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Sep 02, 2012 06:21PM
Teen Wolf c: amazing show ever<3
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The main dude was at this big gathering of middle-schoolers that my sister was in. She watched as he walked past her, smiling and waving at all the screaming girls. She didn't think it was a big deal, but she doesn't watch the show, so her lack of enthusiasm is understandable.
I hate her, I'm so jealous. I want to die right now. Scott/Tyler Posey is the main character. But I LOVE Stiles/Dylan O'Brien the most. If they came to my school, I'd literally cry. That show is like, my favorite of all time. It angers me when other people are like: "Yeeeaahh. I love this show." And they've only seen like.. One episode. I remember when they were still on "Pilot" episode, and I was already in love with the show. GOD I HAVE TO MEET DYLAN<33
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._.*blank stare at the POV posts*
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I feel mine is inadequate now. :/
Mine was literally JUST dialogue...
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I read all of yours and mine pales in comparison since it's literally just dialogue...but the thing is...
GLaDoS is literally a machine... so she doesn't really move... or anything for that matter besides try to kill you. :P
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IDK if I'd say challenging, but different is a better term I think, lol. :)Thanks!
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Haha, I just love the character I did my POV from, as a younger woman she's so polite and shy, but when she's transformed into an old lady through a curse, she becomes spunky and loud, it's really funny!
I only saw one of the person's other movies (which I absolutely positively still LOVE BTW):"Spirited Away"
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Welp. I hope you like it.
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Run, he said. Run for your life.
It vaguely occurs to me that this is a stranger. That I have better things to do, like help my mum with the laundry and get Mickey a present for his birthday.
That I ran away with him.
I see it, though. I can see it in his eyes. He's lonely. He's all alone. A lonely traveler, lost in time.
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It's been so long. So long since I've seen him. So long since I've seen his face. I know he's there, and I know that he would tear apart the universe for me, if he could. I don't know why he hasn't. He's working on it, though, I'm sure. I love him. He loves me. Perhaps time passes differently here. That must be it.
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Goodbye again. But how could he say goodbye? I worked so hard - so hard - and this is what I get. A poor reward for what I've done. A mere copy of him. Does he not understand? I love him. He must know this. But... how could he send me back here? How could he think about that?
And why can't he just say it?
--
"Quite right, too. If it's my last chance to say it... Rose Tyler... I-"
Hearts shatter on the rocks at Bad Wolf Bay. Something new to one, and much to familiar to the other.
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"Rose," he says. "Rose would know."
Doesn't he understand that I love him? Doesn't he get that I don't want to be left to be second-best? Doesn't he get that I'm my own person? That I'm different than this Rose Tyler? Why can't I be good enough? Why can't he get it?
Why am I not enough?
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That's it. I'm done here. I'm done with him. I have more important things to do than waste around wishing he'd actually care. I have family. I have people who love me and appreciate me. I don't love him any less... but he doesn't love me. It's that simple. I don't want to, but I have to. I'm moving on. I'm ready for this.
I am good.
--
"You know what, Doctor? I spent my time on here feeling like I was second-best. But you know what? I'm good. Oh, I'm good."
She's ready. He's not. But he can't be everybody's knight in shining armor. (He's not really anyone's, actually. But he tries.)
---
"I just want a mate," he said. "Not to mate, a mate!"
I could use a friend right now.
It's been so plain - I want to help people. I want that adventure. I want that thrill in my life. The traveling and that odd noise and that skinny twig of a man. I want this. I want this more than I ever wanted anything else before. A purpose. Yes, this is good. I'm a new person. This is a new life.
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I'm never going to give up this life. I'm never going to. Everything is so perfect. Everything is how it's supposed to be.
This is who I'm meant to be, I'm sure of it.
-
I don't want this. I don't want to forget. I don't want to ever forget this. How could he make me forget this? I don't want to--
Oh. Who are you?
--
"You are the most important woman in all of creation, Donna Noble.
There's always something missing. There always will be. Maybe sometimes she'll dream of the mad man with the box. But oh, she's alive. That's enough.
