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Kjersti but you can call me Captain | 250 comments *headtodesk* Madeline was one of the original members, you dork.


message 102: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 1803 comments if you knew me you wouldn't be suprised


message 103: by Daisy (new)

Daisy | 1803 comments see watch

BF: Hey are you still a clutz or did you go steady on me?
Me: Well I was falling off the bed and tried to grab the sheet and thn it came doown with me and I hhit the floor. OH and I was trying to leave but my knee hit the door which then hit me in the face.
BF: oh good I just had to make sure you didn't go all balanced on me! Ms. four days older than twelve


message 104: by Madeline (new)

Madeline sigh i meant 1351 words a day which i havent met once. sigh. again. the total goal is still 50,000.

but i changed my mind and i am just going to start a new story... so yeah.

Billy maze the oxyclean guy is dead.

my blck hole hasnt been very busy because i dont really write everyday nor do i really enjoy counting all the words i've been writing when i do write.

but i have started my new story. its about a girl who was born to kill this guy but she ends up falling in love with him... and stuff. i know the begining and the very very basic middle and the end. i am very excited to start.


message 105: by [deleted user] (new)

Sounds interesting! It'd be fun to read and see how it goes!


message 106: by Madeline (new)

Madeline i forgot...

i need another phrase to reeplace 'but to'

like my sentence is something like: If you were born for a certain purpose, destined for a life that would save thousands, there would be no choice BUT TO follow the path on which you were placed. Right?

except BUT TO soundss so ... just crappy.


message 107: by [deleted user] (new)

lol sometimes But To is necessary though. Idk what another word would be. :D


message 108: by Madeline (new)

Madeline i dont either but i think there was some sort of something with the word save in it...


message 109: by [deleted user] (new)

hmm, I'll see if I can find something. :D


message 110: by Madeline (new)

Madeline thanks!!


message 111: by [deleted user] (new)

you're welcome


message 112: by Madeline (new)

Madeline I cant wait for 1 my shedule to come from school 2 school to actually start haha and 3 for Nanowrimo! i am so excited i have everything planned out so this year my grades will not suffer like last year. sheesh that was bad.
anyway... i have an decision to make about my story and i would apprecite any opions that come along good or bad

Theres a girl who is abnormally strong mentally(can read minds and that kinda stuff) and she is an orphan running from something. My issue is deciding what she is running from. i have two choices right now.

1. Her parents familys are fighting against each other over the girl. Her dads family wants to use her to gain power, basically they are evil. Her mothers family wants to use her for good but they are a little nuts. Her parents tried to hide her but they were killed and she ran from the scene. Now her two familys are warring and chasing after her.

2. Her parents were killed in an "accident" and a lady who was exceptionall strong in head as well took her in and tried to teach her to be evil and use her head the wrong way. THe girl refuses and runs from the lady. Now the lady is chasing her saying that she will join forces with her or she will kill her(like she did her parents so she could get her).

THe family thing seems very cool, you know original, but also more than a little weird. And the evil lady seems not so original but makes more sense and would be easier to write. i just dont know. but the good thing is that i have plenty of time to think about it.


message 113: by Micaela (new)

Micaela | 65 comments I personally like 1. better. It seems like an overall more interesting story, and more fun to write. :)


message 114: by Dee, Fan of the "Young Prose Society" (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 3382 comments Mod
Hey Madeline,

Thanks so much for the lovely paper flowers. They really made my morning.

Oh, I have some fun news about the NaNoWriMo event. I have just become an official regional member of the NaNoWriMo team.

I think it is great that you are getting your thoughts together ahead of time for the event.


message 115: by Madeline (new)

Madeline Nanowrimo!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!

i shall be sure to add you as a friend, eventually. the website takes forever ha.


message 116: by Madeline (new)

Madeline EAGLES ROCK!!!!!!

just thought i'd add that


message 117: by Micaela (new)

Micaela | 65 comments YES! NANOWRIMO!!

WRITING COMMENCE!!!


message 118: by Madeline (new)

Madeline ok so not sure exactly how many i got yesterday but i know it wasnt close tomeeting mygoal. but today i am more in to the story so i amwriting a lot more. hopefully i will get my goal today.


message 119: by Madeline (new)

Madeline i have decided to start typing now because idk how many words i have and its driving me mad!! mad i tell you


message 120: by Micaela (new)

Micaela | 65 comments Ugh I hate that, one of the reasons I started typing too. That and I am way faster at typing.


message 121: by Madeline (new)

Madeline yea cept just when i start typing my power cord for my moms laptop died :( so now i have to sit and write on a wooden chair (at my desktop) or write on paper which never gives me an accurate word count!! ugh.
*shouts at power cord*WHY DID YOU DO THIS TO ME NOW OF ALL TIMES?!?!?!?!?!?



message 122: by Madeline (new)

Madeline i admit i am not trying as hard as i was but i also gotta say i am loving write or die




message 123: by Madeline (new)

Madeline all right i am back in the game!!


message 124: by Madeline (new)

Madeline ahaha i have eggs now!! heehee

Adopt one today!

Adopt one today!



message 125: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments Awww cute! *clicks*


message 126: by Madeline (new)

Madeline heehee *dorkishly excited*


message 127: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments You should be. It's fun. :)


message 128: by Madeline (new)

Madeline [image error]
it is indeed heehee


message 129: by Madeline (new)

Madeline pop poppop popopopopopop


POP!!!!


message 130: by Madeline (new)

Madeline [image error]


ah... two weeks with no school


*voice in back of madeline's mind* and two more weeks in june...


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