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Dani
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May 03, 2009 11:38AM
Whitepaw squeaked. She thrashed.
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"Help!" Whitepaw fell. She thought she broke a bone.
The lions ran, but before the last one left, he said to her, "Try that again and see what happens!"
"Okay!" cried Darkfoot. He took a running launch at the lion that had talked to Whitepaw. He scratched his eyes and made that cat blind.Whitepaw slowly got up and limped to camp.
((The lion said that and left))
Birdkit stayed on the floor of the nurery, weak as a new born kit. the lions had bit her chest when she tried to fight them off, and blood was still flowing freely from the wound.
Whitepaw dragged herself up and gingerly picked up the kit and dragged both of them into the medicine den.
Birdkit lie still. she was aching all over, and unconcous ((bad spelling. oops!)) she moaned something, and her breth slowled.
Whitepaw only managed to grunt.Darkfoot raced after the lions. "Come back here you flea ridden, mangy, evil things!" Darkfoot jumped up and viciously tore at the eyes of one.
They easily got away and ran off, too fast for any normal cat to follow
Emberkit squealed
Emberkit squealed
Darkfoot climbed a tree and followed the lions from above.
The lione ran out of the forest, leaving the trees behind, and disapeared
"Grrrr!" Darkfoot ran back to camp. ((Aren't we in WindClan? They're on the moor.))
((I have no clue what clan we are!))
Kiara, Jet and Killer dashed off after the lions, Jet's leg was missing, but she didnt let that slow her down
(( His LEG was missing? Like it was torn off?))Darkfoot rushed into camp. "Larksong, Foxfur, Sunstripe! Help! The lions!"
The three litermates' ears pricked up. "Sure!" cried Sunstripe. She needed some major adventure. "Just point the way, Darkfoot," said Larksong. She always liked the chase. "Do you really think their hurting other cats?" asked Foxfur. He didn't like to fight, but he would if he had to.
"Yes! They are! Did you not see Whitepaw and Emberkit and Birdkit?" cried Darkfoot.
"Good point. Where are they? The lions."
"This way! Follow me!" Darkfoot lead them to where Kiara was. "Let's go! I can still see them!"
The four cats rushed and started to attack the lions.
((Check his pic))
((The lions are already long gone! I have a plan 4 later))
((The lions are already long gone! I have a plan 4 later))
"Looks like they're gone, Darkfoot," said Foxfur. "Hmmmmm. Why did you call us out here?"
((G2g))
Emberkit squealed once more, and they were gone
Emberkit squealed once more, and they were gone
Birdkit heartbeat slowled. her breath became so slow it was silent. she saw her ancstors before her, and she began the small walk toward them to join their ranks. ((shes no there yet. she can be healed))
((kk))Whitepaw whined, "No. Don't die. Please don't die. Brightcloud!"
((Warriorsworld, it's 2, did you make a charrie, it's WindClan, what's your cat's name, why do you keep using caps, have you heard of grammer/punctuation/spelling, and read the rest of the story.))
((oh yeah, you used "hear" in the wrong context.))
Emberkit got away from the lions after a zookeeper found them, she limped over to the woods, she looked around, they had been running for days, she could never find her way home
((Does that mean that Emberkit is out of the story now? And please join my group!))"Darkfoot!" cried Whitepaw. "Is Emberkit okay?"
Darkfoot muttered, "No. She's gone. I'm sorry. I'm so sorry."
Whitepaw gasped.
((Kinda 4 now))
Emberkit layed down in the shade of the trees
Emberkit layed down in the shade of the trees
((Ok then. I like cats too. And I have 5 plus my cat gave birth so I have..... NINE! Cecily, Vicky, Friendly, Tiger, Ace, Floyd, Paprica,Cookie and Cream. And as far as I know I'm not your mother. And I'm 12 but my birthday is the 22nd of June!))
((Okay fine and who is mouse?))Whitepaw groaned. Birdkit, are you okay? Has the bleeding stopped? Hello?"
((Okay then))Sunstripes walked out into the woods, "Emberkit? Emberkit?" It had been one day since the lions had attacked.
Emberkit whined, she couldn't hear, and she was too far away for any clan cat to hear her calls
Sunstripe would not give up. She kept calling< "Emberkit! Emberkit!"
((Okay, you haven't actually Roleplayed at all and no camp collasped. You have to go along with the story.))
(( then don't write it in the parentheses. and read some of the last 3 pages or so to understand what's going on. that might help a tiny bit.))
((Yeah, If you just write randomly were all going 2 ignore you))
((1. READ THE REST OF THE STORY!!!! 2. What warriors with kittypet names? Sunstripe? That is her warrior name. And all my cat's either have warrior or apprentice names.))
((don't write it in the parenthesis!))
((Am I the only one who will read??? No offense of course))
