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Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments EH? I don't know what he looks like...


Shreya=Drastically Random. Find the emoticon. | 1078 comments OH wait nevermind I found the post :P


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Isaac | 8014 comments Lav [until your heart stops beating so fast] wrote: "*cackles*"


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Isaac | 8014 comments *pats Holden's head*


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Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments *stares at Holden's sexay head*


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Isaac | 8014 comments Oh, Colby.


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Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
HAHA YOU GUYS ALL THOUGHT THAT WAS REALLY HOLDEN BUT IT'S JUST A COMPUTER GENERATED IMAGE THAT HE CREATED TO FOOL YOU ALL.


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Megan Mweemba (meganlovesbooks) | 3196 comments Emily [But I am, most of all I am] wrote: "Oh, Colby."


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Isaac | 8014 comments Lav [until your heart stops beating so fast] wrote: "HAHA YOU GUYS ALL THOUGHT THAT WAS REALLY HOLDEN BUT IT'S JUST A COMPUTER GENERATED IMAGE THAT HE CREATED TO FOOL YOU ALL."

SHUT UP LAV LET ME BE HAPPY FOR ONCE


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Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments Lav [until your heart stops beating so fast] wrote: "HAHA YOU GUYS ALL THOUGHT THAT WAS REALLY HOLDEN BUT IT'S JUST A COMPUTER GENERATED IMAGE THAT HE CREATED TO FOOL YOU ALL."
I saw his face on your Facebook months ago, though. Just sayin'.


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Megan Mweemba (meganlovesbooks) | 3196 comments Colby wrote: "Lav [until your heart stops beating so fast] wrote: "HAHA YOU GUYS ALL THOUGHT THAT WAS REALLY HOLDEN BUT IT'S JUST A COMPUTER GENERATED IMAGE THAT HE CREATED TO FOOL YOU ALL."
I saw his face on yo..."


Lucky :( hahahaha


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Isaac | 8014 comments ~Yue~ [Starless Nights Will Cover Day] wrote: "Well, like it or not, Holden is a flower, pretending to be a human. BUT HE CAN'T FOOL ME"


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Megan Mweemba (meganlovesbooks) | 3196 comments I knew it.


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Isaac | 8014 comments Megan [find me somebody to love] wrote: "I knew it."


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Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments So this happened:
Dear Colby Cox,

Thank you for submitting your work to the Bellevue Literary Review. We appreciate the efforts that have gone into this piece.

Unfortunately, given the volume of submissions we receive, even quality work often has to be declined. Please be assured that your piece was read thoroughly and given careful consideration by our editorial staff.

We wish you luck in placing this elsewhere, and apologize for not being able to offer a personal reply.

Sincerely,
The Editors
Bellevue Literary Review
www.BLReview.org


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Isaac | 8014 comments Colby, I'm sorry. :(


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Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments Yup, it's my first. I'm fine with it, as Brigid has given me stuff to improve upon, but it's not like I would have been bothered too much if it got published anyways ;)


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Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments That said, I applied to Dairy Queen today, and, knowing the type of people who work at Dairy Queen, I will be pretty upset if I get rejected there.


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Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
I still have my first rejection letter.
*high fives* We can form a club!


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Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments I deleted my rejection so that it wouldn't be on my email and depress me. XD I'm just going to save them all on a word document so that when I get published I can giggle at them. At least the letter was nice.


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Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Yeah, it's always sad at first. :/ Good idea! It's definitely an important part of the writing process.
Indeed! It would've been a lot worse if they said, "Sorry, but we hate your writing. We read the first sentence and threw up. Never send anything here again."


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Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
LOOK EVERYONE. LAV CAN'T SING HIGH NOTES. (view spoiler)


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Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments LAV SHUT UP I LIKED IT.


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Megan Mweemba (meganlovesbooks) | 3196 comments LAV THAT WAS REALLY REALLY GOOD


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Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Colby wrote: "So this happened:
Dear Colby Cox,

Thank you for submitting your work to the Bellevue Literary Review. We appreciate the efforts that have gone into this piece.

Unfortu..."


I think that letter about sums up my whole life. Anyway, sorry about your rejection. D: But I'm glad my feedback helped you!


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Brigid ✩ | 11973 comments Mod
Megan [find me somebody to love] wrote: "LAV THAT WAS REALLY REALLY GOOD"

I CONCUR. Well, I'm still listening to it, but yeah ... so far it is wonderful. :D


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Isaac | 8014 comments Lav [until your heart stops beating so fast] wrote: "I still have my first rejection letter.
*high fives* We can form a club!"


I want to submit stuff but that means my parents would read it no matter what and I write stuff that they wouldn't approve of and I don't let them read my nice writing anyways so I'm stuck until I leave home.


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Isaac | 8014 comments Lav [until your heart stops beating so fast] wrote: "LOOK EVERYONE. LAV CAN'T SING HIGH NOTES. SHAMELESS ADVERTISING: But you should watch anyways. Because Defying Gravity is a lovely song.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1bXCnc..."


EVERYBODY IS SO TALENTED AND THEN THERE'S ME


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Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments Emily [But I am, most of all I am] wrote: "Lav [until your heart stops beating so fast] wrote: "I still have my first rejection letter.
*high fives* We can form a club!"

I want to submit stuff but that means my parents would read it no ma..."


Your parents will be proud of you if you get published no matter how dark it is/what they think about it.


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Isaac | 8014 comments They'll be proud, read it, and then kill me.


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Megan Mweemba (meganlovesbooks) | 3196 comments Holden wrote: "Lav [until your heart stops beating so fast] wrote: "Yeah, it's always sad at first. :/ Good idea! It's definitely an important part of the writing process.
Indeed! It would've been a lot worse if..."


