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Character Development: Working In Complicated Issues.
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Coolkidrox123 {The Shadow} wrote: "julius!! check nmy chaarcters too!"
I am, I am. You have quite a few.
I am, I am. You have quite a few.
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Julius wrote: "Coolkidrox123 {The Shadow} wrote: "tara
Nickname: When she was a dark warrior, she was called Tal
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Power: Earth
Habits: Acts like a boy and has a habit of seeing herself as ..."
she dresses up as a boy and becomes a Dark warrior until she is discovere dna dshipped off to mortem castle but SWhite warriors killed her escorts and captured her and took her to vitam castles
dark warriors: on the good side
white: bad
their like knioghts
Nickname: When she was a dark warrior, she was called Tal
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Power: Earth
Habits: Acts like a boy and has a habit of seeing herself as ..."
she dresses up as a boy and becomes a Dark warrior until she is discovere dna dshipped off to mortem castle but SWhite warriors killed her escorts and captured her and took her to vitam castles
dark warriors: on the good side
white: bad
their like knioghts
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Julius wrote: "Coolkidrox123 {The Shadow} wrote: "Eric
Nickname: none
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Power: trees
Habits: Runs his hands through his hair.
Description: Brown hair, Brown eyes. Tall, broad shoulders.
Perso..."
he did
Nickname: none
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Power: trees
Habits: Runs his hands through his hair.
Description: Brown hair, Brown eyes. Tall, broad shoulders.
Perso..."
he did
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i ahvent put the histry there yet cause im lazy and the 4 have amnesia
kyle, neal, bianca and eric all coem from teh future. they have no memeorie at all
kyle, neal, bianca and eric all coem from teh future. they have no memeorie at all
Coolkidrox123 {The Shadow} wrote: "liam
Nickname: nope
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Power: Light
Habits: Acts like a parent and leader, takes charge
Description: Black , long hair, Black eyes. Tall, fit.
Personality: He is always tthe lea..."
Maybe he failed at something in some point of his life, and has ever since been striving to prove himself in any way he knows how. After failing whatever it was, he became very stern, but he remains uncertain as to many of his choices. But because he is so stern and level-headed, people tend to listen to him. (He would need a good girl. A girl who would encourage him, and one he could protect.)
Nickname: nope
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Power: Light
Habits: Acts like a parent and leader, takes charge
Description: Black , long hair, Black eyes. Tall, fit.
Personality: He is always tthe lea..."
Maybe he failed at something in some point of his life, and has ever since been striving to prove himself in any way he knows how. After failing whatever it was, he became very stern, but he remains uncertain as to many of his choices. But because he is so stern and level-headed, people tend to listen to him. (He would need a good girl. A girl who would encourage him, and one he could protect.)
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liam: avalon avalon - rightful ruler of ilca dont worry, he got someone
liam is the son of gwidon 9the evil ruler) but his mum, when he was 3, snuggled him out of the castle and gave Roald (the leader of elementum/teacer) to take care of him. He is the oldest memebr of elememntu,m
liam is the son of gwidon 9the evil ruler) but his mum, when he was 3, snuggled him out of the castle and gave Roald (the leader of elementum/teacer) to take care of him. He is the oldest memebr of elememntu,m
Coolkidrox123 {The Shadow} wrote: "Sophia.....or a more medical name!!
Nickname: Shoph, Shophie
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Power: Ice
Habits: Twirls her hair around her finger
Description: Raven curly hair, green-yellow eyes
Personali..."
I would go with something more like Sariel or Rania instead of Sophia. She just might be the girl that Liam needs. She would wear dreadlocks. (After all, dreads are a warm hairstyle and her ice powers would be pretty cold.) Perhaps her history is that she used to live in the far ice-heaths of the north with her family, or mentor what have you, and gets embroiled in the happenings of things because she devolopes feelings for Liam.
Nickname: Shoph, Shophie
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Power: Ice
Habits: Twirls her hair around her finger
Description: Raven curly hair, green-yellow eyes
Personali..."
I would go with something more like Sariel or Rania instead of Sophia. She just might be the girl that Liam needs. She would wear dreadlocks. (After all, dreads are a warm hairstyle and her ice powers would be pretty cold.) Perhaps her history is that she used to live in the far ice-heaths of the north with her family, or mentor what have you, and gets embroiled in the happenings of things because she devolopes feelings for Liam.
Coolkidrox123 {The Shadow} wrote: "liam: avalon avalon - rightful ruler of ilca dont worry, he got someone
liam is the son of gwidon 9the evil ruler) but his mum, when he was 3, snuggled him out of the castle and gave Roald (the le..."
Ah, I see. That makes it different if they are all from the furture.
liam is the son of gwidon 9the evil ruler) but his mum, when he was 3, snuggled him out of the castle and gave Roald (the le..."
Ah, I see. That makes it different if they are all from the furture.
