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This article convinced me that the reality from Unwind is actually possible.

I was wrong.
Every day, I see more articles in the news about taxes levied against abortions, the mandatory "rape" of women wanting or needing an abortion. I see men in politics trying to control our lives. I believe abortion is wrong, but I couldn't say that if I was raped and got pregnant from that rape that I wouldn't abort that child. If I was pregnant with a child that was severely disabled and would have a life expectancy of one month and would suffer needlessly for that one month, a pregnancy I might not survive, I can't say I wouldn't abort that child. I am also not so naive as to believe that if I can't take care of a child, I can give it up for adoption and it will live a happy life with another family who can. The majority of children adopted are less than a year old; after that window, percentages of adoptions drop. How many people are willing to take in a child that's not their own? How many people are willing to take in a child that's not their own and is disabled or has been abused?
I believe abortion is wrong, but I should be the only one who makes that final choice. Me, not a governor who cannot even understand what it's like to be pregnant, let alone the decision to end a pregnancy. His religious or personal beliefs should not be allowed to infringe upon MY rights as a woman and as a human being.


What freaked me out was the harvesting of parts from perfectly healthy kids - while they are awake! That whole chapter on Roland - oye vey!!!

You know what? The Unwind scenario seems too insane to think possible, but reality these days is utterly insane too. If we don't lock this down now, who knows where it will go?

neal schusterman may not be only BRILLIANT...but possibly psychic as well.

Goodreads is for books. Not arguing over tolerance. That's what yahoo is for. Let's try to keep all discussions relevant to Unwind.
While I'm not concerned that the book will become a reality in the near future, I can see many seedlings of that world in ours. Forget about abortion for a second. I've read other books where children are illegal to a certain extent. Ender's Game, Among the Hidden, and The Giver all take place in worlds with two child limits. The Declaration by Gemma Malley has children outlawed altogether.
In both reality and books, there are parents who want to be rid of their children. Read Shock Point by April Henry. You've heard of boot camps, brat camps, reform schools, correctional facilities, all those different names for places miles from civilization where parents send defiant teenagers like Connor. I'm not talking about juvie or military schools, these are places people pay five figures a month to keep their kids there in hopes that they'll turn out better than they were. Kids have died in those places.
What would those parents do if Unwinding were legal? Just like the boot camps parents, the adults in this book honestly believe they're doing it for their childrens' own good.

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Excuse me!?!

As for the pro-life/pro-choice discussion, I was surprised that, as a pro-life advocate, I was convinced that it is not necessarily the right choice. But neither is pro-choice. I think what our society needs to do is spend their time and resources into educating people about abstinence and hopefully prevent most of these tough decisions and moral/ethical issues. Of course, there is the ethical issue of stem cell research, IVF, and now with couples who could conceive naturally but choose to create "super babies" via IVF . . . there's a whole new can of worms to open!


Amen. When people act like they know EXACTLY what the person is going through and THEN try to pass judgement, it makes me sick. They have no idea what that person has gone through previous to the act. I don't support abortion as a birth control, and it would make me sad if someone did; but (I hope) if someone was raped and didn't feel strong enough to have the baby, then instead exiling them and telling them to "have the baby anyway!" I would be able to say, "That's okay, you did not place this lot upon yourself; It's your decision."





im not super sure what to say about this issue. im still sort of processing although i feel like, after reading this article and all of your responses, i have to say SOMETHING. i guess i will say this. it is my opinion that the government does not have the right to invade personal privacy for the sake of a zygote. i believe that abortions should be avoided at all costs (i think everyone does) but i do not think that they should, by any means, be made illegal. this is a degradation of the rights of pregnant women. i believe that the only reason this topic is still hotly debated is because of the religious undertones. lets face it though, without the religion aspect, pro-lifers have little to no case and the argument seems silly. with religion, there is, as unwind predicts, the possibility of world war 3. i am an atheist so i find that looking at this problem logically is easier for me than for others. pro-choice is the only option that satisfies the parties INVOLVED. i do not think that anyone but the mother and the doctor has a right to say what will happen to that zygote. freedom of religion means that an individual has the freedom to practice their religion as they see fit. it does not give them the right to force others to conform to their faith's guidelines.
on to unwind. i think this article fits very well with the book. i think the reason that we all like the book is because it takes an issue that is being debated to day and stretches it to the extremes. i can see how this book would, on the surface, be pro-life but i think that is shows the downfalls of both opinions. the downfall of pro-choice is shown in the unwinding process and the downfall of pro-life is shown in the storking process (remember that?). unwind shows us that there is no right answer to this problem and that we should all just mind our own business without government intervention.
on to unwind. i think this article fits very well with the book. i think the reason that we all like the book is because it takes an issue that is being debated to day and stretches it to the extremes. i can see how this book would, on the surface, be pro-life but i think that is shows the downfalls of both opinions. the downfall of pro-choice is shown in the unwinding process and the downfall of pro-life is shown in the storking process (remember that?). unwind shows us that there is no right answer to this problem and that we should all just mind our own business without government intervention.