---
"Five minutes," he said. Five minutes, and he'll be back.
I'll wait here for him. I know he's coming back. I know he will. I'll be ready for him when he does come back, too. I'll be ready for him, and we can go everywhere. Forever. Through all of time and space in his polece bocks.
Yes, it'll be perfect.
Just five more minutes.
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Doctor. Rory. Doctor!
They'll come back for me. He always does. He'll get me out of this place, the handbots will be gone, all of that. He's going to come back for me. He has to. My Raggedy Man has never let me down. He's never let anyone down. He's not going to let me down. He can't let me down, not now.
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I hate him. I have never hated anyone as much as I hate him.
The Doctor. I hate him.
I used to believe in happy endings. I used to think that things could get better. Well, thirty years in a living hell can change that for somebody.
Nothing in the world could ever make me love him. Nothing in the world could ever make me stop hating him. Nothing. Nothing, nothing, nothing.
Not after all that he has put me through.
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Doctor!
I need you. Where are you? I need you, now. Like I've never needed you before.
You need to fix this for me. I know you can. You can fix this like you straighten your bowtie, like you adjust that godforsaken fez.
Now where are you when we need you?
--
"Amy Pond. The girl who waited."
Waiting, waiting, waiting. A lifetime can pass. But here's a wake-up call - she's not a little girl anymore. This little girl is no longer a little girl. She is a woman. A warrior.
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I'm here, chin boy! Now show me the stars!
Why can't you help me now? I need you! Get me out of here!
Oh, I've spent so much time here. An entire year. And now you're here. You can get me out of here. I know that you can. You need to.
You can get me out of here. You can show me the stars.
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"I am not a Dalek. I am human."
The little girl, so lost. Look at her, there's nothing left. The little girl is so lost inside her own mind.
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Run, he said. Run for your life.
It vaguely occurs to me that this is a stranger. That I have better things to do, like help my mum with the laundry and get Mickey a present for his birthday.
That I ran away with him.
I see it, though. I can see it in his eyes. He's lonely. He's all alone. A lonely traveler, lost in time.
-
It's been so long. So long since I've seen him. So long since I've seen his face. I know he's there, and I know that he would tear apart the universe for me, if he could. I don't know why he hasn't. He's working on it, though, I'm sure. I love him. He loves me. Perhaps time passes differently here. That must be it.
-
Goodbye again. But how could he say goodbye? I worked so hard - so hard - and this is what I get. A poor reward for what I've done. A mere copy of him. Does he not understand? I love him. He must know this. But... how could he send me back here? How could he think about that?
And why can't he just say it?
--
"Quite right, too. If it's my last chance to say it... Rose Tyler... I-"
Hearts shatter on the rocks at Bad Wolf Bay. Something new to one, and much to familiar to the other.
---
"Rose," he says. "Rose would know."
Doesn't he understand that I love him? Doesn't he get that I don't want to be left to be second-best? Doesn't he get that I'm my own person? That I'm different than this Rose Tyler? Why can't I be good enough? Why can't he get it?
Why am I not enough?
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That's it. I'm done here. I'm done with him. I have more important things to do than waste around wishing he'd actually care. I have family. I have people who love me and appreciate me. I don't love him any less... but he doesn't love me. It's that simple. I don't want to, but I have to. I'm moving on. I'm ready for this.
I am good.
--
"You know what, Doctor? I spent my time on here feeling like I was second-best. But you know what? I'm good. Oh, I'm good."
She's ready. He's not. But he can't be everybody's knight in shining armor. (He's not really anyone's, actually. But he tries.)
---
"I just want a mate," he said. "Not to mate, a mate!"
I could use a friend right now.
It's been so plain - I want to help people. I want that adventure. I want that thrill in my life. The traveling and that odd noise and that skinny twig of a man. I want this. I want this more than I ever wanted anything else before. A purpose. Yes, this is good. I'm a new person. This is a new life.
-
I'm never going to give up this life. I'm never going to. Everything is so perfect. Everything is how it's supposed to be.
