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message 601: by [deleted user] (last edited Jul 06, 2009 07:04AM) (new)

That's good at least you got it all out.
My cousin sent the longest apology letter to me over facebook, he really didn't have to, but anyways back to your story :D
Maybe if you read it through a couple times, I mean why is it the plot doesn't make sense to her? Ask her how it doesn't make sense. If she just says it does, then maybe use context clues. Lol read the chapter before, and the next chapter, and see how it fits?
Because for one thing, you're the author, it's your book. If your mom see's something, where you don't see where it should be fixed, then maybe you could just move on with it. Or you could fix it to a certain point, and then move on again.
Because whenever I edited my story, I would read through it once and edit it, then i'd come back later, and realize that I missed a whole section, where it just never fit anywhere in the book, or it was just a really poorwritten section. So I don't know if any of this helps or not, but I hope it does. :D


message 602: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments yeah, i know what you mean. but the thing is, i know my mom is right, i just don't know how to fix my own book! argh! or i do, sorta, but it will involve reshaping the entire plot and changing everything soooo it's kind of REALLY frustrating! D:


message 603: by [deleted user] (new)

Sadness, well, I hope you can figure it out. Good luck!


message 604: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments okay well i figured out how to fix it! but it's still driving me crazy, cuz i have to change so much. >_< gaah. plus i got another rejection. :( oh welll ... back to editing.



message 605: by [deleted user] (new)

I'm sorry about the rejection. It's been a week since I sent one out, and I have a week left for the deadline.


message 606: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments ehhh it's okay. rejection is all part of the evil process. :) lol. i was kind of hoping for a rejection, actually, because a day or two after i sent it i pretty much changed the entire plot of my book. lol!


message 607: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments LALALA!!! NO ONE EVER CHECKS THIS THREAD! I'M BORED!! XD XD XD


message 608: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments Let's see ... What have I accomplished today?
Wellll ... I wrote a little bit of Shades. And I'm starting to work on this new story called Walking Shadow. only i don't know if that will go anywhere. ><


message 609: by [deleted user] (new)

coolio, sounds interesting.


message 610: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments Haha thnx. So far it hasn't rlly gone anywhere but I'm working on it. ;)


message 611: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments Good luck!


message 612: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments thankies!
umm today i haven't written anything. But I edited chapters 5 and 6 of Reborn! so i think that counts ...


message 613: by [deleted user] (new)

awesome! I always count editing anyways. ha ha. :D


message 614: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments haha me too. because when i edit i tend to ... well ... rewrite a lot of stuff. :P lol!


message 615: by [deleted user] (new)

ha ha so do I.


message 616: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments XD


message 617: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments Hey pplz ...
Today I have to go teach little kids how to draw for six hours! :P
Then I'll come home and try to get some writing done. ><


message 618: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments i'm back!!! and after i drink some coffee perhaps I will write a little ... if i happen to get over my writer's block in the next hour or so. O_o


message 619: by [deleted user] (new)

Have fun!


message 620: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments >_< i'll try ... lol


message 621: by Dee, Fan of the "Young Prose Society" (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 3382 comments Mod
Hey Brigid,

Keep the faith! Remember that every "no" is closer to a "yes."

I found the following link that I think might help :]

http://killzoneauthors.blogspot.com/2...

The most important thing...is keep writing! You are very talented.

I believe in you :]


message 622: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments Thanks Dee! :D I'm still trying :)

LOL thanks for the link! that was really funny XD wow, some agents are so tacky! i laughed so hard when i read about the author who just got a big fat "NO" stamp on his/her letter. lol >< it's good to know that i'm not the only one going through rejection ... and none of the ones i've gotten have been that tacky. mostly just the "keep trying, but this isn't right for us" letter. lol.




message 623: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments Hey everyone... I'm trying to rescue this egg, so if you don't mind, please click!

