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Nov 15, 2012 04:55AM

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The first one will go between two sisters who play important roles for their own country. And it'll be chapter by chapter back and forth. They begin the book apart and around halfway through they'll meet up but as each situation arises it will be only from the perspective of the sister in control of the chapter - I don't want to bounce around because I HATE that when I'm reading.




Actually Alexa those POVs were one of the main reasons I was turned off of Clare's writing. I didn't think it worked at all and made the tone of the book entirely too disjointed. So when I'm giving an example for multiple POVs gone wrong I usually cite that book.
However with a book that has a highly conceptual style like World War Z the multiple first-hand accounts come together to form a nicely cohesive story.

I tried eliminating each characters POV and realized that if I did it would fundamentally change the story, so I think it has more to do with the purpose of a story. I am dealing with generation, gender, economic standing, and religious tolerance, so each of my POV's takes a strong stance for those areas. In a romance there are two people in love, so it makes sense to only have two.
It all depends on the scope of the story. Less is more, but you still need enough to give your story the perspective and voice to tell itself.

Just Joe wrote: "I have a war story with 20 main.....yeah.... Lol it's always like an onlooker( 3 rd omniscient if I'm remembering correctly) but I switch between different groups in almost every chapter. I'm at 40..."
I thought I was the only one that have 20+ characters for a story(stories).
I thought I was the only one that have 20+ characters for a story(stories).
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