This is who I'm meant to be, I'm sure of it.
-
I don't want this. I don't want to forget. I don't want to ever forget this. How could he make me forget this? I don't want to--
Oh. Who are you?
--
"You are the most important woman in all of creation, Donna Noble.
There's always something missing. There always will be. Maybe sometimes she'll dream of the mad man with the box. But oh, she's alive. That's enough.
---
"Five minutes," he said. Five minutes, and he'll be back.
I'll wait here for him. I know he's coming back. I know he will. I'll be ready for him when he does come back, too. I'll be ready for him, and we can go everywhere. Forever. Through all of time and space in his polece bocks.
Yes, it'll be perfect.
Just five more minutes.
-
Doctor. Rory. Doctor!
They'll come back for me. He always does. He'll get me out of this place, the handbots will be gone, all of that. He's going to come back for me. He has to. My Raggedy Man has never let me down. He's never let anyone down. He's not going to let me down. He can't let me down, not now.
-
I hate him. I have never hated anyone as much as I hate him.
The Doctor. I hate him.
I used to believe in happy endings. I used to think that things could get better. Well, thirty years in a living hell can change that for somebody.
Nothing in the world could ever make me love him. Nothing in the world could ever make me stop hating him. Nothing. Nothing, nothing, nothing.
Not after all that he has put me through.
-
Doctor!
I need you. Where are you? I need you, now. Like I've never needed you before.
You need to fix this for me. I know you can. You can fix this like you straighten your bowtie, like you adjust that godforsaken fez.
Now where are you when we need you?
--
"Amy Pond. The girl who waited."
Waiting, waiting, waiting. A lifetime can pass. But here's a wake-up call - she's not a little girl anymore. This little girl is no longer a little girl. She is a woman. A warrior.
---
I'm here, chin boy! Now show me the stars!
Why can't you help me now? I need you! Get me out of here!
Oh, I've spent so much time here. An entire year. And now you're here. You can get me out of here. I know that you can. You need to.
You can get me out of here. You can show me the stars.
--
"I am not a Dalek. I am human."
The little girl, so lost. Look at her, there's nothing left. The little girl is so lost inside her own mind.
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Oh yeah. Five bevause I couldn't choose one, btw.
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It is my favorite show. ❤ Just the depth in all the characters, oh my goodness!
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You've never seen doctor who?
Hahaha just give it a watch!
ʘṩωıƞ ʘṩωɑʟƌ wrote: "Welp. I hope you like it.-------------------------
Run, he said. Run for your life.
It vaguely occurs to me that this is a stranger. That I have better things to do, like help my mum with the l..."
Wow... Summarizes the whole show. I haven't watched the season 7 episode yet, so - thanks a lot for that! :(
But all in all, very good.
ʘṩωıƞ ʘṩωɑʟƌ wrote: "It is my favorite show. ❤ Just the depth in all the characters, oh my goodness!"I always found Rose annoying.
Remember - "I know, I have a doctor that goes to far away places". That's what I always think about when I think of Martha.
I saw the first 3 episodes of Doctor Who, terrible effects really, but I guess its just for right now. I don't like the girl, Rose. Her face and accent seems.... argh. I hope she changes like Doctor does in season 2. I snuck a peak. Only till: "OH YEAH! Merry Christmas!:3" *Faint* xD
XD Rose isn't the best. And Christopher Eccleston is okay. David Tennant with Catherine Tate was the best, but Matt Smith as the Doctor is my one true love. :D
ʘṩωıƞ ʘṩωɑʟƌ wrote: "Welp. I hope you like it.-------------------------
Run, he said. Run for your life.
It vaguely occurs to me that this is a stranger. That I have better things to do, like help my mum with the l..."
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Autumn, this is what i was talking to you about when I said mine wasn't up to par. :P
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But... but... *sigh*I sleep on it.
-_- ZzZ
EJ, Zombie, Ugly wrote: "ʘṩωıƞ ʘṩωɑʟƌ wrote: "Welp. I hope you like it.
