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message 151: by Agony (new)

Agony | 124 comments suddenly, I was jolted back as something shoved me behind it.


message 152: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
I let out a yell of terror as I was pulled back, back away from the fowl beast.


message 153: by Agony (new)

Agony | 124 comments the beast tried to move closer but the thing infront of me stood its ground. I quickly strained my eyes to see the creature that stood gaurd, it was not human.


message 154: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
"Just what do you think you're doing, Cirus?" the second beast rapped out in a raspy voice, the voice a lot more smoother than the first's.


message 155: by Agony (new)

Agony | 124 comments for a moment, a silence passed that seemed to last an eternity. Finaly, the first beast spoke. "what does it look like?" he snarled sarcasticly.


message 156: by Agony (new)

Agony | 124 comments A raspy growl rose from his throat.


 ♕ ❤  ♕ Princess pink diamonds posh bird LINZY.x.♕ ❤ ♕ (marilyngoodreadscom) | 337 comments Mod
His beastly eyes staring menacingly.


message 158: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
"Don't try to stop me, brother," said the first, "not this time."


message 159: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (last edited Dec 13, 2013 04:23AM) (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
"Does it look like I'm going to tempt it, brother, my pal?" the other said in a calmly fashion, all anger hidden under a thoroughly cold layer; although he looked calm, he was inwardly boiling over with rage as he asked, "So, what were you planning to do with him, anyway?"


message 160: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
"I'm going to tell him the truth, you fool!"


message 161: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
"Th-The truth about what?!" I managed to (manly) squeaked out, not sure if they had heard me.


message 162: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (last edited Jun 20, 2014 07:07PM) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
This brought both of their attention back to me, and each suddenly looked as though he would like nothing more than to do me great harm.


message 163: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
I backed away in alarm, fumbling behind me in an attempt to get up without taking my eyes off of those terrifying beasts.


message 164: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
"I've got a better idea, brother," said the first; "We'll fight for him."


message 165: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
"As tempting as it sounds to beat your face bloody against the wall, Aniki," the second one replied with a snapping of sharp teeth, "you know the Law forbids us, of the same Kin, from killing one another in conflict."


message 166: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
At this point, seizing my chance, I began to slowly back away from the two of them.


message 167: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
While the two monstrosities were arguing, I turned tail and ran as fast as I could.


message 168: by Nate (new)

Nate  | 98 comments Until I tripped over a decomposing carcass - to which species was unrecognizable - and face planted in the dirt.


message 169: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
I felt bile coat my tongue.


message 170: by Phoebe, TheInvincibleRabbit (new)

Phoebe (theneveronlinechick) | 3313 comments Mod
It tasted nasty and bitter; as I stumbled my way back up and ran past the horrendous sight, I dared not glance back.


message 171: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
It was then that I realized, with a sense of horror, that the two behemoths had given chase.


message 172: by Renee (new)

Renee Their growls came after me. Aggressive and sharp, full of menace.
I sprinted through the forest, breath coming in short bursts of fog and I ducked behind a tree, clambering up it into the highest branches. I slapped my palm over my mouth to mask the sound of my puffing.


message 173: by Julius, He Who Arises in Might (:D) (new)

Julius (bookseeker007) | 1781 comments Mod
Looking down I saw both of the creature pause at the trunk, snuffling slowly.


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