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message 201: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (last edited Feb 14, 2009 04:05PM) (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
Well, most days I haven't gotten to writing anything. :(

Day 35 (feb 4)
Well, this was spread out over a couple of days but... 48 words that make up 4 haikus.

Day 36-41 (feb 5-10)
I think that I wrote SOMETHING some of the days, but I don't really remember...


message 202: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments Wow.


message 203: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
oh, I'm going to fill stuff in later. I just didn't get around to it. I DID write some of the days, but it was less than 250 words...


message 204: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments :( sorry.


message 205: by Dee, Fan of the "Young Prose Society" (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 3382 comments Mod
http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/1...

Clean-up in the above cubical, please :)

I also cross-posted to Kenzie,

Thanks so much for your help :)


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Paige Miller | 4362 comments :D


message 207: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (last edited Feb 14, 2009 04:13PM) (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
Will do!
ummm,

Day 42 (feb 11)
150 words about the importance of a character in a story.
Oh, and 181 words making up two and two halves poems. I still have to finish two of the poems, and write anther one, because I don't like the first one, which is the one that was finished.
so together that is....331 words.
Day 43 (feb 12)
450 words about Chinese Calligraphy

Day 44 (feb 13)
134 words of when the birds fly south.

Total of 11,785 words so far. WHOOT! I'm actually going to get back on track though! I've been missing my word count almost every day for two weeks now, and a lot of the days, I didn't write at all.


message 208: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
Woah! I just checked on a calculator, and I should be at 11,000 words right now if I were exactly on track. HOW CAN THAT BE? Maybe it's because a bunch of days in January I wrote 300 or 400 words... but that shouldn't be enough to--OH WAIT! haha, I forgot about school stuff. That's what has kept me on track for where I should be in this year. Because of that math project, and that bio paper, and that little paper for world studies... and a bunch of small random paragraphs for lit...


message 209: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments [image error]
Happy Heart Day Roni! XOXO TInk


message 210: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (last edited Feb 15, 2009 05:34AM) (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
awww. ty. I love chocolate roses!

Day 45 (feb 14)
133 words. I couldn't figure out what to write, and I didn't feel like getting my notebook (where all but one of my stories currently reside) so I was like, hmmm.... I remember that June once thought about the time that she ran away... I made note of it, because I figured that I should either tell that story or get rid of the mention. Well, I'm still probably getting rid of it, but I decided to write the story of that one time when she tried to run away. I fell asleep though...
Oh, and 21 words to finish a poem!!! Do you want to read it? Oh, sure you do! Here it is:

Some Things Aren’t Right
Ever been tattooed?
Branded like a bull?
Labeled with a number
Or a name?

Ever been punished
For believing something different
For breaking a stereotype
For speaking your mind?

Ever seen another praised
When they’ve done something wrong
And you’ve done something right?

Ever watched a cruel act
Where everybody stares as they walk by
But nobody stops to help?

Ever been pushed down so hard
That you couldn’t get back up again?

Ever heard an insult
And without thinking, laughed?

Ever known that some things are not right?


message 211: by Dee, Fan of the "Young Prose Society" (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 3382 comments Mod
Wow, very powerful writing Roni, thanks for sharing.


message 212: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
Aww, thank you. I wrote most of it last wednesday for a creative writing enrichment (enrichments are sort of like extra cirriculars...) And I have to finish it for next monday. But I have all of this week off of school, so there is an entire week to do it. Now all I have to do is finish the other poem (or just leave it as it is) and write another one that begins with one of the lines on the sheet that the instructor gave us, because we have to write three poems and I don't like my first poem. It's about Carmen Sandiago and not very good...


message 213: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (last edited Mar 08, 2009 01:42PM) (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
Day 46 (Feb 15)
So far: 21 words to write 1 stanza to finish a poem! yay! (the above post applies to this poem as well)

Movements
Your hand cannot move gently enough
As it hovers above the piano keys
About to play a sad tune
With no thought of happiness

Your brain cannot think fast enough
As danger approaches
About to take life
With no time for hesitation

Your smile cannot shine brightly enough
As your friend raises her hand
About to wave
With no chance of ill-will

Your soul cannot glow strongly enough
As you fill with joy
About to share it with the world
With nothing but happiness


249 words of a short story!


message 214: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1367 comments wow...your poems are so amazing


message 215: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments O.O wow.


message 216: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
Aww, thanks guys! I actually have something to add for Sunday. I continued the story that is based off of a dream. I haven't counted the words yet. I've been crazy busy. In a fun way.

Well, for 47 and 48 (feb 16 and 17) I didn't have access to a computer or notebook. Long story short, I was at my friend's house.

