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message 1651: by Megan (new)

Megan Mweemba (meganlovesbooks) | 3196 comments In other news (because I don't care for math and don't have any pie to eat), ONE WEEK UNTIL I LEAVE FOR MEXICO.


message 1652: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments OH HAVE FUN I'LL MISS YOU


message 1653: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments IT'S THE IDES OF MARCH

I THINK I'M THE ONLY PERSON EXCITED FOR TODAY


message 1654: by Jo (new)

Jo (Penname8) | 1574 comments YOU ARE NOT, EMILY.


message 1655: by Megan (new)

Megan Mweemba (meganlovesbooks) | 3196 comments EMILY IM EXCITED TOO

The goodreads quote of the day today was awesome.


message 1656: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments WELL DUH IT'S SHAKESPEARE

AND "JULIUS CAESAR" IS LIKE MY FAVORITE

AND IT WAS MY TUMBLR BLOG TITLE THERE FOR A WHILE

I JUST LOVE JULIUS CAESAR OMG


message 1657: by Megan (new)

Megan Mweemba (meganlovesbooks) | 3196 comments Haha Julius Caesar was the first Shakespeare play I read in it's entirety, so it has a special place in my heart. :)


message 1658: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments I just have a special place for 1st century BC of Ancient Rome in my heart


message 1659: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Taylor [formerly Timothy] wrote: "I want to get your opinion on something.

I spent a little bit of time reading up on the North Korea armistice dismissal. I guess I was thinking about the possibility of nuclear war too much becaus..."


It is kind of gruesome but I don't really have a problem with it. But also it's kind of a cliché.


message 1660: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Taylor [formerly Timothy] wrote: "I just realized, [spoilers removed]"

Oh yeah, I was going to say that but didn't want to spoil that book. :P And yeah. I think I've seen it in other books/movies as well.


message 1661: by Jo (new)

Jo (Penname8) | 1574 comments The first Shakespeare I read was Much Ado About Nothing.


message 1662: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Jo wrote: "The first Shakespeare I read was Much Ado About Nothing."

The first Shakespeare I read was "Romeo and Juliet" because of school although that probably wasn't a good first thing to read.

BUT THEN I READ JULIUS CAESAR AND MY LIFE WAS AWESOME


message 1663: by Taylor (new)

Taylor  | 0 comments I haz another question.

I tried to join this group about an hour ago, and it came up with an error that said that the group's moderators did not accept my membership. Why is that, and how do I fix it? I tried asking the mod, but I don't think he knows because he just started making personal attacks for being dumb because I don't know. -.-


message 1664: by Brigid ✩, No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. (new)

Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
I don't know, is it a private group? Because in that case, the mods have to approve your request to join. And if they don't ... well, you can't really "fix" it besides maybe convincing them to let you join.


message 1665: by Taylor (new)

Taylor  | 0 comments I figured out what happened -- the dork actually blocked me to prevent me from joining. He's never been super fond of me. Fascinating stuff, this Goodreads politics. Whoot whoot.


message 1666: by Jo (new)

Jo (Penname8) | 1574 comments MOAN is fantastic too! Not to mention Beatrice is my spirit animal.

I also loved A Midsummer's Night Dream, The Merchant of Venice and my all time favorite King Lear.


message 1667: by Megan (new)

Megan Mweemba (meganlovesbooks) | 3196 comments Aahh I love Shakespeare so much. I've only actually read three of the plays but I've seen way more. When I was five, my older sister was in some Shakespeare plays, and I would memorize her lines along with her. :P
Twelfth Night has always been one of my favorites. Also Much Ado About Nothing and, like, all of them...


message 1668: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Jo wrote: "MOAN is fantastic too! Not to mention Beatrice is my spirit animal.

I also loved A Midsummer's Night Dream, The Merchant of Venice and my all time favorite King Lear."


