The Twin Obsessions: Daemon and Dawson discussion

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message 201: by [deleted user] (new)

That sounds cool, how did it slip my mind?


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Rachel (rachv) | 133 comments Emily wrote: "Well I said there was a lot going on...."
that you did..... and u weren't kiddin'


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Rachel (rachv) | 133 comments Emily wrote: "That sounds cool, how did it slip my mind?"

what??


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Rachel (rachv) | 133 comments now lets get to a crazy hot make out scene with Daemon and Katy;))) hahahahahahaha


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Rachel (rachv) | 133 comments the word usage??? sorry, I'm a bit lost..:( lol


message 206: by [deleted user] (new)

Yes.


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Rachel (rachv) | 133 comments oooh ok!!! lol well feel free to use it?? haha when u (hopefully soon) write ur next part:) lol


message 208: by [deleted user] (new)

Ah, I'm exhausted, but it was fun writing for you guys. I'll give more tomorrow...check out my writings you might enjoy them...


message 209: by Rachel (new) - rated it 5 stars

Rachel (rachv) | 133 comments lol ok:) will do and it was fun reading them... ur really good:) hope to read some more eventually!!


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Rachel (rachv) | 133 comments Hey Em!! Any more??? It's a new day chickadee!!!!!!!:)


message 211: by [deleted user] (new)

Yes, have patience Chica ;)


message 212: by Rachel (new) - rated it 5 stars

Rachel (rachv) | 133 comments :( ok......... Lol I'm still sneaking. My teachers are oblivious!!!!! Hahaha can't wait Em:)


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Rachel (rachv) | 133 comments sad face:(


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Ariella Mendez (mendezariella) | 21 comments omg omg omg nooooooooo you cant let them get captured!!!


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Rachel (rachv) | 133 comments awwww thanx Em:)) and holy shit!!!!!


message 216: by [deleted user] (new)

What do you think of Leo?


message 217: by Rachel (new) - rated it 5 stars

Rachel (rachv) | 133 comments hahahaha he's still kinda fishy to me, but he's on the right path.:) keep going!! ur on a roll!!


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Rachel (rachv) | 133 comments awesome!!!! Dawson!!!!! heehee Leo is walking on eggshells.... Katy and Dee crack me up.. Daemon....... ah Daemon:)


message 219: by [deleted user] (new)

Yup, Leo is in a tight spot right now.


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Rachel (rachv) | 133 comments hahaha soooo what do they do???? lol


message 221: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 28, 2012 04:01PM) (new)

Well the main goal is to get Beth and Leo's grandma back, but how it happens is still a mystery....


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Rachel (rachv) | 133 comments ok that makes sense:) but i'd have to see it in context...(hint hint);) lol and I'm curious on how Katy and Daemon react to this little pow wow.... hahaha


message 223: by Stormy (new) - rated it 5 stars

Stormy (blueeyedbooknerd) I loved that one, Em!


Maida (Medley of Books) (maidasmedleyofbooks) HOLY FUCKING POPSICLE STICKS!!!!!!! FUCK FUCK FUCK EMILY YOU...YOU...YOU...YOU.... HOLY SHIT!!!! I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY...I AM LOVING..NO...MORE THAN LOVING THIS STORY....AND DAWSON COMES BACK...WOOT WOOT AND LEO IS GOOD-ish WOOT WOOT!!!! EMILY JUST MARRY ME WOMAN!!!!!! I AM ALREADY IN LOVE WITH YOU SOOO THAT SHOULD MAKE YOUR DECISION EASIER!!!! =)

This shows my love for you and your amazing story!!!

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This shows my excitement every time you post new parts!!!

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message 225: by [deleted user] (new)

Shit Maida! that's a lot hon, I love ya too!


shre ♡ (shreshre) HELLO....-_-...why have i not heard of these awesome posts by You??? Maida should at least have had the decency to advertise THAT! :D AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME EMMY-BEAR!!! :D


message 227: by [deleted user] (new)

Oh sorry, I should have told you :( Thank you Shrey


shre ♡ (shreshre) No seriously, nice Shreya is gone. YOU BETTER FREAKIN WRITE A BOOK AND SEND IT TO A PUBLISHER BEFORE WE FORM A MOB....for real


message 229: by [deleted user] (new)

Well, you can check out my writing and let me know what you think...


shre ♡ (shreshre) I will. thanks for writing luv. :D


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Rachel (rachv) | 133 comments AWESOME!!!!!! KEEP GOING CHICKADEE:))!!


message 232: by [deleted user] (new)

Hey Rache, you gonna post, I'd love know what happens next....

And I will give you another part today....


message 233: by Rachel (new) - rated it 5 stars

Rachel (rachv) | 133 comments ok.... its a bit of a short one tho.... but give me a min.. and i will email u:)


message 234: by [deleted user] (new)

Key ;)


Maida (Medley of Books) (maidasmedleyofbooks) Awesome new part Emily! I can't wait to see what happens when they get to Leo's house.....Is there by any chance a hot Dee and Leo scene coming up??? *getting excited by the minute* And I'm sorry Shreya I totally should have advertised Em's work!! MY BAD! ;P


message 236: by [deleted user] (new)

I'm writing don't mess up my thoughts, you'll see....