One thing that I like about this book is that it does not contain any moral "answers" or advice, just encouragement to think about the issues and where our future is headed. My favorite scene is when Connor, Emby, and some other kids are discussing the issues involved in unwinding while they are in the crate. When one kid says that "I don't know" isn't an answer, and Connor insists that it is and more people need to admit that they don't know, I think he is absolutely right.

As the article states why are people (men) who otherwise cannot get pregnant making laws about something they cannot know anything about. Pregnancy is a very personal. People have the right to choose what they do with their bodies.
The Unwind series is amazing and I feel that it needed to be written I give an applause to Neal for writing about something that is truly dangerous and can end health care as we all know it.

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May I just say that was an extremely good response?

My current impulse is that it is more pro-choice than anti-abortion. Most pro-choice people, like myself, consider abortions to be a woman's choice up to the end of the first trimester, after which it should only be performed if the woman's life is in danger; after that, science tells us that the fetus is sentient, and so the issues get even more ethically charged than they already were. Storking shows the unfortunate result of forcing women to have children when the system is not set up to support them after the emotional, physical, and financial strain of pregnancy and labour. I would hope that the idea of unwinding teenagers is abhorrent to just about everyone, no matter which side of this issue they find themselves on ;)
To respond to the initial post, I agree that zygotes and embryos are all too often privileged over the lives of the women whose bodies are carrying them.
Hmmmmmmmmm, I'm 14, so it's not like anything I say actually matters. But I would never have an abortion (unless I was say, raped) and since I'm a Muslim, I couldn't get an abortion due to my religion, but it's not as strict as Christianity is. If the mother's life is in danger, it pretty much tells that fetus to take a hike. I personally agree with that. Generally it's teens own faults for having children and being stupid, so they should have to suffer the consequences, but at the same time, I wouldn't want that child to have a bad life just because the mother made one bad decision at a young age. Politicians believe that all abortion can fit in this tiny box which is 'no abortion under any circumstance' but that isn't true. They need to realize that every situation is different and that people need to make decisions based on their situation. :D

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If all the discussion that came from a book were only relevant to the book itself and never talked about real issues in real life, the author would be highly disappointed. Reading books would have nothing to do with how a person thinks about the real world. And the reason books are written is to make people like us think about the real world, something bigger than the book. The author addresses a topic, states his or her own opinion, maybe gives an example of how they think it is or how to fix it, then the discussion is up to us. If the book is about the real world, why shouldn't we bring the discussion to be about the real world as well? Who's to say Yahoo owns the rights to certain opinions, that they have no place here? These statements belong to people, we'll choose where to say them, thank you very much.
In my personal opinion, Yahoo is for gossip and "shocker" stories, not real news or serious discussion of anything. But that's just a judgment from viewing what they choose to display as front-page headlines almost every day for a few years.

The narration for when the young girl storks her baby says that the laws that were supposed to protect the value of life just make life cheap. I think that some of the abortion laws that some people propose, such as the one that would make a woman carry a miscarried baby to term, are doing just that. The expectation of women to value their fetus' life over their own does nothing to prove that all life is sacred.

