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Definitely the next laser pick . . .

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message 1: by Ben (new)

Ben | 116 comments Warning: even the Amazon page is a little NSFW, not to mention the excerpt.

http://www.amazon.com/Wesley-Crusher-...


message 2: by Sean (new)

Sean O'Hara (seanohara) | 2365 comments Wil Wheaton's ego knows no limit.


message 3: by Keith (new)

Keith Kelly (nedkelly) | 79 comments Amazon wants me to "click to look inside" but I just cant do it!!!


message 4: by Micah (new)

Micah (onemorebaker) | 1071 comments Keith wrote: "Amazon wants me to "click to look inside" but I just cant do it!!!"

Don't. I did. Out of total morbid curiosity of course. And god. Oh god. There are just some things that one can not unsee. It was awful. And I did it at work so maybe I'll be collecting unemployment soon....that or the Sys Admins will avoid me from now on because they believe I'm in to some freaky shit. Either way I'm screwed! ;)


message 5: by Kate (new)

Kate O'Hanlon (kateohanlon) | 778 comments Quite aside from the freaky shit the writing is just horrific. There's also a change of tense on the first page, always a clue that no one has even attempted to edit it.


message 6: by Micah (new)

Micah (onemorebaker) | 1071 comments Kate wrote: "Quite aside from the freaky shit the writing is just horrific. There's also a change of tense on the first page, always a clue that no one has even attempted to edit it."

The fact that you noticed a tense change among all that other stuff makes me think your pretty awesome! Just FYI. You made me LOL.

Can you imagine an editor's face once they were contracted for that project? o_0 is just the half of it.


message 7: by Esther (new)

Esther (eshchory) You would have to pay an editor extra for 'mental sufferring'


message 8: by Tamahome (new)

Tamahome | 7234 comments Is that with Ashley Judd?


message 9: by Boots (new)

Boots (rubberboots) | 499 comments Esther wrote: "You would have to pay an editor extra for 'mental suffering'"

I thought that's what editors are paid for in the first place.


message 10: by Esther (new)

Esther (eshchory) Boots wrote: "Esther wrote: "You would have to pay an editor extra for 'mental suffering'"

I thought that's what editors are paid for in the first place."


LOL


message 11: by Stan (last edited Mar 14, 2012 11:10AM) (new)

Stan Slaughter | 359 comments Hilarious - the first words of the first user review,

"Clearly worth the $0.00..."

And that was for a positive (and obviously paid for) review :)

Read the other reviews - they are fantastically funny too

"You know, if it's one thing that's lacking in the Star Trek universe, it's fan fiction..."

"Never before have I come across a work of art as majestic and as fulfilling as this..."

Etc...


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