Maida (Medley of Books) (maidasmedleyofbooks) Okay okay okay..keep your panties on woman! I'll mind my own business until you write some other amazing bat shit crazy stuff for me to squeal and get excited over!


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Rachel (rachv) | 133 comments Emily wrote: "Key ;)"

didn't email u... just posted it...:)


message 239: by Stormy (new) - rated it 5 stars

Stormy (blueeyedbooknerd) DUDE! EM, Your amazing! I'm going to read your writing because you read mine and because I'm sure it's awesome! ")


message 240: by [deleted user] (new)

I'm crying right now, I just wrote a whole huge part and I left the computer for a second to clear a cooking dispute, and my young brother ERASED IT ALL!!!! AHHHHH!

BTW thanks Storms


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Rachel (rachv) | 133 comments THAT IS AWFUL!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHH:((((((( why is the world so cruel.......


message 242: by [deleted user] (new)

I know, I'm murderously angry right now!


message 243: by Rachel (new) - rated it 5 stars

Rachel (rachv) | 133 comments Wanna take another shot????


message 244: by [deleted user] (new)

I'm on it...


message 245: by Stormy (new) - rated it 5 stars

Stormy (blueeyedbooknerd) Give him a good slap in the head for me, Em.


message 246: by [deleted user] (new)

I kinda already did....


message 247: by Stormy (new) - rated it 5 stars

Stormy (blueeyedbooknerd) LOL GOOD!


message 248: by Rachel (new) - rated it 5 stars

Rachel (rachv) | 133 comments Lol Em no time for that!!! But thanx!!! U have work to do missy!!


message 249: by [deleted user] (last edited Mar 30, 2012 12:40AM) (new)

I'm so sorry for the delay guys, this was my third try. But glad I finally made it. There will more tomorrow if I'm capable....


New Guy (part 11)

The house was well hidden, most of it was underground. From outside it looked like a warehouse, that was about to fall over from old age. Up close, however, you could see that it was only the trashy color that gave you the deceptive assumption.

Inside, it was very spacious, and surprisingly airy. Dee felt strangely safe there, and now she had both brothers too. The room they stepped into had everything a living room could ask for, couch and all. Everything looked normal, except the weird objects on the shelfs. Dee couldn't figure out what they were for.

“Make yourselves at home.” Leo said, clearing some clutter off the floor. “Or whatever...I'm going to check on the rooms.” Then left the room.

“I wish I told my mom about this.” Katy said, regretfully. “She'll worry...”

“It shouldn't be that long.” Daemon assured her, tho he didn't look convinced. “It's better that way anyway...” he dropped himself on the couch, looking up at her worried expression. He patted the seat next to him. “Come here.” She did as he asked. “Kitten....It'll be alright.” he promised.

Dee's mind, however, was elsewhere. She was focused on the weird objects, and the peculiar design of the house. She wandered out of the room and into the hallway. There were four door. She opened the first to see a room full of machinery. Some things looked new to her, after a quick look she moved on to the other rooms. The second door opened to a nice smelling bathroom. It looked fashionable, and ideal for comfort.

She stepped out to see the third door. It had stacks of science books, tables, and tools.
Tubes lined the walls, adding a mad-scientist feel to the room. She saw a sketch book on one of the tables. Flipping through it, she saw they were precise drawings of the human brain. Another book lay right besides it, this one tho, had poetry in it. Beautifully daunting poetry!

It was filled with death, misery, and loss. She became engrossed in it as it tore at her heart and left her in tears, that she almost jumped out of her skin (which SHE, of course, can do!) when someone tapped her shoulder. It was Leo...

“Sorry,” he said, “But some of these things are lethal upon touch...” he eyed the book in her hand.

“What is this place?” she asked.

“My study actually...or lab.”

“What do you do here, with all this stuff?”

“I...” he hesitated. “ I was always fascinated with medical chemistry.”

That didn't sound like him. Not the novel-reading-Leo, she always penned him as a writer.

“I also write a bit of poetry...sometimes...” he finished, still eying the book in her hand.

“Oh...” she puts the books back down. “So, why are you so fascinated?”

“I had dreams.....of finding a cure....” she waited for him to elaborate, but he didn't volunteer any more.

“For what?” she almost lost it!

“A brain disease.” he said simply, but it sounded like she dragged it out of him.

“What brain disease?” it was Dawson who asked that question.

“It doesn't have a name, and it's too rare for anyone to care.” he tensed up on the last of his answer. “Excuse me, please don't get too close to these tubes. They're toxic.” After grabbing both notebooks from the table, he hastily exited the room , leaving two confused aliens behind....

{To be continued....

Emily


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Stormy (blueeyedbooknerd) Mysterious......I likey! LOL


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