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Run, he said. Run for your life.
It vaguely occurs to me that this is a stranger. That I have better things to do, like h..."
awwww, thank you!
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Run, he said. Run for your life.
It vaguely occurs to me that this is a stranger. That I have better things to do, like h..."
awwww, thank you!
♥Angel♥ ~Dylan O'Brien Is Mine Forever, AND EVER♥ wrote: "I saw the first 3 episodes of Doctor Who, terrible effects really, but I guess its just for right now. I don't like the girl, Rose. Her face and accent seems.... argh. I hope she changes like Docto..."
I hope you realize that the Rose episodes with the Ninth Doctor were made in 2005 on a low budget. I promise it's a ton better now.
And as for her appearance... um, her appearance doesn't define her character. And as for her accent? Um... that's Billie Piper's accent. It just is.
I hope you realize that the Rose episodes with the Ninth Doctor were made in 2005 on a low budget. I promise it's a ton better now.
And as for her appearance... um, her appearance doesn't define her character. And as for her accent? Um... that's Billie Piper's accent. It just is.
Kenzie Tomlinsexy wrote: "XD Rose isn't the best. And Christopher Eccleston is okay. David Tennant with Catherine Tate was the best, but Matt Smith as the Doctor is my one true love. :D"Catherine is Donna? Cuz they're definitely best together.
BTW, my fave doctor is TENnant, Don't get me wrong, Matt Smith is awesome, but David Tennant... he's simply David Tennant.
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ʘṩωıƞ ʘṩωɑʟƌ wrote: " ♥Angel♥ ~Dylan O'Brien Is Mine Forever, AND EVER♥ wrote: "I saw the first 3 episodes of Doctor Who, terrible effects really, but I guess its just for right now. I don't like the girl, Rose. Her fa..."Yes, I know. xD And I don't know, I just thought she could've been better. My opinion.
I have that episode on my DVR again. Journey's End. :''(
My favorite companion is Rory, then Donna... but omg I just love them all.
Rose can definitely be annoying... but face it, you're pretty much irritated with every character at some point except maybe Rory and Wilf. Besides, I can't bring myself to dislike Rose. I mean, yeah, she has her flaws, but that makes her a round character. And for who she is to the Doctor... to me, that makes up for her minor annoying-ness.
Rose can definitely be annoying... but face it, you're pretty much irritated with every character at some point except maybe Rory and Wilf. Besides, I can't bring myself to dislike Rose. I mean, yeah, she has her flaws, but that makes her a round character. And for who she is to the Doctor... to me, that makes up for her minor annoying-ness.
- WHY CAN'T ANYONE ANSWER MY QUESTION?!- I thought the way Donna ended was perfect. I mean, I wish she could've stayed forever - she's my favorie companion - but yeah.
- Who's Wilf?
- After Donna, my favorite companion is Jack, then Amy and Rory (it's sorta hard to separate them), then Martha, and last and least, Rose. I really don't like her. She's just... No. I don't care how much they love each other, just no.
But I have a feeling I'm going to like the new companion better than Jack even. I watched the first episode of the new season, and a friend of mine too, and we're both OMG'd. I mean, WOW.
Wilf is Donna's grandfather. You know, the one who the Doctor sacrifices himself for?
And Oswin isn't the new companion! That was one episode! The new companion isn't introduced until Christmas! >.<
And Oswin isn't the new companion! That was one episode! The new companion isn't introduced until Christmas! >.<
ʘṩωıƞ ʘṩωɑʟƌ wrote: "Wilf is Donna's grandfather. You know, the one who the Doctor sacrifices himself for?And Oswin isn't the new companion! That was one episode! The new companion isn't introduced until Christmas! >.<"
Actually she is. She was only introduced in the first one, but you can read online on Wiki or something - she's the companion.
I can't write about the new topic. A friend of mine posted on fb his day the other day and it was so horrible. However I can't write about it cuz I'd feel guilty, and I can't not write about it cuz it was the worst day ever...
