" she said quietly "we still mourn for Mr and Mrs Carstairs who died".
"Yes." said Will bitterly. "and their son is my Parabatai. That is why we are here. I need to find a cure for my friend, Jem"
("i" is Will)"right this way"she said. i followed her in the hall.
when she opened the door,thousands of books everywhere.
"thank you" i said.this will take a while i thought.
(Please keep in the PoV. Otherwise, people get confused and nobody likes confusion...)Will was searching for some of Tessa's favorites when a scream rang out through the Institute. He tried to ignore it and kept grabbing books off the shelf.
Will later found out that the scream had come from the Chinese woman when she had found Tessa dead.
(WHAT??!! WHY ARE WE NOW KILLING TESSA??!!??!!)He took a closer look at the "dead" Tessa and realized that in was an automaton, from Mortmain. The reason that the Chinese woman thought Tessa was dead was that she had come in to check her heartbeat and she had none. Will quickly explained what had happened to her, or tried to. She couldn't understand a word he was saying, so Will called Magnus in and had him explain it.
(Why would someone randomly come in to check Tessa's heartbeat???)"I presume that you know that this is an automaton which vaguely resembles Tessa," said Magnus dryly.
"Of course I summoned you here to make jokes about who would want to imitate Tessa. The problem is, that whoever killed this automaton, wanted to kill the REAL Tessa." said Will. There was a tight, pinched look on his face.
Magnus paced around the room. "Well, it's pretty obvious that the Magister doesn't want Tessa killed."
"Yes, he wouldn't kill his future wife!" Will's face was changing colors, from pink to scarlet to beet red.
(Because she's sick? I don't know!! I had to make something up so Tessa wouldn't actually be dead and that was the best I could come up with, OK? Why is everyone a critic??!! (I'm not actually offended, I just like being overly dramatic because it occasionally confuses people and I enjoy confusing people...))
I dunno! Maybe Tessa's too important not to have her life checked on every 2 seconds or something, or maybe that's what people at that Institute randomly do, or maybe she likes screaming randomly so that people will check on her??? (random possibly confusing scenarios...)
Okay, back to the story."So," Magnus said rather too calmly, "Where is the real Tessa?"
"I dunno"said Will. then something clicked in his head,and the thinks he knows where Tessa . "follow me"said Will.
the magister had captured tessa and replaced her with an automaton. he had planned to................
(That went downhill fast)
yes it did baylie I QUIT BEING AN AUTHOR
(WWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY???????!!!!!!!!!???????!!!!!!! You're so awesome at it, though!!)
(thnak you clara you too maybe i might be reconsidering)so as will heard the scream he rushed back to the hospital wing and barged in through the doors and saw a very scary werewolf. then it transfromed into tessa. "you did it tessa do you feel alright?", will askd as he led her to a bed. "will.... thnak you for believing in me. but we dont have time for this. we have to go back to the roots in which jem was cursed to cure him so lets go. "but you just got bit by a werewolf you cant possibly be up to it," said will gently. "jem is running out of time i am fine," tessa replied and so they left and picked up magnus on their way as they got instructions from the chinese woman about where that monster lives and she then warned them to be careful.......
Alexia -Team Malec :) wrote: "Okay, back to the story."So," Magnus said rather too calmly, "Where is the real Tessa?""
(CAN YOU PLEASE GO ON with the story and stop changing things? What's this? First Tessa was an automaton and now she is changing into a werewolf?)
(I just go back where Will know where is Tessa)
Will go out of the Chinese Institute and Magnus follow him.
"Okay, when Tessa got the bite from the werewolf, he came to me and I tried to fight back to him but he was so strong, so when I killed him I go back to Tessa" Said Will trying to understand The Magister's Plans "I get it now, the werewolf was a distraction so he could take Tessa and replace her with an automaton, we have to go back to the woods. NOW"
Oh boy this is about to get interesting! This is so good!
"Ok, ok! Calm DOWN! We will get Tessa back, I assure you" Magnus exclaimed.But, as they rushed back to the woods to look for clues, Magnus stopped.
"Will, Will? What--"
Will was only half listening; but when he did not hear footsteps behind him he turned......
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