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Writer of the Month > Tink's Loft of Passionate Daydreaming- Get Your Head In The Clouds

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message 1101: by [deleted user] (new)

*leaves the room*


message 1102: by Daisy (last edited Jun 28, 2009 07:25PM) (new)

Daisy | 1803 comments *takes out vodoo doll that says 'poeple who voted for Kris' and starts pioking it with a pin obsessivly*


message 1103: by [deleted user] (new)

You wouldn't seriously?????


message 1104: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 1803 comments what?


message 1105: by [deleted user] (new)

*runs*


message 1106: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 1803 comments YOU VOTED FOR KRIS WHAT KIND OF PERSON ARE YOU! *scary ligths and smoke fill the room*Jk...but still...Adam is way bettert


message 1107: by [deleted user] (new)

No, Kris is better. . . okay I'm done. I do NOT want to get into this. :D


message 1108: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 1803 comments lol he he


message 1109: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 1803 comments it's okay I already have what's suipposed to happen recoreded *plays catfight argument tape so that it's broadcasted everywhere*


message 1110: by [deleted user] (new)

ha ha ha . . . *gets scared* :D


message 1111: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 1803 comments yeah..making spectacles is not my thing


message 1112: by [deleted user] (new)

lolz


message 1113: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 1803 comments yep


message 1114: by Julie (new)

Julie | 465 comments Hey Tink!

I haven't dropped by in a while! I hope all is well! How's the Soulfire editing going? Is school out for summer yet?


Pan! It's so good to see you! BTW - Bruno went missing a while ago, if you see him, could you tell him that I miss him, and want him to come home?

:D


message 1115: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments LOL GDBS and Annie Mae. You guys are hilarious.

Julie:

Hey, Jules! All's good! I've actually finished Phase 1 of editing, which means I went through and edited it. Now, I'm getting someone else (aka Mom) to go through and edit.

YES! Thank God. Although, summer camp isn't too different from school... JK It's way more fun. :)

Pan: *sniffs, then nods head in agreement*




message 1116: by [deleted user] (new)

ha ha


message 1117: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments :) I like ya, even though you voted for Kris. *grumbles, then beams forgiving smile at the world*

Wow, that was cheesy.


message 1118: by [deleted user] (new)

Lol Paige. I still luv ya :D Even though you voted for Adam. :D LOL


message 1119: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments LOL :)


message 1120: by Julie (new)

Julie | 465 comments ♥ Tink ♥ (Paige) wrote: "LOL GDBS and Annie Mae. You guys are hilarious.

Julie:

Hey, Jules! All's good! I've actually finished Phase 1 of editing, which means I went through and edited it. Now, I'm getting someone els..."


YAY! I'm happy phase one of editing is finished! Yeah, mom is always a good place to start. If you have any teachers, or aunts, or cousins you trust, they may be a good source too.

I'm glad camp is going well too, and more fun than school!

Here's to a happy writing day!






message 1121: by Andrea (new)

Andrea | 620 comments Glad you're enjoying camp Tink. And great work on the editing!


message 1122: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 1803 comments *leaves note in large box with a finger print lock, so if Paul comes to visit he can't read it. In the box there is a bar of chocolate too*

Hey guys,

I'm really bored and I wondered what would happen if I left a baby at Paul's place. So that's what I'm going to do! It's a robot but a very sophisticated robot that with the help of magic can do all that a human baby can do as well as grow up. I haven't created multiples for fear of a Rozen Maiden reaction. Which has happened before when multiple dolls have been created with magic.My great great grandmother made multiples of these dolls and they will kill anything and anyone denying the dolls of attention from there orderer.

No people were harmed in the making of this letter



message 1123: by Paige (last edited Jul 03, 2009 08:51AM) (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments Hey everybody.. writing to you all from the lovely heights of Mammoth Mt.... Thank God for Wi-Fi!

Julie & Andrea

Yeah, camp is cool. It's good for me too, which Mom likes.

Yeah, I'm happy about the editing, but I'm also kind of pissed at my Mom...
I printed out the first edited Soulfire like she asked (she doesn't like to edit on the computer) and put it in a binder with a cover and everything so she could start editing it. Then we had a 6 hour car ride to Mammoth (nearby mountains where I'm writing this from), I thought for sure it was the perfect opportunity to read/revise it, and she'd totally be all over it.

And what did she do? She spent the 3 hours that she wasn't driving sleeping + just sitting there. I was all, what the hell? Then I snapped at her about it and she yelled at me about "attitude" and being "overly bossy".

Which is totally hypocritical, considering the fact that she got mad at me when she asked me what I was working on, and I said editing, and she said [and I quote:] "Why didn't you come to me for help?"

GRRR. I can't win.

And, that binder is currently sitting on the coffee table where I strategically placed it, untouched. GAH.

Okay, I'm done ranting now.


GreenDaisy Black Stem

*nibbles on chocolate*

I'll be staying away from Paul's cubi, then.... This seems like a bad plan, but okay...



message 1124: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 1803 comments lol well enjoy the choclate


message 1125: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments Thanks... :)


message 1126: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 1803 comments welcome

I wanted you to know cause it's not real so if it dies don't be sad...it's reallly cute!


message 1127: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments LOL That's good to know. Paul's cubical is kind of a deathtrap... the baby should watch out for trapdoors!


message 1128: by [deleted user] (new)

Hey Paige, guess what I did the same with my mom too! I printed out my entire story for her to read, and she's only read the first page. We went on the longest trip ever, and all she did was sleep, and she hasn't touched it. And I mean, two days ago, when I went on a 7 hour trip, she didn't even bring it. It makes me mad, My dad's the only one that's read it, and he's only gotten to chapter two out of 46. I feel your pain. :D


message 1129: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments LOL Well, my mom read the first version, but now she won't read the edited version, which I've been working on for ages! My dad hasn't read any of it... not a single word.