As for today, I'm really tired, and my brain is way too filled up with stuff to think about stories. Maybe I could write in my journal that I haven't written in in about... six months at LEAST. At least my sister probably will only be moving to NC, not southern CA or Japan (not that there's anything wrong with those places. They're just kinda FAR.)


message 217: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
Day 49 (Feb 18)
263 words that is what happened last night. Sort of.


message 218: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments Why are you weirded out, Roni?


message 219: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1367 comments nice.....good job roni


message 220: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
Because my sister is getting married and moving in less than six months. O.o And I found out about it two days ago.


message 221: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments I'm sorry. How old is she? Did you have any idea it was coming?


message 222: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
Oh, she's 21. And yeah, we were expecting it a little, but not really this soon. But I didn't really expect the moving out of state part...

But at the same time, it's all really exciting! I went with her to try on wedding dresses the other day. :D


message 223: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
Day 50 (Feb 19)
Nada. Working, then got sick. Eew.

Day 51 (feb 20)
Sooooo tired. Still sick. I don't think that I can make anything today. I think I'm going to sleep now...


message 224: by Dee, Fan of the "Young Prose Society" (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 3382 comments Mod
Night Roni :)


message 225: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1367 comments feel better


message 226: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments |EyeOfTheStorm| |RONI| wrote: "Oh, she's 21. And yeah, we were expecting it a little, but not really this soon. But I didn't really expect the moving out of state part...

But at the same time, it's all really exciting! I went w..."


Well, that's not horrible. You'll keep talking to each other. That must've been fun. Hope you feel better soon!


message 227: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments [image error]

A gift for you, Roni.


message 228: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1367 comments O.0

nice


message 229: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
Awww, thank you! And there's even soup! Creamy chicken flavored... RAMEN!!! :D


message 230: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1367 comments lol


message 231: by Kenzie, Help feed the hungry. Donate to 30 Hour Famine! (last edited Feb 22, 2009 04:25PM) (new)

Kenzie | 1305 comments Mod
OMGOSH, Roni!! I found these awesome Skittles that are double flavored!!



They're really good!! If I don't eat them all I'll bring some in on Monday. :)

I hope you're feeling better. And I'll see you tomorrow at school. I hope you guys had fun at Winterfest.


message 232: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1367 comments GAH! SKITTLES!!


message 233: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
OMG THAT LOOKS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!! Do you still have them?????


message 234: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1367 comments lol


message 235: by Kenzie, Help feed the hungry. Donate to 30 Hour Famine! (new)

Kenzie | 1305 comments Mod
Oh, no. Sorry. I had A TON left on Monday, but then I got hungry ... and so did my siblings.... XD


message 236: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (last edited Mar 08, 2009 01:37PM) (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
Day 52-58 (feb 21-27)
Two poems. 89 words. And something that was supposed to be a poem but wasn't... 201 words.

And the Poems!

That Sweet Smell
Freshly clipped from their stems and arranged
Are flowers galore from floral shops
There are carnations and chrysanthemums
Tulips and hydrangeas
Irises and daffodils
Lilacs, lilies and queen and lace
Rhododendron
Poppy and goldenrod
Lady’s-slipper, violet
And roses
Red, pink, and white
Obscuring the closed casket

The Birds
Swans gliding across water
Eagles soaring
Hawks hunting
Wild turkeys strutting
Herons taking flight
Woodpeckers pecking trees
Geese honking in their v-formation
Pigeons cooing
Crows loudly cawing
Robins and chickadees chirping
Ducks quacking
And owls all alone, sleeping


message 237: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
Oh! I have to add something for day 46 that I never counted the words for...


message 238: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1367 comments nice roni


message 239: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1367 comments gah...i have to get off and keep writing...GAH


message 240: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
OMG!!! THE WRITE A THON STARTS TOMORROW!!!!!


message 241: by T.O.L.I. (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 1367 comments O.o

what write a thon??? im interested.....


message 242: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
Ummm, the one in this group!!!


message 243: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments LOL TOLI where have you been?


message 244: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
I am doing the Mock Nanowrimo Write-A-Thon and my goal is a total of 25,000 words. I will be working on The Thyme in the King's Castle, and I will try to finish it, even if it means writing 60,000 words. If I finish with less than 25,000 words, I will work on Kurt.


message 245: by Veronica, Bigfoot makes an excellent character (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 727 comments Mod
My goal for march is 900 words per day


message 246: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments YAY RONI! WE HAVE THE SAME GOAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


message 247: by Sella (new)

Sella Malin You go girl!!! lol :D I still have to figure out my word count goal...*siigh*.

Feel better soon Roni!!

Omg, you're sister's 21 and she's getting married?!?! 0.0 That's how old my sister is!!! Wow, I can't imagine her getting married now...whoa. lol


message 248: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments LET THE WRITE A THON BEGIN!


message 249: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller | 4362 comments How'd you do on your WC Roni?


message 250: by Dee, Fan of the "Young Prose Society" (new)

Dee Marie (dee_marie) | 3382 comments Mod
Wow, good for your Roni, 900 words a day is a healthy quest! You can do it!


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