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message 1: by ★Azhley★ (last edited Jan 09, 2009 08:18AM) (new)

★Azhley★ (azhlizzle) This is half of the prologue to me book. My friend and I are going to be working on it together. One chapter will be my point of veiw while the next chapter will be his. It is about this werewolf assassination corporation they kidnapped us, trained us and brain washed us. We are from different corporations and we both get the same assignment that’s how we meet. It’s kind of like a love story but not really. However, this is only a rough draft prologue so let me know what you think. We haven’t done his POV prologue yet....:::::

Laemse:

I opened my eyes slightly the room was too bright; I was unaware of where I was or even who I was. I heard muffled voices in the same room with me. I tried to move my arms but they were tied down; I tried to move my legs but those too were tied. Trying to remain calm I opened my eyes all the way and observed my location. I was in a lab of some sort there was lab tables, testing equipment, and many other people like me there but they were dead. I arched my back and winced in pain as it crackled under my skin. I shifted my weight slightly trying to figure out what I was laying on. It was hard and very uncomfortable. Was I lying on a testing table? My heart raced and my lungs ached my body was tender. I saw two pale guys standing at the end of where I was laying. One was tall, thin and had many wrinkles. He had a large bald spot. The other one was short, chubby, and looked quite young. He had locks of flowing brown hair.
“Ah Miss Laemse you are awake!” The young fat one exclaimed excitedly. I cocked my head to the side to look at him and a pain shot through it. I yelped, my neck was so tender. I shot my eyes to the scientist wanting to kill them. What were they doing to me?
“I am Dr. Still; this is my partner Dr. Goldman.” The skinny one told me smiling. I opened my mouth to say something but I couldn’t find my voice. Dr. Still held an empty syringe in his hand which made me nervous.
“This is werewolf Dna we have injected into your blood stream.” He told me holding it up for me to see he must have seen me eye balling it. Suddenly, my body felt as though it was going to burst I screamed gritting my teeth as I felt my burning body change into a beast.
“You will be trained to be an assassin; you now belong to us.” Dr. Goldman told me talking over my screams



message 2: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller No Choice
Taken
Surprise, Surprise

Idk... i rly suck at titles.


message 3: by ★Azhley★ (new)

★Azhley★ (azhlizzle) lol thank you anyways... I am Thinking Unbroken butr i am not sure...


xXRossiya AruXx (biggestanimegeek) I DO AT LOT WORSE.whenever I write a story, i usually DON'T title it or even FINISH it.


message 5: by ★Azhley★ (new)

★Azhley★ (azhlizzle) lol wow i am writing like 4 books and i'm not even close to finishing them but i know i need to soon


message 6: by Jade (new)

Jade I like what Paige aka Tink said, Taken or No Choice.


ⓘsⓐbεℓℓⓐ Here are mine:

1)Experiment Werewolve
2)The Doctors' Little Beast (My fave)
3)Beast Within


message 8: by Jade (new)

Jade those are good!


message 9: by Eric▲ (new)

Eric▲ | 5 comments deadly operation?


message 10: by ★Azhley★ (new)

★Azhley★ (azhlizzle) oh cool thank you bunches those are cool XD


message 11: by Jade (new)

Jade Is it on goodreads? If it is, what is da link?


message 13: by Jade (new)

Jade Thanks! I am so excited to read it!


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