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Yes, too many notes. Why do we need to know about her hair? Is that central to the plot? Or if this is a clever way of telling us it was sunny out that day, why do we n..."
Yes, those notes are at perfect pitch. :)
Adam wrote: "Richard wrote: "last of the mohicans is an example of a good book at a bad moment in the history of writing. american literature at that time was supposed to be loooong, drawn out, complicated sen..."
anything else?
anything else?

Yes, Cooper kills off two of the main characters. I hated that about Last of the Mohicans. Also, he got the tribal names wrong - there were Mohegans and Mahicans, but no Mohicans.

Yes, too many notes. Why do we need to know about her hair? Is that central to the plot? Or if this is a clever way of telling us it was sunny out that day..."
Thank you, Patricia. I just wanted to let you know I I could do it, as you undoubtedly can.:)
Patricia wrote: Yes, Cooper kills off two of the main characters. I hated that about Last of the Mohicans. Also, he got the tribal names wrong - there were Mohegans and Mahicans, but no Mohicans..."
maybe that was intentional to avoid using one real tribe. by using a fictional tribe, he gets to avoide specific details that readers might pick on that are not perfectly accurate.
maybe that was intentional to avoid using one real tribe. by using a fictional tribe, he gets to avoide specific details that readers might pick on that are not perfectly accurate.

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I read your review. I felt the same way after reading The Twelfth Enchantment by David Liss - amazing writer but a mess of a story. I'm much more patient with unknown writers with good stories that are badly written. They don't have the publishing 'machine' behind them for badly needed edits and rewrites.

Yes, too many notes. Why do we need to know about her hair? Is that central to the plot? Or if this is a clever way of telling us it was sunny out that day, why do we need a weather repor..."
Patricia, there are a lot of hair freaks.:) Anyway, there is no plot. That line is not from a story. I just threw it out off the top of my head for reaction. But if it was from a story, my next line woud be: Gertrude screamed, her last pitiful utterance as the famished cannibal, to the delightful grunts of the other hungry savages gathered about, yanked her by the hair and threw her into the boiling pot.
How's that? Any better for notes?