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Kjersti but you can call me Captain
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Jun 28, 2009 08:22AM

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BF: Hey are you still a clutz or did you go steady on me?
Me: Well I was falling off the bed and tried to grab the sheet and thn it came doown with me and I hhit the floor. OH and I was trying to leave but my knee hit the door which then hit me in the face.
BF: oh good I just had to make sure you didn't go all balanced on me! Ms. four days older than twelve

but i changed my mind and i am just going to start a new story... so yeah.
Billy maze the oxyclean guy is dead.
my blck hole hasnt been very busy because i dont really write everyday nor do i really enjoy counting all the words i've been writing when i do write.
but i have started my new story. its about a girl who was born to kill this guy but she ends up falling in love with him... and stuff. i know the begining and the very very basic middle and the end. i am very excited to start.
Sounds interesting! It'd be fun to read and see how it goes!

i need another phrase to reeplace 'but to'
like my sentence is something like: If you were born for a certain purpose, destined for a life that would save thousands, there would be no choice BUT TO follow the path on which you were placed. Right?
except BUT TO soundss so ... just crappy.
lol sometimes But To is necessary though. Idk what another word would be. :D
hmm, I'll see if I can find something. :D

anyway... i have an decision to make about my story and i would apprecite any opions that come along good or bad
Theres a girl who is abnormally strong mentally(can read minds and that kinda stuff) and she is an orphan running from something. My issue is deciding what she is running from. i have two choices right now.
1. Her parents familys are fighting against each other over the girl. Her dads family wants to use her to gain power, basically they are evil. Her mothers family wants to use her for good but they are a little nuts. Her parents tried to hide her but they were killed and she ran from the scene. Now her two familys are warring and chasing after her.
2. Her parents were killed in an "accident" and a lady who was exceptionall strong in head as well took her in and tried to teach her to be evil and use her head the wrong way. THe girl refuses and runs from the lady. Now the lady is chasing her saying that she will join forces with her or she will kill her(like she did her parents so she could get her).
THe family thing seems very cool, you know original, but also more than a little weird. And the evil lady seems not so original but makes more sense and would be easier to write. i just dont know. but the good thing is that i have plenty of time to think about it.

Hey Madeline,
Thanks so much for the lovely paper flowers. They really made my morning.
Oh, I have some fun news about the NaNoWriMo event. I have just become an official regional member of the NaNoWriMo team.
I think it is great that you are getting your thoughts together ahead of time for the event.
Thanks so much for the lovely paper flowers. They really made my morning.
Oh, I have some fun news about the NaNoWriMo event. I have just become an official regional member of the NaNoWriMo team.
I think it is great that you are getting your thoughts together ahead of time for the event.

i shall be sure to add you as a friend, eventually. the website takes forever ha.



*shouts at power cord*WHY DID YOU DO THIS TO ME NOW OF ALL TIMES?!?!?!?!?!?

ah... two weeks with no school
*voice in back of madeline's mind* and two more weeks in june...