Adopt one today!


message 624: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments i don't understand the thing with these eggs!!! what are they for?? lol :P

as for my writing ... umm today i wrote like a page of my edge sequel, which is called Jump. :) i should get back to editing Reborn. heh heh.

btw, for anyone who's interested, PERCY JACKSON TRAILER!!: http://www.imdb.com/video/imdb/vi3202...


message 625: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments Good work Brigid... all writing is good, as long as you keep chugging!

OMG NO WAY! GASP! I <3 PERCY JACKSON! *goes to look*

(The eggs are like little online dragons, and every click makes them hatch. Ask Daisy, she got me hooked....

Adopt one today!

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Adopt one today! )





message 626: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments OMG SO COOL! GASP! I WANNA SEE IT NNNNNOOOOWWWW!!!!


message 627: by [deleted user] (new)

HOLY CRAP PERCY JACKSON TRAILER!!!! KILL ME NOW!!!!


message 628: by [deleted user] (new)

OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Okay, I do hope though that the director for the HP movies 1&2 does a better job on these movies than he did for those first two. Because I love the new director for the HP movies. Way better special effects. :D


message 629: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments Definitely... but in HP 1&2 director person's defense, they probably had a smaller budget then because HP was less popular, resulting in *drumroll please* worse special effect.

I think they probably have a good budget for PJ... it's very popular. *crosses fingers hopefully*


message 630: by [deleted user] (new)

True to that.

Oh, who knows Tink, I just can't wait to see it. 2010 is sooo far away!


message 631: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments UGH I KNOW! I was counting the days and was just like... GAH. If I try to wait that long I'll explode.


message 632: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments *sighs* omg can't wait for PJ movie ... XD XD XD but it's so far away!! D:
but not as far away as the Uglies movie, which doesn't come out til 2011 *cries*
and i forget, does the Max Ride movie come out in 2010 or 2011?


message 633: by [deleted user] (new)

UGLIES?? MAXIMUM RIDE???

Why didn't I hear about any of this????


message 634: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments umm because you don't spend 24/7 on the internet like i do? heh heh ...


message 635: by [deleted user] (new)

lol


message 636: by Kenzie, Help feed the hungry. Donate to 30 Hour Famine! (new)

Kenzie | 1305 comments Mod
YEAH!! New awesome movies are going to be coming out!!! YES!!!


message 637: by [deleted user] (new)

I still can't believe it . . . :D


message 638: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments :D hehe i'm excited. like, all my fave books are becoming movies. *squeee!!*

as for my writing ... umm i worked more on Jump today, meaning I only wrote like half a page. heh heh.

aaaand I got another rejection on my query. still waiting for three more responses, and I have a lot of queries that i still need to edit/send. so, wish me luck. :P


message 639: by [deleted user] (new)

Good luck!


message 640: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments ♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "*sighs* omg can't wait for PJ movie ... XD XD XD but it's so far away!! D:
but not as far away as the Uglies movie, which doesn't come out til 2011 *cries*
and i forget, does the Max Ride movie com..."


UGLIES IS GOING TO BE A MOVIE??? THAT"S SO EXCITING!!!!! *squeals*


message 641: by [deleted user] (new)

I KNOW!!!!!!!!!


message 642: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments YAAAY!!! XD




message 643: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments Annie Mae wrote: "Good luck!"

thanks! haha i sent ten queries today >< lol


message 644: by Kenzie, Help feed the hungry. Donate to 30 Hour Famine! (new)

Kenzie | 1305 comments Mod
Whoa, ten?! Nice. Good luck!! I sent out another two today. :D


message 645: by [deleted user] (new)

TEN QUERIES??? You're like, so totally wicked!!! :D


message 646: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments lol! thanks XD


message 647: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments Dang, ten! Good luck, Brigid!


message 648: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments thankies! :D


message 649: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments A quote to live by (through rejections):

When life gives you lemons, chuck 'em back and say "That all you got?" Then duck so they don't hit you with those watermelons.

LOLZ :P


message 650: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 1015 comments LOL!!! good advice


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