Grrrrr.


message 1130: by [deleted user] (new)

Sad, parents are just that way you know?


message 1131: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments Yah... they try to be supportive, but sometimes I think they just don't get it.


message 1132: by [deleted user] (last edited Jul 03, 2009 09:06AM) (new)

Really, they don't. I tried to explain to my mom about the whole publishing stuff, and she looked at me, and said, "You need to realize Cali, that it may take years for someone to accept your book. Sometimes you need to live in reality, and stop dreaming every once in awhile."
That sure left a damper on me.


message 1133: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 1803 comments I know my parents don't///They couldn't find time to read my picture book in second grade! But I have a hard time letting people read stuff anyway...I apparently judge myself to harshly according to my mother.


message 1134: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 1803 comments Annie Mae wrote: "Really, they don't. I tried to explain to my mom about the whole publishing stuff, and she looked at me, and said, "You need to realize Cali, that it may take years for someone to accept your book...."

WTF IS WRONG WITH YOUR MOTHER@@!!!!!!


sorry....


message 1135: by [deleted user] (new)

She was angry that night I guess, seeing that her dad had died the day prior. So yeah, I'm just assuming it was that. :D


message 1136: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments Ugh. Do they not understand?


message 1137: by [deleted user] (new)

Seriously!


message 1138: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 1803 comments They don't!! It's mean!!!


message 1139: by Julie (new)

Julie | 465 comments Annie Mae wrote: "Really, they don't. I tried to explain to my mom about the whole publishing stuff, and she looked at me, and said, "You need to realize Cali, that it may take years for someone to accept your book...."

Ouch, I'm sorry to hear that Cali.

As an adult though, I will say one thing. It's good to have a real-world plan, and a creative plan. The real-world plan pays the bills, and the creative plan is for fun,keeps you 'sane', and maybe one day WILL pay off. It's wonderful to have BOTH. Your mom is probably concerned with you having a "real world" plan.

Here's the thing though: you are young, and it's summer. WRITE! You have the rest of your life to work, and be responsible. Having your head in the clouds in the summer is wonderful! (I'm trying to set aside as much "head in the clouds" time as possible!)


message 1140: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 1803 comments I WANNA BE A TEACHER WHEN I GROW UP!!!!!!!


message 1141: by Julie (new)

Julie | 465 comments ♥ Tink ♥ (Paige) wrote: "Hey everybody.. writing to you all from the lovely heights of Mammoth Mt.... Thank God for Wi-Fi!

Julie & Andrea

Yeah, camp is cool. It's good for me too, which Mom likes.

Yeah, I'm happy abou..."


Hey Tink!

It's still great that you are at the editing stage! Give your mom time, she'll come around. And think about a few other people to ask too. Sometimes it's hard to get criticism from ones parents.





message 1142: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 1803 comments * sits*


message 1143: by Julie (last edited Jul 03, 2009 11:42AM) (new)

Julie | 465 comments GreenDaisy BlackStem wrote: "I WANNA BE A TEACHER WHEN I GROW UP!!!!!!!"

Haha! Go for it! I will say...it's HARD work. You get paid for the 8 hours you are actually teaching...not for all the preparation, and grading, and other committee tasks that are also an assumed part of the job. Then again, no teacher is in it for the money. :D It is definitely a rewarding career. It feels good to know I make (or try my darnedest) a difference.



message 1144: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 1803 comments okay.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................


message 1145: by Andrea (new)

Andrea | 620 comments ♥ Tink ♥ (Paige) wrote: "Hey everybody.. writing to you all from the lovely heights of Mammoth Mt.... Thank God for Wi-Fi!

Julie & Andrea

Yeah, camp is cool. It's good for me too, which Mom likes.

Yeah, I'm happy abou..."


I know how you feel, Tink. I gave my mom a copy of my edited manuscript to read about 6 months ago, and I'm still waiting....


message 1146: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments Agh, don't tell me that! :) :) :)


message 1147: by Andrea (new)

Andrea | 620 comments LOL sorry


message 1148: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments HEY EVERYONE...

Since I have no idea when I'm going to finish editing Soulfire *cough cough MOM cough cough* I've started the sequel! YAY! I'll be posting updates frequently.


message 1149: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments July 4th, 2009
WC: 952 words (The prologue + Chapter One)
Story: ????? (Currently Unnamed- Soulfire Sequel)
Total for this story: 952 words (Prologue+ One Chapter)
Goal: Achieved!
Link:

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...



message 1150: by Julie (new)

Julie | 465 comments Yay! I'm glad that you'll keep on truckin' anyway!

BTW, I never finished Soulfire, is it posted somewhere? I think I tried to find it but was missing. If possible, it would be great to finish Soulfire before checking out the sequel.

Oh, and I've got an idea to help you mom start the story. If you see she's, say, doing the laundry say, "Mom, I can do that, if it gives you more time to read Soulfire."

Then again, you may have already tried that. It's just a thought.


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