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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

Just write introduce you characters and get the party started!


message 2: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 143 comments Hi there! I'm Sariah! I am obsessed with my story, Mira! Well, not exactly obsessed, of course.


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

ya well since thats the case your in the right place! :D
Sariah wrote: "Hi there! I'm Sariah! I am obsessed with my story, Mira! Well, not exactly obsessed, of course."


message 4: by Geneva (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 108 comments ;D


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

hows urs going
Geneva wrote: ";D"


message 6: by Geneva (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 108 comments started bout 4 stories. 2 fully into it (not finished)


message 7: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 143 comments Whose, MINE? Great! Well… at a slow part… I mean, the main character, Mira, JUST got pushed into a pit… thinks she's gonna die...


message 8: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 143 comments Good for you, Geneva!


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

ditto :)
Geneva wrote: "started bout 4 stories. 2 fully into it (not finished)"


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

nice is she gonna die?
Sariah wrote: "Whose, MINE? Great! Well… at a slow part… I mean, the main character, Mira, JUST got pushed into a pit… thinks she's gonna die..."


message 11: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 143 comments Of course not! It's only, hmmm, 60 some pages (book pages, not regular pages) into the book! Plus, authors never kill their MAIN characters, for some reason.


I might. ;D


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

Wow 60 pretty good my longest is 40 at the moment. Oh and heres a tip. NEVER EVER kill a main character.
Sariah wrote: "Of course not! It's only, hmmm, 60 some pages (book pages, not regular pages) into the book! Plus, authors never kill their MAIN characters, for some reason.


I might. ;D"



message 14: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 143 comments CICI wrote: "Wow 60 pretty good my longest is 40 at the moment. Oh and heres a tip. NEVER EVER kill a main character.
Sariah wrote: "Of course not! It's only, hmmm, 60 some pages (book pages, not regular page..."


I know. But 'twould be funny. ARE YOU ALL RIGHT????? That creeper dude!!!!!!!! AUGH, I'M STILL FREAKING OUT!!!!!!!!!


message 16: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 143 comments Um, oh, uh, sorry. Just post your writing!


『ᴡɪᴄᴋʟɪɴɢ ᴛʀᴀsʜ ● ɢᴏᴏᴅʙʏᴇ』 (wickling) | 16 comments ok, like if I have it on Goodreads, I post a link or the text or both?


message 18: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 143 comments Text. Or, yeah, maybe both.


『ᴡɪᴄᴋʟɪɴɢ ᴛʀᴀsʜ ● ɢᴏᴏᴅʙʏᴇ』 (wickling) | 16 comments Ok, done, so...if anyone is willing to help, please, by all means


message 20: by Geneva (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 108 comments oooh


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

Cici, could you please make a folder for my writing so that I can post it?


message 22: by Geneva (last edited Oct 11, 2012 04:18PM) (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 108 comments i could if you want. where you want it?


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

It can be anywhere. I don't care.


message 24: by Geneva (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 108 comments k.


Apps *ąþþℓεş щïŧɧ şþℓεεŋ ïş şҩųïşɧγ* (appsl) | 1 comments um...hi??
I'm new to writing, I just started about a week ago so I'm still working on it and I have basically no idea where this story is heading...so, I was looking for some constructive criticism??

here's the link : http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...


message 26: by Geneva (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 108 comments I just got freaking mass lightbulb!!! (or however you say it) Slash and L go on an adventure, ending up meeting a few guys who all seemed determined to arrest them, kill them, and tie them in webbing!


message 27: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 143 comments Sariah *Politics. Ugh.* wrote: "Hi there! I'm Sariah! I am obsessed with my story, Mira! Well, not exactly obsessed, of course."

UPDATE: Mira sucks.


message 28: by Geneva (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 108 comments YOU'RE REWRITING?!?!?!


message 29: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 143 comments Wha'?


message 30: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 143 comments +cocks head+
I repeat...wha'?


message 31: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 143 comments Gwen: i dont evn know
Lorelei: um srry but WHAT???
Phoenix: im going 2 sleep
Mel: hm?
Jett: gots no idea
Gwen: gots AGAIN???


message 32: by Geneva (last edited Jan 04, 2013 06:59PM) (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 108 comments L: mergh...ouch
Slash: boom. still hurting
L: what was that bomb's number?
Slash: Stop poking me
L: Not me
Slash: Oh. Ears hurt...a lot.


message 33: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 143 comments Memo from Agent 5 to Professor Ardent:

Sir, I think you should see what we discovered on ex-target's systems. If only for a laugh...or head-scratch. We are blinking in confusion.


message 34: by Geneva (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 108 comments hahaha

Slash: I hate robots
L: I know, right? They didn't have to try blow us up
Slash: weirdos
L: Hey guys! Stop. Poking. Us.
Slash: Ears still bleeding. A lot.


message 35: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 143 comments Jett: ok srry 2 wake u up guys but at my apptmt 2night i found out were getting another 1!!!
Mel: i was about 2 complain cuz my phone woke me up @ 1 in the morning. then i had 2 shoot myself when i read ur txt
Lorelei: +faints+
Gwen: plz plz plz NOOOOOOO
Phoenix: if this is another l/slash we will all have 2 blow up this place & get the heck outta here


message 36: by Geneva (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 108 comments L: I wonder how the 51ers are doing
Slash: Can't really worry right now
L: What? You're eating the ice cream? All of it?
Slash: No. Have people still poking me
L: Oops. They didn't stop?
Slash: Nope
L: KNOCK IT OFF PEOPLE!!! Better?
Slash: Nope. Thanks for trying, anyway.


message 37: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 143 comments Jett: i bet newbie lasts a week
Phoenix: i bet they last 3 days
Lorelei: theyre gonna live a month
Mel: a month? ya right. i bet newbie wont survive the first surgery
Gwen: u guys bet on how long newbies will survive?!
Mel: yep. u made me lose 50 bucks. i thought u would live 6 days
Gwen: thats...unsettling. o, and i thought we didnt get money?
Phoenix: we dont. we bet monopoly money
Gwen: i bet 60 they dont last two days


message 38: by Geneva (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 108 comments L: Hi guys. I know you're probably reading this.
L: Seeing how you hack and all
Slash: Sill bleeding!
L: Well, we're gonna die. Happy?
Slash: Maybe. I'm poisoned. Again.


message 39: by ❀ Sariah ❀ (new)

❀ Sariah ❀ (authoress96pulchritudinous) | 143 comments Phoenix: i got in!!!! finally
Mel: oo. ouch. poor them
Mel: u know, l wasnt too bad
Gwen: u rlly think that?
Gwen: RLLY. ya couldve fooled me


message 40: by Geneva (new)

Geneva (firedragon1) | 108 comments L: Slash, stop it!
Slash: Stop wha-*dfsfa*
L: Yuck. Barf.
Slash: Any ice cream left?
L: I won't answer that question Hey is that your BF?
Slash: NOOO!


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