Pirl{a חame that sסuחds like spring} wrote: "ʘṩωıƞ ʘṩωɑʟƌ wrote: "Wilf is Donna's grandfather. You know, the one who the Doctor sacrifices himself for?
And Oswin isn't the new companion! That was one episode! The new companion isn't introduc..."
Do you seriously believe that? He said that the new companion wouldn't be introduced until Christmas. She very likely has a connection to the new companion, but she's not actually the same companion.
And Oswin isn't the new companion! That was one episode! The new companion isn't introduc..."
Do you seriously believe that? He said that the new companion wouldn't be introduced until Christmas. She very likely has a connection to the new companion, but she's not actually the same companion.
Look at videos online! There are interviews with her from last year already! Yeah. I believe videos with her and producers speaking.
I want to write but the topic is sorta not my style
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The best day of your life.
Describe the best day of your life in any way you like, but make sure you're getting the point across of why it was your best day! Remember, it's only one day!
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The best day of my life..... I backspaced it eheheheheThe 'Best' Day of My Life
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One that comes to mind happened a long while back, and it wasn't perfect, not by dictionary definition. But it was an overcast day in Seattle with sea-salt-spray curling up the ends of my dirty-blonde tresses. Just two cousins taking a stroll through Rain City, fresh off a city bus with no responsibilities, nowhere to be.
Pier 55 was the first stop, then a boardwalk stroll. We headed through Pike Place smelling hemp, fish, and fresh-cut flowers; we sampled cheese at one stand and tried on felt hats at another. A friendly shopkeeper gave us a freebie sample of body salt.
Then it was the space needle, the science center. A short transit-ride home. We took the bus back to Kirkland, ending our day. And even though it wasn't a perfect day in definition, to me it was the definition of flawless anyway.
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It was over Christmas break last year. My sister and her friends are total Disneyland people, so they decided that they would have their first "Sibling Day" at Disneyland, which meant that they bring their younger siblings to Disneyland.
Coincidentally, three of us are the same age (but one is a year behind in school) and the other two happened to be guys (actually, one of them is my best friend now...). But anyway, our siblings decided to play 'embarrassing parents' for the day, so they made us take pictures together, go on all the rides together, etc. Like, Haunted Mansion froze on this one curve, and so one of them, Hope, started taking pictures and the two guys (Nicky and Joe) were like--covering their faces. It made for some interesting pictures in the end.
But really, the best part of the day was that I actually felt like part of a group for the first time. Like people cared about me, and like I fit in. It turns out that that's how I made my best friends now, and I'm a lot closer with my sister's friends, too.
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I would also include the day my friends and I went to Disneyland last month (and my sister's friends went too, but they were in a separate group), but I will never be able to bring myself to say that that was the best day of my life, because that was the day that God took my sister's friend's dad away from him.
I hope you're doing well, Mr. Burnett, up in Heaven. We all miss you.
Coincidentally, three of us are the same age (but one is a year behind in school) and the other two happened to be guys (actually, one of them is my best friend now...). But anyway, our siblings decided to play 'embarrassing parents' for the day, so they made us take pictures together, go on all the rides together, etc. Like, Haunted Mansion froze on this one curve, and so one of them, Hope, started taking pictures and the two guys (Nicky and Joe) were like--covering their faces. It made for some interesting pictures in the end.
But really, the best part of the day was that I actually felt like part of a group for the first time. Like people cared about me, and like I fit in. It turns out that that's how I made my best friends now, and I'm a lot closer with my sister's friends, too.
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I would also include the day my friends and I went to Disneyland last month (and my sister's friends went too, but they were in a separate group), but I will never be able to bring myself to say that that was the best day of my life, because that was the day that God took my sister's friend's dad away from him.
I hope you're doing well, Mr. Burnett, up in Heaven. We all miss you.
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But, on the brighter side, it sounds like you had a real lovely time. Yeah, it's kind of a great feeling when you're among people who love and appreciate you as you are. It's wonderful when you fit in, especially with people you love and appreciate right back!