Coolkidrox123 {The Shadow} wrote: "Julius wrote: "Coolkidrox123 {The Shadow} wrote: "Alexos
Nickname: Ally, Al, Alex. Lexi, Alexi
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Power: Water
Habits: Always touches her necklace that was given to her by her..."
Why? Well, Alexis just doesn't sound very medieval. Maybe Alya or Alir or something. Just a suggestion. :P
Nickname: Ally, Al, Alex. Lexi, Alexi
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Power: Water
Habits: Always touches her necklace that was given to her by her..."
Why? Well, Alexis just doesn't sound very medieval. Maybe Alya or Alir or something. Just a suggestion. :P
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yeha
sophia is 14, liam is 18... liam is destined to be with avalon. in teh 2nd book (the future) its about their decendannt ^_^.
sophia's history:
her dad died of a desease, her brother got taken to be a dark warrior, she lived poor on teh streets. she makes her way across ilca to get to a better place.
ignore their history
sophia is 14, liam is 18... liam is destined to be with avalon. in teh 2nd book (the future) its about their decendannt ^_^.
sophia's history:
her dad died of a desease, her brother got taken to be a dark warrior, she lived poor on teh streets. she makes her way across ilca to get to a better place.
ignore their history
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Julius wrote: "Coolkidrox123 {The Shadow} wrote: "Julius wrote: "Coolkidrox123 {The Shadow} wrote: "Alexos
Nickname: Ally, Al, Alex. Lexi, Alexi
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Power: Water
Habits: Always touches her ne..."
only problem with that is id forget that name ^_^
Nickname: Ally, Al, Alex. Lexi, Alexi
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Power: Water
Habits: Always touches her ne..."
only problem with that is id forget that name ^_^
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Coolkidrox123 {The Shadow} wrote: "tara
Nickname: When she was a dark warrior, she was called Tal
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Power: Earth
Habits: Acts like a boy and has a habit of seeing herself as a boy: example: “Girls are so stupi..."
How about she develops a crush on someone? Perhaps, an enemy?
Nickname: When she was a dark warrior, she was called Tal
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Power: Earth
Habits: Acts like a boy and has a habit of seeing herself as a boy: example: “Girls are so stupi..."
How about she develops a crush on someone? Perhaps, an enemy?
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hmmm.... havent thought up a crush for her.
i got:
Liam - Avalon
Kyle - Sophia
Neal - Rachel
neal dies.
i got:
Liam - Avalon
Kyle - Sophia
Neal - Rachel
neal dies.
You could make her have a crush on someone who is already crushing on someone else, and her to him.
Julius wrote: "Coolkidrox123 {The Shadow} wrote: "julius!! check nmy chaarcters too!"
I am, I am. You have quite a few."
Yes. Yes, she does. *scroll scroll*
I am, I am. You have quite a few."
Yes. Yes, she does. *scroll scroll*
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.........tara....hmm... i know!! she has a crush on one of the warriors she worked with and they meet up again!!
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*shrug*
but thhe thing is its gonna be confusing.:
book 1: the past after the 4 came
book 2: the future where the 4 gets sent back, the unchanged future
book 3: the future after the 4 change the past
book 4: the past if the 4 hadn't come and the past of book 2's future
but thhe thing is its gonna be confusing.:
book 1: the past after the 4 came
book 2: the future where the 4 gets sent back, the unchanged future
book 3: the future after the 4 change the past
book 4: the past if the 4 hadn't come and the past of book 2's future
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Hahaha. Anyway, sorry I didn't reply earlier. :) plus, you seems to ALWAYS be on, but that is to be expected! ;D
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Coolkidrox123 {The Unicorn} wrote: "cats.....dont acutally exist in ilca
well... she gets all stubborn and a little bit like a warrior if she wants to"
Oh. Then again, hates cats is a bad idea..
Not that I was actually serious about the cat thing...
well... she gets all stubborn and a little bit like a warrior if she wants to"
Oh. Then again, hates cats is a bad idea..
Not that I was actually serious about the cat thing...
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Maybe there can be cat-like animals but are not related to cats at all and are viscious. And their species are called Cats
Coolkidrox123 {The Unicorn} wrote: "lol....the act thing wouldnt work cause there are no cats in ilca...maybe in the future story!"
Hmmm, maybe! ^_^
Hmmm, maybe! ^_^
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...............there are no domestic animals in ilca apart from farm animals (not including dogs) and horses...gosh...i need to put a farm on ilca!!!! hmmm..where should the farm be located?
On a luxurious cliff overhanging a endless black chasm deep down into the earth to the never-ending levels of hell. :D
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hmm.....iesha...smart!!! and it'd woork since ther eis a volcano adn land is particularly furtile near volcanos!!
Nickname: Ally, Al, Alex. Lexi, Alexi
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Power: Water
Habits: Always touches her necklace that was given to her by her mum when she i..."
why?