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Xerxes Break(Vivian Ephona) (ephona) Note to everyone: NO ONE'S WRITING SUCKS! My good friend, Snikcerdoodle, her writing isn't as good as some in this group but it doesn't SUCK! It's GREAT!


message 102: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments Whoa! Don't attack me.

I know my writing isn't great, and I have come to terms with it. Now y'all have just got to accept that I'm right on this one.


message 103: by [deleted user] (new)

my writing probably sucks . . . maybe that's why people won't read it. *cries*


Xerxes Break(Vivian Ephona) (ephona) It does not Cail!


message 105: by [deleted user] (new)

that's what you say . . . :I


message 106: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller Ephona-

just read it. Very intriguing. I am still about confused about how Carlzle and Zeila and Anita are connected, but that could just be because of where you are in the story. Quite a few typos, but not bad.


message 107: by Seth, The plan is simple--stay alive. (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 2205 comments Mod
ugh i soooo need to cali! grrr i hate having to catch up!


message 108: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller Cali- i'll read yours ASAP, but not tonight, maybe tomorrow, k?


message 109: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller Kenz-

your writing may not always be great, but Reawakened Soul is great. I would SO buy it if it was in a store.

Please shut up with the crap about sucking.

Roni- I'm glad SOMEONE agrees with me.


message 110: by [deleted user] (new)

kk. :D I need to read yours too.


message 111: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments Okay, I'll shut up about it. But you haven't changed my mind. I KNOW it sucks. Y'all can think whatever you like, but you won't change my mind.


message 112: by Seth, The plan is simple--stay alive. (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 2205 comments Mod
lol well nooooone can say that my writing doesn't suck bcuz almost no one is caught up! (well i guess kenz and paige could . . .)


Xerxes Break(Vivian Ephona) (ephona) Paige wrote: "Ephona-

just read it. Very intriguing. I am still about confused about how Carlzle and Zeila and Anita are connected, but that could just be because of where you are in the story. Quite a few typ..."

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Yeah typos are like that XD I hate typoooos...but yes, keep reading and it becomes imminent not like you have to. I'm just glad for some advice ^-^



Xerxes Break(Vivian Ephona) (ephona) SUCKS doesn't mean no one's caught up. Heck I don't think my writing sucks and no everyone's caught up.


message 115: by [deleted user] (new)

i sorta am, i gotta catch up with Tempus!!!


message 116: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments Seth, your writing doesn't suck! It's awesome! Have faith in yourself! Really!

(and you DID say I could say that 'cause I'm, ya know, caught up and all XD. So DEAL with it)


message 117: by Seth, The plan is simple--stay alive. (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 2205 comments Mod
I can deal with you saying it.


BUT NOT EVERYONE ELSE!!


Xerxes Break(Vivian Ephona) (ephona) HAVE SELF CONFIDENCE! GOSH! I do love The Strike! It's an AWESOME idea!


message 119: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie | 2838 comments Ha, ha. The comment next to your name makes me laugh. XD

Sorry, random moment.

How come they can't say so? If they've at least read MOST or SOME of it they can. They can judge you based on what they're read SO far.


message 120: by [deleted user] (new)

Whatever Seth, just by what I've read with our joint story, you're awesome. btw, when r u gonna finish??


message 121: by Seth, The plan is simple--stay alive. (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 2205 comments Mod
Ugh, I dunno what to write . . . Ideas?


message 122: by [deleted user] (new)

i added another chapter to my story. (the one on post 7) PLEASE READ IT!


message 123: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
Kenzie wrote: "Okay, I'll shut up about it. But you haven't changed my mind. I KNOW it sucks. Y'all can think whatever you like, but you won't change my mind."

No offense, but...you're an ignorant doodoo brain if you think your writing sucks. That's all I have to say. :P

Kenzie wrote: "Seth, your writing doesn't suck! It's awesome! Have faith in yourself! Really!"

You say that you're writing sucks, but when we tell you it doesn't, then you don't listen to us...then, when Seth says HIS writing sucks (which is absolutely doesn't) then you tell him it doesn't, and HE doesn't listen!! Do you know how we feel know??

...if that ramble made sense at all...

