Feedback, Please

[Paul]

Folks,
This is my first book. I didn't tell anyone when I was writing it and other than my son, no one read it before it was published. I am dying for some feedback. I think it's not too bad, but I've read it so many times while writing and editing, I'm sick of it. I can't tell anymore. I would welcome any comments, good or bad. I'm working on the second in this series and anything you say could help me with that one. Thanks.

Paul Simione