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Coughing, I brushed the dust off the old trunk. There was a padlock, but someone had broken it a long time ago. Slowly, I lifted the lid to find... ...a dusty, old, smelly trenchcoat. Well that's disappointing, I thought. I pulled it out of the chest. Laying it over a chair, I started hitting it with a cane I found, to get the dust out. When it was pretty much clean, I realized it wasn't black, or brown, or any normal trenchcoat color. It was almost...clear, see-through. Maybe it was more special than I had thought. On a whim, I put it on. Seeing a mirror across the attic, I walked to it to see how I looked.
Nothing. That's what there was. Nothing. I was gone.
I could still see myself if I looked down, but I wasn't in the mirror.
I ran downstairs to ask my mom about the mirror, forgetting in my hurry to take the coat off. I found her in the kitchen. "Mom, guess what I found in the attic?"
She turned around. "Where are you dear?" she asked. I stared at her. I was standing right in front of her, why couldn't she see me?
She started to walk toward me. She would have run me over if I hadn't moved out of her way. "Brooklyn?" she called. "Where'd you go?"
I grinned, somewhat evilly, to myself. I didn't know how or why, but this coat made me invisible. Oh, the possibilities!
Coughing, I brushed the dust off the old trunk. There was a padlock, but someone had broken it a long time ago. Slowly, I lifted the lid to find...an orange fox."What th-" I was cut short as I realized just what my 'treasure was, "Oh my gosh, Tails! What happened?"
The kitsune coughed a little and looked up at me with sleepy blue eyes, "I don't know, one second I was at the base, the next...I woke up in here."
I pulled him out, "Are you alright buddy?"
He nodded, "Yeah, thanks Sonic."
I smiled, "Why don't we go to the hangar and take the Tornado for a spin?"
"Alright!" he said happily, "Let's go!"
I gave him a thumbs up, "Okay! Do you feel up to flying or do you just wanna walk?"
He stopped to think for a second, "I can fly."
"Are ya sure buddy?" I asked worriedly.
"Yeah. I'm not to bad off."
"Okay, let's hurry. Before Amy takes a whack at us!"
He laughed then clutched his chest painfully, "Ow!"
"What's wrong?" I asked.
Before he could reply, a beam of light appeared above his head, and whisked him away, "Sonic!"
"Tails!" I yelled running up a tree.
"Hahaha! Better hurry quick hedgehog!" Eggman laughed, "Or you'll never see your friend again!"
Coughing, I brushed the dust off the old trunk. There was a padlock, but someone had broken it a long time ago. Slowly, I lifted the lid to find a small wreath. It was made of a silky blue material, and I brushed my fingers over it's tightly woven surface.Curiously, I put it on. I laughed at myself in the mirror. It looked like a snake had wrapped itself around my head. Who knew that my mother owned so many things before she passed away? I tried not to feel sad. She didn't deserve to drown, but she wouldn't want me sulking in solitude. My mom would have wanted me to explore her treasures. She loved mysteries.
I leaned over to look for anything else in the trunk. Beneath cobwebs in the corners were what looked like small pearls. As dust billowed in the ray of light coming from the attic window, I reached in and picked up the pearl. My fingers were covered in thread.
The pearl glistened brightly, and then it started to make a whooshing noise. I almost dropped it. Why was it sounding like waves thrashing against an ocean? While I searched it for any speakers or sound effect buttons, it continued to sound like the sounds of water gurgling and splashing.
It's smooth white surface was now turning blue...
I decided to tuck it in the wreath and tell Dad about it. I still had to organize the wardrobe of her old gowns and jewelry, and then sweep up the floor with the broom. Absentmindedly, I lifted the pearl to the wreath and tried to stick it within the band of the wreath.
But it started roaring, like a huge tide. I shivered. I pulled the pearl back into sight. It was dark blue.
And so was my surroundings.
Whoa. You guys are good. Kayla, I LOVE how you make everything Sonic! It's really creative the way you can tie Sonic into anything!
