Newbie RP for Warriors Lovers discussion
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all the clan's have territory, nightclan(thunderclan) is in the forest/ woods like places and mainly eat squirrels, mice, birds, voles and sometimes rabbit. Stormclan(windclan) eats mainly rabbit, voles, birds, and sometimes squirrel. they life in the moors.( open hills). fireclan(shadowclan) lives in the swampy areas and mainly eat frogs, lizards and stuff like that. iceclan(riverclan) is more the same type as nightclan just wet. They eat fish, voles, occasionally rabbits, squriles and mice.
(It's fine, I felt the same at first to.) Here, I'll show you with a character of mine.
Storm-
Lonepaw was bored out of her mind. She wondered where her mentor was. Lonepaw's shredded ear itched, she refrained from releveing it.
there is a topic that can help to, give me a sec and I'll post he link.
Storm-
Lonepaw was bored out of her mind. She wondered where her mentor was. Lonepaw's shredded ear itched, she refrained from releveing it.
there is a topic that can help to, give me a sec and I'll post he link.
it's by silver
HOW TO ROLEPLAY
(Yes, I wrote this originally, and then copied it and changed it to fit this group.)
A roleplay is a place where each person plays a character (or several of them) and all the people playing the characters get together and write a story, except each person only plays their characters.
Here are some rules that will help it be easier to read:
1) If you are typing in the roleplay, but not typing part of the story, you type in double parentheses like this:
Shallowstream skipped down the sparkling road towards the river. ((hi! today is my birthday!!))
2) When roleplaying, type in third person, unless you're in a special roleplay where you type in second person or first person. Third person is like this:
Shallowstream sat down and thought about her day.
Second person is like this:
You sat down and thought about your day.
First person is like this:
I sat down and thought about my day.
3) When roleplaying, type in past tense unless you're in a special roleplay for present or future tense. Past tense is like this:
Shallowstream stretched and licked her paws, watching the twolegs suspiciously.
Present tense is like this:
Shallowstream stretches out and licks her paws, watching the twolegs suspiciously.
Future tense is like this: (I have never seen a roleplay in future tense)
Shallowstream will stretch out and lick her paws, watching the twolegs suspiciously.
4) When roleplaying, try to use correct grammar, punctuation, and capitalization. It makes it easier to read.
5) You're not allowed to control other peoples' characters. You may not realize it, but that's what you're doing if you say something like:
(you are Bluear and someone else is Shallowstream)
Bluear waved her paw. When Shallowstream looked up, Bluear said, "Hi."
The person playing Shallowstream might not have had her look up when Bluear waved her paw. In fact, they may have wanted Shallowstream to rudely ignore Bluear.
6) Your character can't be all-powerful or better than everyone else unless you're in a roleplay where that's allowed. (and there are roleplays where that is allowed)
7) When battling, I find that it works best to type small amounts such as:
Bluear swiped a paw towards Shallowstream's eye.
and then you would let the other person say something like,
Shallowstream blocked her and rolled over Bluear, hissing and scratching as she prepared to bite.
That way the other person as the option to say whether or not you succeeded in hitting them or whatever ;)
8) When you start roleplaying in a clan, make sure you say what clan you'll be in. You can either do:
((Ice)) Silverlight looked around.
or
Ice: Silverlight looked around.
Or something like that.
9) (sp?) means you aren't sure about the spelling. Like you would say:
Shallowstream walked through the forrest(sp?).
10) Kits can NOT have crushes or mates. Think of your three-year-old brother getting married to the next door neighbor's 3-month-old baby.
HOW TO ROLEPLAY
(Yes, I wrote this originally, and then copied it and changed it to fit this group.)
A roleplay is a place where each person plays a character (or several of them) and all the people playing the characters get together and write a story, except each person only plays their characters.
Here are some rules that will help it be easier to read:
1) If you are typing in the roleplay, but not typing part of the story, you type in double parentheses like this:
Shallowstream skipped down the sparkling road towards the river. ((hi! today is my birthday!!))
2) When roleplaying, type in third person, unless you're in a special roleplay where you type in second person or first person. Third person is like this:
Shallowstream sat down and thought about her day.
Second person is like this:
You sat down and thought about your day.
First person is like this:
I sat down and thought about my day.
3) When roleplaying, type in past tense unless you're in a special roleplay for present or future tense. Past tense is like this:
Shallowstream stretched and licked her paws, watching the twolegs suspiciously.
Present tense is like this:
Shallowstream stretches out and licks her paws, watching the twolegs suspiciously.
Future tense is like this: (I have never seen a roleplay in future tense)
Shallowstream will stretch out and lick her paws, watching the twolegs suspiciously.
4) When roleplaying, try to use correct grammar, punctuation, and capitalization. It makes it easier to read.
5) You're not allowed to control other peoples' characters. You may not realize it, but that's what you're doing if you say something like:
(you are Bluear and someone else is Shallowstream)
Bluear waved her paw. When Shallowstream looked up, Bluear said, "Hi."
The person playing Shallowstream might not have had her look up when Bluear waved her paw. In fact, they may have wanted Shallowstream to rudely ignore Bluear.
6) Your character can't be all-powerful or better than everyone else unless you're in a roleplay where that's allowed. (and there are roleplays where that is allowed)
7) When battling, I find that it works best to type small amounts such as:
Bluear swiped a paw towards Shallowstream's eye.
and then you would let the other person say something like,
Shallowstream blocked her and rolled over Bluear, hissing and scratching as she prepared to bite.
That way the other person as the option to say whether or not you succeeded in hitting them or whatever ;)
8) When you start roleplaying in a clan, make sure you say what clan you'll be in. You can either do:
((Ice)) Silverlight looked around.
or
Ice: Silverlight looked around.
Or something like that.
9) (sp?) means you aren't sure about the spelling. Like you would say:
Shallowstream walked through the forrest(sp?).
10) Kits can NOT have crushes or mates. Think of your three-year-old brother getting married to the next door neighbor's 3-month-old baby.
Name:originally Switchpelt, but now it's Pool-light
Gender:she-cat
Rank:rogue
Clan:banished from Nightclan
Mat/crush:Sugarspray
Kin:All dead
Pelt:Brown with white and black stripes
Eyes:hazy-almond
Personality:ambitious, evil, cruel, intimidating
Gender:she-cat
Rank:rogue
Clan:banished from Nightclan
Mat/crush:Sugarspray
Kin:All dead
Pelt:Brown with white and black stripes
Eyes:hazy-almond
Personality:ambitious, evil, cruel, intimidating

