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Jun 05, 2013 05:22PM
Haha, it's okay, I'll see how it goes. :)
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Yeah. Tell me what you think of it when you're done!(Now I'm curious again, I'll probably go reread it)
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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Keep it that way. The man has a brilliant mind for concepts that will change the way you think about fantasy, but he leaves so much unexplained. It feels very…unruly. The author sounds like he has little control over his worldbuilding, and hints at a lot of things that make you wonder more, then never resolves that wondering.
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ugh,i would hate that. i'm the kind of person that needs every single piece of the book to be tied up by the end of it. otherwise, i'll angrily slam it to the floor, hahaha.
I'll give you recommendations soon -- I'm headed to bed right now (I'm stuffed full of pizza and had about a dozen arm-wrestling matches tonight), and I won't be available tomorrow. But Friday I can give you a few suggestions for places to look for well-done fiction that won't annoy you. ^_^
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i'm always looking for well-done things that don't annoy me, how did you guess? hahaha.thanks. good night!
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Jude wrote: "We're so talented :P"heck yeahh you are.
but only because i don't know how to type characters like that on my computer. ;)
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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As for me, I have precalculus homework and also AP US homework which does not look fun.This kinda defeats the purpose of summer vacation.
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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Sevania wrote: "Thank you, Saru. We need not concern ourselves with these ancient people."you'll miss us.
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Sevania wrote: "Maybe so, but I am youthful and innocent and, um, yeah."then i'm ancient and innocent!
Saru (Queen of Bookland) wrote: "Yes. Innocent and youthful. AND you will be old people first."YES! True! And when you are old and on your deathbeds we shall still be innocent and youthful and naïve and stuff.
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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Sevania wrote: "Saru (Queen of Bookland) wrote: "Yes. Innocent and youthful. AND you will be old people first."YES! True! And when you are old and on your deathbeds we shall still be innocent and youthful and na..."
oh, so now i'm dying? i see how it is.
Good. I'm glad you see our side of the story. Although, it may be possible that Saru will be dying soon from blood loss.
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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Sevania wrote: "Good. I'm glad you see our side of the story. Although, it may be possible that Saru will be dying soon from blood loss."asdfghjkll;apwew PLEASE STOP TALKING. o_O
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Hey, if I were to put some of my (awful) writing (Yes, I think most of my writing stinks.) where would I put it?And yeah, I have no idea of where to ask this, so I'm asking it here because I was already here when I thought of asking it and
Okay, I think I may need to eat less sugar...
@GraceEach folder is divided by genre. Pick the genre that is most applicable and create your own topic with the piece. Does that make sense?
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Sam~~ we cannot see the moon, and yet the waves still rise~~
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Grace wrote: "Hey, if I were to put some of my (awful) writing (Yes, I think most of my writing stinks.) where would I put it?And yeah, I have no idea of where to ask this, so I'm asking it here because I was a..."
well, what kind of writing is it? there are folders (or whatever you call it, i don't really know GR terminology) for the different genres, and you can just create your own discussion (not the one that explains what the genre is) and post your story there.
i hope that made sense. sorry. lack of sleep.:/
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