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Jan 08, 2009 05:00PM
((well, i guess both!))
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((kk, cool! oh, how about this? Brookepaw gets attacked while she is exploring. Then, Burningstar hears. He defends her, and although he wins, he gets hurt saving her!))
((YAY! Well, not yay, but you know what I mean. Who attacks her?))
((Hmmm, maybe she catches, pretend shadowclan cats hunting on riverclan territory and she attacks, without going for help!))
Brookepaw walked along the Shadowclan/Riverclan border. Snap. Someone stepped on a twig. Brookepaw turned her head and sniffed. Shadowclan on Riverclan territory? A face appearded. It was white with a gray streak down the middle. Brookepaw didn't know his name, but she was smart enough to know he was a Shadowclan warrior. Without thinking, she lunged at the cat. He easily dodged her and rolled. A few seconds later, he had Brookepaw pinned down. "Well, well, a little hero," he hissed. "Wait till Burningstar hears about this!" Brookepaw squirmed under the warrior's weight. He thought. "Hmm, that wouldn't be good. Maybe he doesn't have to hear..." With that, he lifted one white paw and raked Brookepaw's forehead. She cried out.
((get more cats... there need to be more...))
Burningstar stopped for a moment, whiskers twitching. He could have sworn he heard something...
Burningstar stopped for a moment, whiskers twitching. He could have sworn he heard something...
Two more cats ame behind him. "What's this?" asked a tan and brown cat. "Is someone trying to cause trouble?" "Let her go, Silverstreak. She hardly more than a kit." said an orange cat. "No!" yelled the cat ontop of Brookepaw, apparently named Silverstreak. "She'll run off and tell her leader. We have to make sure she can't." He raised his paw again and clawed Brookepaw's arm. She yowled in agony.
Burningstar heard the wail a second time, and knew that he wasn't just hearing things. Something, a cat, was in trouble. Immediately, he started running towards the sound, tearing through the underbrush. Fear penetrated through his body as he caught a familiar scent.
Brookepaw
Brookepaw
Blood pooled around Brookepaw. "Now what?" asked the orange cat. "Do you just plan on leaving her here?" Silverstreak shook his head. "First, I'll make sure she's good and dead. After that? I think I'll drop her body into the river!" Brookepaw groaned. The blood...the voices...it all blurred together. She couldn't hold on.
Burningstar burst into the clearing, angrily leaping onto Silverstreak. Snarling, he gave him a vicious bite on the shoulder to paralize him momentarily. Then, he turned and attacked the other two cats, whirling and fighting fiercer than the leader of Tigerclan himself.
Brookepaw felt a huge weight being lifted off her. She couldn't see what was going on. Her vision was fading. She heard yowls and cried of pain. But for all she knew, they could have been her own.
Burningstar screeched with pain as he felt teeth make connection with his tail. Angrily, he lashed out with his claws, tearing at anything that got in his way. He beat away Silverstreak with his hind legs, and started ripping at the orange cat. He leapt onto the brown one, biting the back of its neck. Snarling, fangs dripping with blood, he advanced towards them. Suddenly, he felt a searing pain in his neck, then nothing. He watched the other cats limp away. Clinging to consciousness, he turned to Brookepaw. "Brookepaw..." he choked out. "Brookepaw! Are you o-" and then he collapsed onto his side.
((Have Brookepaw wake up, yeah?))
((Have Brookepaw wake up, yeah?))
Brookepaw slowly got to her feet. The pain was inredible. She saw Burningstar. Blood was everywhere. She hobbled into camp and yelled horsly "Burningstar is hurt! Help!" before falling to thr ground.
(( I don't know if I have any cats in Riverclan other than Burningstar! I'll go make a medicine cat... no wait, we have one! I'll have to improvise and be her))
Brightheart ran into the center of the clearing to Brookepaw. "What happened?!" she mewed with distress.
Brightheart ran into the center of the clearing to Brookepaw. "What happened?!" she mewed with distress.
"Shadowclan...attacked. Burningstar's...near border..." she coughed.
((g2g night!))
((g2g night!))
((im actually going to be on a little longer!))
Brightheart examined Brookepaw closely, pressing herbs to her wounds. "I'll have a warrior go get him..."
Brightheart examined Brookepaw closely, pressing herbs to her wounds. "I'll have a warrior go get him..."
Graydawn ran over "Burningstar's hurt" she said with deep concern in her voice. Before anyone could say anything she was already running towards were Burningstar lay according to Brookepaw. "I'll get him " she called over her shoulder as she raced out of camp.
Brightheart nodded, not bothering to say anything.
Burningstar smelt something getting closer. Weakly, he let out a low moan.
Burningstar smelt something getting closer. Weakly, he let out a low moan.
Graydawn ran up to Burningstar. "You're bleeding all over" she cried while trying to get him up into a standing patition.
Burningstar quickly melted back down onto the ground, his consciousness fading. "I'm... sorry..." was all he could say.
"What do you mean" Graydawn yowled feeling sick with fear. She started to lick his wounds and whisper "Come on you big furball, you can do it".
Graydawn stared down at the cat she loved. "No you can't...you...can't" she couldn't finish her sentence. She lay down by Burningstar and started to cry.
((do leaders get 9 lifes in this rp))
((do leaders get 9 lifes in this rp))
((yep!))
Burningstar's breathing gave out. A long silence spread across the clearing, quieting even the birds.
Burningstar's breathing gave out. A long silence spread across the clearing, quieting even the birds.
Graydawn knew he lives left it just broke her heart even to see him just lose one life when he had nine.
She started to whisper in his ear "I love you" over and over again.
She started to whisper in his ear "I love you" over and over again.
Burningstar's eyes opened once more, his breathing returning. Slowly, he raised his head. "That was my sixth life." he mewed.
((does that mean he has 3 left or that he has 6 left))
((does that mean he has 3 left or that he has 6 left))
((sorry didn't mean to put it on 2 times))
Graydawn started licking Buringstar all over and saying "Well you can't lose those for along, long time."
Graydawn started licking Buringstar all over and saying "Well you can't lose those for along, long time."

In mid lick she glanced at Sparrowtail and said "What?"
"Nothin'" Sparrowtail said.
"I'm happy to see you alive" Graydawn said while trying to get Burningstar up on his feet.
((could have that since brookepaw fought well that she become a warrior))
((what do you think Moondust))
((windclan))
Oakpaw was wandering around wondering is being a medicine cat always this boring? But then remembered the new kits.
Oakpaw was wandering around wondering is being a medicine cat always this boring? But then remembered the new kits.

((sorry I haven't been on for so long!))
Starkit walked over to Breezekit. She was much older now, and she could say Breezekit's name better. "Hi Breezekit!" she mewed happily.
"Sure" Oakpaw called back. He grabbed a plump rabbit and brought it over to the queen. "Are they eating fresh kill yet" he asked pointing to the kits.
Runningwind took some of the meat. Roaringkit eagerly bounced over to Oakpaw. He liked Oakpaw a lot. "Hey Oakpaw! Yeah, we can eat meat now!"
"Cool!" Oakpaw said surprised they were already eating meat. "You seem excited what's up" Oakpaw asked Raoringkit.