A Midsummer's Night Dream cracked me up BUT NO ONE AT MY SCHOOL READS SHAKESPEARE NOR WOULD FIND HIS HUMOR FUNNY


message 1669: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Holden wrote: "SHAKESPEARE *FLAILS*"


message 1670: by Poet in the Dark (new)

Poet in the Dark (poetinthedark) | 253 comments I have yet to read any Shakespeare. Don't hurt me...
But which of his works would be a good first read?


message 1671: by Taylor (new)

Taylor  | 0 comments All of them. Read all of the works. I love Macbeth and Much Ado About Nothing and Othello and Hamlet and…yeah. There's a lot.

Start with Romeo and Juliet. Most people do because it's such an overdone plot.


message 1672: by Poet in the Dark (new)

Poet in the Dark (poetinthedark) | 253 comments All right, thanks for the suggestion. :)


message 1673: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Poet in the Dark, the PIXAR girl wrote: "I have yet to read any Shakespeare. Don't hurt me...
But which of his works would be a good first read?"


JULIUS CAESAR

JULIUS CAESAR

JULIUS CAESAR

JULIUS CAESAR

JULIUS CAESAR



message 1674: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Julius Caesar. Definitely.


message 1675: by Poet in the Dark (new)

Poet in the Dark (poetinthedark) | 253 comments Okay, thanks. :) I'll check it out from the library ASAP.


message 1676: by Poet in the Dark (new)

Poet in the Dark (poetinthedark) | 253 comments Maybe I'll just check them all out. XD


message 1677: by Taylor (new)

Taylor  | 0 comments That's what I said before. :)


message 1678: by Poet in the Dark (new)

Poet in the Dark (poetinthedark) | 253 comments ^_^ Right, sorry.


message 1679: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Holden wrote: "Poet in the Dark, the PIXAR girl wrote: "Okay, thanks. :) I'll check it out from the library ASAP."

A Midsummer Night's Dream or Macbeth are my suggestions. Midsummer is a comedy, Macbeth a trage..."


A MIDSUMMER NIGHT'S DREAM IS COOL TOO


message 1680: by Megan (new)

Megan Mweemba (meganlovesbooks) | 3196 comments Emily wrote: "Holden wrote: "Poet in the Dark, the PIXAR girl wrote: "Okay, thanks. :) I'll check it out from the library ASAP."

A Midsummer Night's Dream or Macbeth are my suggestions. Midsummer is a comedy, ..."


AACK I NEED TO READ THAT ONE

AND WATCH IT


message 1681: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Megan [find me somebody to love] wrote: "Emily wrote: "Holden wrote: "Poet in the Dark, the PIXAR girl wrote: "Okay, thanks. :) I'll check it out from the library ASAP."

A Midsummer Night's Dream or Macbeth are my suggestions. Midsummer..."


READ IT IT WAS SO FUNNY


message 1682: by Jo (new)

Jo (Penname8) | 1574 comments KING LEEEEEEEEAR~


message 1683: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Jo wrote: "KING LEEEEEEEEAR~"

I HAVEN'T READ THAT ONE YET

OR MACBETH

I NEED TO FINISH HAMLET

((Words cannot describe how much I laughed every time Hamlet yelled "GET THEE TO A NUNNERY"))


message 1684: by Jo (new)

Jo (Penname8) | 1574 comments OMG HAMLET SAID THAT?!?!? *life complete*


message 1685: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments YES

AND THAT IS WHY I GET WEIRD LOOKS WHILE READING SHAKESPEARE IN PUBLIC


message 1686: by Taylor (new)

Taylor  | 0 comments Lump that will never be digested:

So, the good news is that I'm getting published in a book of poetry by local teens. The better news is that I'm kicking off our show we're putting on to launch the book, which is quite the honor because I was chosen by my biggest role model in the poetry world.

The bad news is that I can't show off to my two best friends in the world, Hazel and Savannah. I told them that the show would be starting at 7 PM. Well, I got an email this evening clarifying that it doesn't start until 8:30.