Oh, and Kenzie (& Seth) why would he keep TELLING you guys that your writing doesn't suck if it wasn't true? Do you guys think we're lying or something?!?!




message 124: by [deleted user] (new)

no, not really . . . it's sorta a hard story to write seth.


message 125: by Riley (new)

Riley (booksarecool) Hey guys, I don't think my writing sucks, and only one person who's read it has liked it. I think I'm pretty darn good, and sorry if I sound pompous, but I've read stories much worse than your guys'. So what if you're not perfect, no one is? So what if it might not be a new york times best seller, it's great! And you know what, for our age, it's even better.


message 126: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
PLUS!!! They are first drafts! :D

And everybody who did nano knows just how horrid first drafts can be, and others who didn't do nano know that as well.


message 127: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
Yeah. EVERY writer's first drafts are going to be WAY worse than their final. I bet if you took your favorite book and read the first draft for it, you would be shocked at how terrible/worse it was!!


message 128: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
yeah ... the thing is, i always feel like i'm happy w/my first draft. then when i go back and read it a few times, i'm suddenly like "AGGGH I HATE THIS!!!" it's so frustrating. then i edit it, and feel happier about it. but then i read the edited version a few times and i'm like "wait ... I STILL HATE THIS!!! AGGGHHHH!!!" gah.


message 129: by [deleted user] (new)

oh my gosh, my first draft of my nano story SUCKS!!!!! I am seriously thinking about rewriting the whole thing. I mean I can take it to a whole different direction, give them different powers and such, but still have the same plot line. But I doubt I'll be doing that anytime soon.


message 130: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
yeah my nano story has a lot of little holes in it ... there's so much i forgot to explain cuz i was rushing and i was like, "wait did i explain such-and-such already? i forget ..." haha


message 131: by [deleted user] (new)

yeah, i really, really want to change it!


message 132: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
i'm planning on brutally editing soul stealer ... right after i finish writing Injection. i have soooo much work to do over vacation!!!


message 133: by [deleted user] (new)

lol.
AAAAAH ONLY 1 1/2 week of break left! NOOOOOO!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!


message 134: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
haha. mine just started today. after today i have twelve more days. aaahhhh ...


message 135: by [deleted user] (new)

mine started on monday..... blah


message 136: by [deleted user] (new)

mine started last friday.


message 137: by Veronica, What the neck!? (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) | 2889 comments Mod
so did mine! friday was supposed to be the last day of school, but then there was a snow day!


Xerxes Break(Vivian Ephona) (ephona) Mine stared on monday...no snow day. but NOW we have at least 3 feet of snow


message 139: by [deleted user] (new)

three feet? yeah so do I.


message 140: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
grr why does it snow everywhere but here!! :(

uurrgh, i'm soo stressed. i have soo much to do and there's not that much time left till the end of the break...it's all going by so fast!! and i haven't written anything!! :(


message 141: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
i've been reading too much, and i've barely written anything. gaah. of course, i still have eleven days left ...


message 142: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
yeah, i've been reading, and being on goodreads, and i wanted to get a lot of writing done this break...and i only have, like, 10 more days...


message 143: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
yeah ... i have writer's block. which sucks, because i have TIME to write for once, and i CAN'T!!


message 144: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
writing always works against us...whenever I WANT to write, i don't have time, and vise versa!! although, luckily, yesterday i suddenly got this urge to write, and i wrote about four chapters for hunted. but now i don't feel like writing anymore. :(


message 145: by Margaret (last edited Dec 29, 2008 08:03AM) (new)

Margaret (LoveMyFrogs) Brigid, What seems to work for me is doodling. I sit at my desk with pencil in hand and a empty piece of paper. As I'm making designs at random, they start turning into something specific. As I concentrate on the design and making them turn into what it's becoming(sounds weird), my mind starts kicking in with ideas, which leads to ideas about my stories. No more writers block.


message 146: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
hmmm. maybe i will try that; thanks. XD haha


message 147: by Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. >< (new)

Sella Malin | 4530 comments Mod
ooh, that sounds like a good idea!! i think i'll do that next time i'm stuck!! :D


message 148: by Paige (new)

Paige Miller ♥ Brigid ♥ wrote: "yeah ... i have writer's block. which sucks, because i have TIME to write for once, and i CAN'T!! "

EXACTLY!!!!!! OMG THAT ALWAYS HAPPENS TO ME!!! I only get inspired when there's no time to write.


message 149: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ | 5857 comments Mod
EXACTLY!!! ><


message 150: by [deleted user] (new)

YEAH so do I! And I swear I got an idea right before I went to bed . . . and now I've forgotten it.


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