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Xerxes Break(Vivian Ephona)
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Dec 21, 2008 09:17PM

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I know my writing isn't great, and I have come to terms with it. Now y'all have just got to accept that I'm right on this one.
my writing probably sucks . . . maybe that's why people won't read it. *cries*

just read it. Very intriguing. I am still about confused about how Carlzle and Zeila and Anita are connected, but that could just be because of where you are in the story. Quite a few typos, but not bad.

your writing may not always be great, but Reawakened Soul is great. I would SO buy it if it was in a store.
Please shut up with the crap about sucking.
Roni- I'm glad SOMEONE agrees with me.
kk. :D I need to read yours too.

lol well nooooone can say that my writing doesn't suck bcuz almost no one is caught up! (well i guess kenz and paige could . . .)

just read it. Very intriguing. I am still about confused about how Carlzle and Zeila and Anita are connected, but that could just be because of where you are in the story. Quite a few typ..."
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Yeah typos are like that XD I hate typoooos...but yes, keep reading and it becomes imminent not like you have to. I'm just glad for some advice ^-^

i sorta am, i gotta catch up with Tempus!!!

(and you DID say I could say that 'cause I'm, ya know, caught up and all XD. So DEAL with it)

Sorry, random moment.
How come they can't say so? If they've at least read MOST or SOME of it they can. They can judge you based on what they're read SO far.
Whatever Seth, just by what I've read with our joint story, you're awesome. btw, when r u gonna finish??
i added another chapter to my story. (the one on post 7) PLEASE READ IT!
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Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. ><
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Kenzie wrote: "Okay, I'll shut up about it. But you haven't changed my mind. I KNOW it sucks. Y'all can think whatever you like, but you won't change my mind."
No offense, but...you're an ignorant doodoo brain if you think your writing sucks. That's all I have to say. :P
Kenzie wrote: "Seth, your writing doesn't suck! It's awesome! Have faith in yourself! Really!"
You say that you're writing sucks, but when we tell you it doesn't, then you don't listen to us...then, when Seth says HIS writing sucks (which is absolutely doesn't) then you tell him it doesn't, and HE doesn't listen!! Do you know how we feel know??
...if that ramble made sense at all...
Oh, and Kenzie (& Seth) why would he keep TELLING you guys that your writing doesn't suck if it wasn't true? Do you guys think we're lying or something?!?!
No offense, but...you're an ignorant doodoo brain if you think your writing sucks. That's all I have to say. :P
Kenzie wrote: "Seth, your writing doesn't suck! It's awesome! Have faith in yourself! Really!"
You say that you're writing sucks, but when we tell you it doesn't, then you don't listen to us...then, when Seth says HIS writing sucks (which is absolutely doesn't) then you tell him it doesn't, and HE doesn't listen!! Do you know how we feel know??
...if that ramble made sense at all...
Oh, and Kenzie (& Seth) why would he keep TELLING you guys that your writing doesn't suck if it wasn't true? Do you guys think we're lying or something?!?!
no, not really . . . it's sorta a hard story to write seth.

PLUS!!! They are first drafts! :D
And everybody who did nano knows just how horrid first drafts can be, and others who didn't do nano know that as well.
And everybody who did nano knows just how horrid first drafts can be, and others who didn't do nano know that as well.
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Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. ><
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Yeah. EVERY writer's first drafts are going to be WAY worse than their final. I bet if you took your favorite book and read the first draft for it, you would be shocked at how terrible/worse it was!!
yeah ... the thing is, i always feel like i'm happy w/my first draft. then when i go back and read it a few times, i'm suddenly like "AGGGH I HATE THIS!!!" it's so frustrating. then i edit it, and feel happier about it. but then i read the edited version a few times and i'm like "wait ... I STILL HATE THIS!!! AGGGHHHH!!!" gah.
oh my gosh, my first draft of my nano story SUCKS!!!!! I am seriously thinking about rewriting the whole thing. I mean I can take it to a whole different direction, give them different powers and such, but still have the same plot line. But I doubt I'll be doing that anytime soon.
yeah my nano story has a lot of little holes in it ... there's so much i forgot to explain cuz i was rushing and i was like, "wait did i explain such-and-such already? i forget ..." haha
yeah, i really, really want to change it!
i'm planning on brutally editing soul stealer ... right after i finish writing Injection. i have soooo much work to do over vacation!!!
lol.
AAAAAH ONLY 1 1/2 week of break left! NOOOOOO!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!
AAAAAH ONLY 1 1/2 week of break left! NOOOOOO!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!O!
mine started on monday..... blah
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Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. ><
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grr why does it snow everywhere but here!! :(
uurrgh, i'm soo stressed. i have soo much to do and there's not that much time left till the end of the break...it's all going by so fast!! and i haven't written anything!! :(
uurrgh, i'm soo stressed. i have soo much to do and there's not that much time left till the end of the break...it's all going by so fast!! and i haven't written anything!! :(
i've been reading too much, and i've barely written anything. gaah. of course, i still have eleven days left ...
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Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. ><
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yeah, i've been reading, and being on goodreads, and i wanted to get a lot of writing done this break...and i only have, like, 10 more days...
yeah ... i have writer's block. which sucks, because i have TIME to write for once, and i CAN'T!!
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Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. ><
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writing always works against us...whenever I WANT to write, i don't have time, and vise versa!! although, luckily, yesterday i suddenly got this urge to write, and i wrote about four chapters for hunted. but now i don't feel like writing anymore. :(

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Sella, ov vey! i haven't checked this group in months. ><
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EXACTLY!!!!!! OMG THAT ALWAYS HAPPENS TO ME!!! I only get inspired when there's no time to write.
YEAH so do I! And I swear I got an idea right before I went to bed . . . and now I've forgotten it.