Unpredictable (poem, appreciate feedback)

[Datminv]

Wow... that was really strong. I don't pretend to be an expert on poetry or anything, but that was a very moving poem.

[[deleted user]]

really nice, i have to say i like the bonus poem better, but they were both AWESOME! (can you check out my poem, words?)

[Emma]

Amazing poem/poems! It seems to make more sense as two poems, because it would kind of break off into a different stanza that would be too confusing.
STILL JUST SUCH A GOOD POEM/POEMS!!!!