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ali ᵏᵉᵉᵖ ʸᵒᵘʳ ᵐᵒᵘᵗʰ ˢʰᵘᵗ
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Jul 10, 2012 04:48PM
No, not really. I just have alot of Goodreads stuff to do. I'm reading while doing other stuff, but I'll finish eventually.
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Ali wrote: "No, not really. I just have alot of Goodreads stuff to do. I'm reading while doing other stuff, but I'll finish eventually."OK. Anyway I'm going to bed now, so...
A day later isn't too soon, I believe. Read them yet?
Sorry. I had to get off pretty close to when you got off. I'm reading them now. Sorry for the dely.
It's OK. I'm going to bed now anyway, as my grandparents are going to be sleeping in my room for a week I want to get some sleep, to have enough power not to fight again and also to remove all my things from the room.
Do you wish to read my Blackwell Island story or my brand new story: Beyond The Fence about a fictional daughter of Josef Menegle...your choice??
Either one, or both! xD@Pirl: Both stories where amazingly good. This was about the only thing that I could find. You should work on your imagery (Sp?) and you descriptions. You need to be more desriptive when you are writing. Adjectives, adjectives, adjectives. Other than that it was really great.
Still looking for poetry to read????http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
This is all of my stories and the first one is just my poetry.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/9...
If you want to read them. Haha
Okay, I'll get to them when I can. Oh, I'll make a list of whose waiting!
The Waiting List Emma-
Erin- The Mistake
Sarah- These Days of Kelsea's
Billy Jo-
These are the people who are waiting to get their story(ies) read.
Ali wrote: "Either one, or both! xD@Pirl: Both stories where amazingly good. This was about the only thing that I could find. You should work on your imagery (Sp?) and you descriptions. You need to be more d..."
Yes, I knew that. Thank you!
Those WERE old drafts, I had gone through and started editing and was about to repost when, well, my computer crashed with all the unpublished stuff- gone. POOF.
0.0 Wow! And your Welcome!
Hey Ali!
Would you like to take a look at my short story (or stories, if you like the first one)? I'd like someone to take a look at content, but also language. As a non-native speaker I could definitely use some help in that area. Let me know!
Would you like to take a look at my short story (or stories, if you like the first one)? I'd like someone to take a look at content, but also language. As a non-native speaker I could definitely use some help in that area. Let me know!
Helena wrote: "Hey Ali!Would you like to take a look at my short story (or stories, if you like the first one)? I'd like someone to take a look at content, but also language. As a non-native speaker I could def..."
Sure! I'll try my best!
Hey can you read my stuff in this group?