Shreya, you MUST continue. I mean, you can't just stop there. I have to know what happens!!
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Coughing, I brushed the dust off the old trunk. There was a padlock, but someone had broken it a long time ago. Slowly, I lifted the lid to find a ring the color of sand in the Sahara deset. I looked at it carefully. "Now why would someone just put a plane old ring in here? It seems very wierd," I muttered. Then I thought to myself. Tori, you've seen wierder! YOU WERE SENT TO THE WORLD OF KING ARTHUR AND FOUND OUT _______(I'm putting blanks, I haven't finished the story yet ;) Don't wanna spoil it) THIS IS NOT WIERD! I sighed. Suddenly I heard a voice. I looked down towards it. It seemed to be coming from a lonely looking book. I picked it up. "1001 Arabian Nights," I muttered. Pink mist came out of the book. I saw a tan colored arm that had a golden braclet around its wrist. It grabbed my arm and pulled me in. I came faced to face with a girl with light pink hair. It was in a ponytail that flipped up. She wore a small white tank top and a light pink see-through shawl. She wore light purple genie pants. She looked at me.
"I really, really need your help! The world of the Arabian Nights are disappearing and only the one with hair of fire can save it," she said. I looked at her.
"So, this again" I muttered.
XD!! You have taught me well. Oh and I hope your planning on writing this as a story, cuz you just gotta point in the cliffhanger war.
@Brooklyn: Thanks! I like it too. Thanks for the prompt! I decided my next story is going to be alot like that.@Kayla: Like the dramatic ending, but may I ask How in the world did you find a tree to climb up next to a trunk? I love how you said Tails looked up at you with "sleepy blue eyes." It sounds so adorable.
@Ana: I almost forgot to comment on your story, which to be honest, I liked the most. I'm surprised it's not Sonic-related. But hey, you have an all-around talent! Why does she mutter, "So, this again" at the end though?
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Lol! Oh. I'll read it as soon as all this homework is finished. it'll only take a few eternities to complete.
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Shreya wrote: "@Brooklyn: Thanks! I like it too. Thanks for the prompt! I decided my next story is going to be alot like that.@Kayla: Like the dramatic ending, but may I ask How in the world did you find a tree..."
The trunk magically appeared in the forest. And thanks!!
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Anastacia ~(*Tails's creepy stalker*)~ wrote: "haha nice XD"What's wrong with a trunk in a forest???
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Anastacia ~(*Tails's creepy stalker*)~ wrote: "nothing XD nothing at all.... OMG KAYLA HAVE YOU SEEN THE MOVIE RADIO REBEL I FUDGING LOVE IT XD"YES I LOVE IT TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT MOVIE IS FLIPPIN' AWESOME!!!!
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Anastacia ~(*Tails's creepy stalker*)~ wrote: ":P LOL...You need to finished book 5......lololololol"I know. Once I get on the computer I'll add some more. It's kinda hard on my phone. (Oh I got a new phone yesterday!!)
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That sucks. I really like mine...OOH TV!!!!!!!
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Anastacia ~(*Tails's creepy stalker*)~ wrote: "what the fudge XD"What I was watching tv!
Shreya wrote: "You guys are so off-topic :D"I guess we were huh? XD! What can I say, my life revolves around tv and computers.
Shreya wrote: ":) same hea"XD!!!
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I guess we were huh? XD! What can I say, my life revolves around tv and computers."
OMG YOU TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11 XD AND YOU SHREYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD OMG IM NOT ALONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
Anastacia ~(*Tails's creepy stalker*)~ wrote: "Kayla wrote: "Shreya wrote: "You guys are so off-topic :D"I guess we were huh? XD! What can I say, my life revolves around tv and computers."
OMG YOU TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..."
XD! Hurray for not being alone for being immersed within technology!!!
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Coughing, I brushed the dust off the old trunk. There was a padlock, but someone had broken it a long time ago. Slowly, I lifted the lid to find...