Gender:she-cat
Rank:rogue
Clan:banished from Nightclan
Mat/crush:Sugarspray
Kin:All dead
Pelt:Brown with white and black stripes
Ey..."
Yay, you're going to help me and Wolf out. ^^

Clan: Stormclan
Gender: Tom
Kin: Lightfeather
Apprentice: none
Mentor: ummm...(Lightfeather (mabey))
Mate: NO
Pelt: Dark brown, like bark on a tree
Eyes: big light blue eyes
Personality: Excited easyly, very entergetic, thinks that sparrows are the best prey.
http://www.mooseyscountrygarden.com/c...
or
http://www.fotosearch.com/bigcomp.asp...
Name: Shadowclaw
Clan: Storm
Gender: Female
Pelt: Black with white ear
Eyes: Amber
Personality: mixed
I knew I had one in storm!!!
Clan: Storm
Gender: Female
Pelt: Black with white ear
Eyes: Amber
Personality: mixed
I knew I had one in storm!!!
name: littlepaw
gander:she/cat
kin:none
mate:none...
rank:aprentice
pelt:brown, green eyes
personality:mood
clan:none yet but is hopeing to join the nightclan(or storm)...
gander:she/cat
kin:none
mate:none...
rank:aprentice
pelt:brown, green eyes
personality:mood
clan:none yet but is hopeing to join the nightclan(or storm)...
her name would be snow kit till she's an apprentice.

gender:she
kin:none
rank: apprentice
pelt: light orange/red
personality:eager to learn
clan:storm

Clan: Storm
Gender: Female
Pelt: Silky white
Eyes: Electric yellow
Personality: Nice, eager

Clan: Night
Gender: Male
Pelt: orange striped tabby
Eyes: turquoise blue
Personality: aggreseve, likes to go on adventures
http://www.fotosearch.com/bigcomp.asp...

Clan: ice
Gender: Male
Pelt: snowy white
Eyes: dark blue
Personality: hyper, but trys to calm down other cats.
http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=mwbnn...

Storm
Female
http://progressives.typepad.com/photo...
Dorp (Depends on rp with personality.)
Warrior
Rank would be apprentice and you need to find a mentor.

Clan: StormClan
Gender: she-cat
Rank: apprentice
Kin: open
Mentor: open
Mate: none yet
Appearance: light tortoiseshell with more orange patches, green eyes
Personality: TBD
is this okay? I haven't RPed here before...