As for the abortion issue, let me first say that I'm a 24 year old college grad (journalism, learned each facet). I was sexually assaulted 2 years ago on April 17th, 11 days before my birthday, by a guy my age who my parents let live in our house. He is a pro fighter and would have raped me but I'm a virgin, and after unsuccessgully fighting him off, I thankfully was able to at least insist I was enough to prevent that. parents still let him come over and have a positive relationship with him, as my mom partly blames me (no reason to, in all honesty... I hate lying, and he did it all the time... so much more to add, but I digress.) I also had to get a full hysterectomy at 22 due to endometriosis I'd had since I was 11, b/c an idiotic OBGYN cut into it and made it spread like w wildfire. I also grew up around the med field cuz of my mom. What I want to say is that I had to fight hard for a hysterectomy and was refused one even though I was an adult, would have died with any othher treatment, and it eventually got so bad that I could barely move, but was told no by a male doc till I found a specialist (male) who said it was my choice). Kicker? Was infirtile anyways by then. Then, with being forced to keep silent abt the assault, developing PTSD, and still having to hear the guy and about him is hell. I think if I'd become pregnant from a rape, even though I'm a Christian and think abortion is wrong, I would have done it. The amount of fighting women have to do to have any ccontrol over what happens or doesn't happen to our bodies is absolutely disgusting and horrible and, yeah, another sexual assault/rape psychologically and physically. How about men who have been raped or choose between death or childbirth set up the laws regarding all of this? Or listen to us??? I agree with the original poster. This is terrifying.



What you say definitely matters :) I think it's great that you're already tackling such an important issue in your own mind.

Agree completely. I never understood how anyone who argues for the sanctity of life will completely disregard the life of the woman.

Secondly, that article horrified me. The amount of power some individuals come into possession of, is too much for any single person and I think corruption is inevitable which is how some of these crazy ideas are brought about. And it doesn't take much to attract followers. Some people, my grandma as a prime example, allow the government to do whatever. She prefers to stay blind and happy and unfortuntely that's not the way to be. That's how these ideas are progressed.
But those are just my thoughts on it. Good discussion topic!




Who determines if the pregnancy is the result of the woman's negligence? And how far does the investigation go to prove this?
If rape is one of the few ways to gain and medically safe abortion (as opposed to the unsafe backyard abortions) how do we deal with the potential increase in rape claims?
Who is responsible for the financial support of the woman and child?
Consent to sex is not consent to pregnancy.
And one individual's rights do not trump another's, so even if we grant the fetus personhood (which when the arguments aren't religious is the main thrust here) no person has the right to use another's body, one cannot be compelled to donate blood, bone marrow, organs, skin ect. Consider the case of a man who runs over a child, they are both taken to the emergency room and it turns out that coincidentally they driver and child have the same rare blood type and the child needs a transfusion, the only option is the driver. He cannot be compelled, even if the the child's death will the the result of not receiving a transfusion, to donate his blood.
Do you not see the slippery slope here? Soon we'll be investigating women's lives when she miscarries for possibles murder charges, did she smoke, drink, take medications ect ect. Not long after that fertile women will be forbidden certain activities because they could be pregnant and or it may effect possible future pregnancies before long women become nothing more than walking talking incubators...
And before people trot out he adoption alternative, I'd like to remind folk that there are millions of children already in the world, millions, waiting for adoption by loving families granted they're not all babies, but life ain't perfect.

I love that this discussion is so open with so many intelligent people, and no disrespect. Thank you for beginning this, Jennifer, and to everybody else for adding your thoughts in a respectful manner. I will definitely be participating in more discussions on this site, as there is no petty drama. :D

That's what makes this so creepy. There's artificial insemination, surrogates are becoming a reality...even at this level of technology, it is possible that a situation could arise where some pregnancies are conceived deliberately for providing fetal tissue samples. And once that's accepted....


I haven't seen it categorised as that, but I agree that it wasn't meant to be taken that way, in fact one of the things I loved most about it was the unbiased way that the issue was tackled by Shusterman, that he never comes down on one side or the other, just shows both the sides and allows you to make up your own mind.
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Please discuss. Yes, obviously I'm coming from a pro-choice perspective (and I'm female), but I'm interested in all opinions here.
Specifically, the point the article makes that zygotes are being given more rights than fully mature human beings in many states is the parallel I'm seeing with Unwind--is that not the case in the book?
What do you folks think? :)