Here's the thing. Friday is the last day of our school academic term. I personally have my entire world expecting stuff of me between Thursday and Saturday. Savannah and Hazel too. They'll be tired. I'll be tired. And to be there 8:30 to 11 is overkill for them. Furthermore, Savannah and I have a practice AP test at 8 AM the following day.

So, basically, neither of them can come. I'm crushed because I really want them to be a part of my poetry journey, because they've both inspired some really good poems. (Savannah is the subject of my favorite.) And they support me in all this crazy stuff I do and I feel more loved by them than anyone else in the world.

And so I'm disappointed, because everyone performing has close friends coming to see them. Except me. And I'll just be up there, on stage, wishing they were there, sitting in the front row. And it kinda takes a lot of the excitement out of it, because I was looking forward to sharing messages with the audience that only they would truly understand.


message 1687: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments I'm sorry. :(


message 1688: by Sarah (new)

Sarah (sarah_endipity) | 819 comments Awwww!


message 1689: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments I'm so sorry.


message 1690: by Elliott (new)

Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
D: That's sad.


message 1691: by Taylor (new)

Taylor  | 0 comments I'll be fine…I hope. :D I'm getting used to the notion that my friends can't come.

I HAZ AN ANNOUNCEMENT

I need help picking pieces to perform tomorrow night. Please head on over to the poetry folder and look at my poems and pick one or two of your favorites. I just realized that there are three on top of "An Open Letter from Son to Mother" that I have to perform. And I don't know which!


message 1692: by Taylor (new)

Taylor  | 0 comments Headed out in a little bit to perform my poetry. Y'all should totes buy the book (see topic in poetry section) and watch the YouTube videos I'll put up tonight or tomorrow.

Now if my hands would just stop shaking….


message 1693: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments GOOD LUCK,

It's probably already passed by now so

How'd it go?


message 1694: by Taylor (new)

Taylor  | 0 comments Awesome. Go to the poetry section -- the three topics that were last updated have YouTube videos.


message 1695: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Ooooh! I watched the one you performed last and that was amazing! I haven't had a chance to watch the other two but I will soon!


message 1696: by Jo (new)

Jo (Penname8) | 1574 comments Random positive? undigested lump.

So I was drawing yesterday under the influence of the Brave soundtrack, specifically track 17-Not Now (which, as you can recall is when Elinor loses it for the second time and Fergus goes after her). And it was so dramatic and desperate that when my sister, who walks making as much noise as a ghost, entered the room I sort of shriek-gasped. xD

She and I haven't spoken to each other in a year and she's been pressured by my parents to start again amd she was really upset about it but I found it hilarious. XDDD


message 1697: by Brody (new)

Brody (brodyyyyyy) | 55 comments i am so very confused


message 1698: by Dana (last edited Mar 24, 2013 04:40AM) (new)

Dana (danachewy) | 735 comments Ok guys I need your opinion about a new WIP I'm starting.

I've started it but I didn't make a topic for it yet because I'm not sure if it's even going to work.

My idea is: write the chapters from different objects' point of view. Like maybe "Chapter 1: Door" and "Chapter 2: Pencil" or something.

And then each object would say some stuff in their chapter like for example if the MC slammed the door the door might say some stuff like "Oh, I'm so old, why can't people be kinder to me" or something.

And then each chapter would show, from little things that the MC did (For example, she was very restless so she kept tapping the pencil), her personality and then it would all lead up to a big event and show readers why she did it. (I'm not revealing the ending yet :D) And because it would be shown from various 'little' things that she did it would be very clear to the readers, rather than a jumping-to-conclusions-obvious way that it might appear to be.

I was thinking of titling the chapters after whose PoV it is but I'm not sure if it will get too confusing after a while or if readers will even get it.

Sorry for this hugely confusing rant but I hope someone out there can help me out. (I also didn't know where to put this....?)


message 1699: by Isaac (new)

Isaac | 8014 comments Oh, that would be interesting to read. It might be challenging to write, but cool.


message 1700: by Sevania (new)

Sevania (sevthedev) | 2512 comments Yeah that sounds super interesting, I'd read it!


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