Kin: Currentkit
Mentor:none
Apprentice:none
Rank:kit
Eyes:gray
Pelt:black with silver spots
Clan:ThunderClan
Personality: A jokster yet talented and serious when needed to be.

Kin: Blackkit
Mentor: none
Apprentice: none
Rank: kit
Eyes: gray
Pelt: a very light gray
Clan: Nightclan
Personality: Funny but sober and shy if you don't know him well.

Clan: Ice
Gender: She-cat
Kin: Featherkit (please?)
Mentor:
Mate: Uh...Kit!
Pelt: light grey with black sploches
Eyes: light blue
Personality: very jumpy! loves being around other cats, very energetic

clan:what should it be?
Kin:None[all decesed:]
Apprentice:none
Mentor:
Mate:
Rank:kit
pelt:All black with a cream colored stripe spiriling up tail
eyes:pure forest green
personality:Very bold and protective, wants to grow up really bad!!!!!

Clan: FireClan
Gender: She-cat
Kin: None (deceased)
Mentor: NEED HELP HERE!!!
Mate: NONE!!!
Pelt: Light gray she-cat with darker flecks
Eyes: Green
Personality: Gentle loving she-cat who dislikes arrogant cats
Name: Rainkit(Rainstorm)
Clan:Stormclan
Gender: she-cat
Kin: Thunderpaw(Thundercloud) her brother
Mentor: none
Mate: none
Rank: kit
Pelt: bluish grey
Eyes:bright blue
Personality: kind, loving, sneaky, mischievous, fun, caring, outgoing, helpful
Other: wants to become a faithful warrior
Clan:Stormclan
Gender: she-cat
Kin: Thunderpaw(Thundercloud) her brother
Mentor: none
Mate: none
Rank: kit
Pelt: bluish grey
Eyes:bright blue
Personality: kind, loving, sneaky, mischievous, fun, caring, outgoing, helpful
Other: wants to become a faithful warrior

Clan: Storm
Gender: she cat
Rank: kit
Pelt: golden
Eyes: green
Personality: TBA
RPed by iluvcatz

((i c. so can u not remember all ur caracters now?))
Name: Thunderpaw (Thundercloud)
Clan:Stormclan
Gender: tom
Kin: Rainkit(Rainstorm) his sister
Mentor: needs one!
Mate: none
Rank: apprentice
Pelt: bluish grey
Eyes:bright blue
Personality: kind, sneaky, mischievous, fun, caring, outgoing, helpful, good hunter, and sometimes rude
Other: wants to become a leader warrior
Clan:Stormclan
Gender: tom
Kin: Rainkit(Rainstorm) his sister
Mentor: needs one!
Mate: none
Rank: apprentice
Pelt: bluish grey
Eyes:bright blue
Personality: kind, sneaky, mischievous, fun, caring, outgoing, helpful, good hunter, and sometimes rude
Other: wants to become a leader warrior

Clan: Storm
Gender: tom
Mentor/Apprentice: Thunderpaw
Rank: warrior
Pelt: brown
Eyes: amber
Personality: TBA
RPed by ME!!!! (iluvcatz/Katie)

Clan: Ice
Gender: She-cat
Kin: Featherkit (please?)
Mentor:
Mate: Uh...Kit!
Pelt: light grey with black sploches
Eyes: light blue
Personality: very jumpy! loves being around..."
((Yah, she can be Featherkits kin.))

Ok thanks
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(last edited Oct 20, 2009 03:29PM)
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Erica wrote: "If this is the character board why do we need the (( and )) ?"
((because, it's spam. it doens't belong here, it belongs in chat...etc.))
((because, it's spam. it doens't belong here, it belongs in chat...etc.))
(( how is not using the parenthesis spam?))

Clan: IceClan
Gender: Tom
Kin: none
Mentor: NEEDS ONE!!!
Mate: none!!!
Pelt: Light tan with 1 darker stripe on his back
Eyes: Green
Personality: Slightly arrogant
Name: Mist
Clan: NONE she is a loner who unnoticed nests near IceClan but not too close
Rank: Kit
Gender: She-cat
Kin: none
Pelt: Light gray she-cat with darker flecks
Eyes: Green
Personality: Somewhat wary of other cats but otherwise nice
Hey I changed Mistpaw to Mist and she is a loner-kit who lives near IceClan.
wat does control mean?