Haha, I feel that way too, Holden.


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Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Holden wrote: "That was really good, Lav! Especially considering you're playing piano at the same time! :-D

(My favorite part is the pause at 2:46, where I can tell you're just saying to yourself, "oh god oh g..."


Brigid *Flying Kick-a-pow!* wrote: "Megan [find me somebody to love] wrote: "LAV THAT WAS REALLY REALLY GOOD"

I CONCUR. Well, I'm still listening to it, but yeah ... so far it is wonderful. :D"


Megan [find me somebody to love] wrote: "LAV THAT WAS REALLY REALLY GOOD"

Colby wrote: "LAV SHUT UP I LIKED IT."

Thanks guys! ... now I feel like I was fishing for compliments. WHICH IS TOTALLY NOT WHAT I WAS DOING. PSSH.

(And yeah, Holden. That part is insane. My head voice needs a lot of work. I never use it unless I have to. xD)


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Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Holden wrote: "Lav [until your heart stops beating so fast] wrote: "LOOK EVERYONE. LAV CAN'T SING HIGH NOTES. SHAMELESS ADVERTISING: But you should watch anyways. Because Defying Gravity is a lovely song.
http:/..."


Oh, weird! That's actually not the reason I recorded it. Unless it was subconscious or something. I was home alone and when I'm home alone I like to play the piano and sing loudly and I liked how I sounded that day so I recorded it. xD


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Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Emily [But I am, most of all I am] wrote: "Lav [until your heart stops beating so fast] wrote: "I still have my first rejection letter.
*high fives* We can form a club!"

I want to submit stuff but that means my parents would read it no ma..."


Technically your parents wouldn't have to know if something you wrote got published...


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Colby (colbz) | 3211 comments BUT THEY SHOULD.


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Isaac | 8014 comments BUT I DON'T WANT THEM TOO.


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Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Then... don't tell them!


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Isaac | 8014 comments How do you publish a book and not have your parents know?


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Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Emily [The Messenger Spirit] wrote: "How do you publish a book and not have your parents know?"

Well, usually when books are published they don't skyrocket to the best sellers list, and unless your parents keep track of all the new releases of books, I doubt they'd even see it. You probably aren't going to be publishing a book until you're out of the house, so they wouldn't find out you were going through the process unless you told them. There are also things like pen names that are handy in situations like that.


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Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Holden wrote: "Lav [until your heart stops beating so fast] wrote: "Holden wrote: "That was really good, Lav! Especially considering you're playing piano at the same time! :-D

(My favorite part is the pause at..."


I don't know very much about music, but from what I've picked up in choir (so don't take this is a textbook definition or anything), head voice is the light, airy higher voice and you're singing "from your head" and then there's chest voice, which is the lower range and it comes from your diaphragm and has a sound that's more rich and full. My chest voice sounds a lot better than my head voice, but when you start getting to a certain point, you have to use the head voice because the chest voice can't reach the notes. The notes my voice cracked on or wavered on happened because I didn't have a smooth transition into head voice or because I tried to sing the higher notes in chest voice and it didn't work very well. xD


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Nepeta Leijon | 348 comments Since we're talking about music and singing, I'm a soprano. It's the one who can hit the highest notes and I'm more comfortable with the head voice.
The end,.


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Isaac | 8014 comments Holden wrote: "Emily [The Messenger Spirit] wrote: "How do you publish a book and not have your parents know?"

KEEL THEM

Once you've left the house and they don't have to know everything that you're doing! Tho..."


Bah I don't want to wait until then but I have too.

With my Camp NaNo I could really care less because that's actually a nice, happy story.


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Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Nepeta wrote: "Since we're talking about music and singing, I'm a soprano. It's the one who can hit the highest notes and I'm more comfortable with the head voice.
The end,."


*high fives* That's fantastic! I admire sopranos. But I'm glad I'm an alto. xD


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Isaac | 8014 comments Nepeta wrote: "Since we're talking about music and singing, I'm a soprano. It's the one who can hit the highest notes and I'm more comfortable with the head voice.
The end,."


*envious*

I have a really low and small vocal range AND IT SUCKS BECAUSE THERE'S NOT ONE SONG I CAN EVEN SING WITHOUT SWITCHING OCTAVES EVERY FREAKING VERSE BECAUSE IT'S EITHER TOO LOW OR TOO HIGH


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Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
Hehe, I have to do that too. I can actually sing along with guys who have higher voices a lot better than most girl singers.


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Isaac | 8014 comments Same with me. I've always sang the male parts better than the female parts.


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Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
*high fives*


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Megan Mweemba (meganlovesbooks) | 3196 comments Emily [The Messenger Spirit] wrote: "Nepeta wrote: "Since we're talking about music and singing, I'm a soprano. It's the one who can hit the highest notes and I'm more comfortable with the head voice.
The end,."

*envious*

I have a r..."


DUDE I KNOW RIGHT. And then whenever I go down an octave my voice is way lower than all the other girls around and I feel really self-conscious (which I always do when I'm singing anyway because I'm not very good at it).


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Elliott | 22634 comments Mod
I think society's obsession with "good" voices is kind of ridiculous. People should be able to sing for fun without being judged and stared at.


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Isaac | 8014 comments Megan [find me somebody to love] wrote: "Emily [The Messenger Spirit] wrote: "Nepeta wrote: "Since we're talking about music and singing, I'm a soprano. It's the one who can hit the highest notes and I'm more comfortable with the head voi..."

Ugh same here about the self-consciousness.


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