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Mar 02, 2012 03:58PM
Just write introduce you characters and get the party started!
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Hi there! I'm Sariah! I am obsessed with my story, Mira! Well, not exactly obsessed, of course.
ya well since thats the case your in the right place! :D
Sariah wrote: "Hi there! I'm Sariah! I am obsessed with my story, Mira! Well, not exactly obsessed, of course."
Sariah wrote: "Hi there! I'm Sariah! I am obsessed with my story, Mira! Well, not exactly obsessed, of course."
hows urs going
Geneva wrote: ";D"
Geneva wrote: ";D"
started bout 4 stories. 2 fully into it (not finished)
Whose, MINE? Great! Well… at a slow part… I mean, the main character, Mira, JUST got pushed into a pit… thinks she's gonna die...
ditto :)
Geneva wrote: "started bout 4 stories. 2 fully into it (not finished)"
Geneva wrote: "started bout 4 stories. 2 fully into it (not finished)"
nice is she gonna die?
Sariah wrote: "Whose, MINE? Great! Well… at a slow part… I mean, the main character, Mira, JUST got pushed into a pit… thinks she's gonna die..."
Sariah wrote: "Whose, MINE? Great! Well… at a slow part… I mean, the main character, Mira, JUST got pushed into a pit… thinks she's gonna die..."
Of course not! It's only, hmmm, 60 some pages (book pages, not regular pages) into the book! Plus, authors never kill their MAIN characters, for some reason.I might. ;D
Wow 60 pretty good my longest is 40 at the moment. Oh and heres a tip. NEVER EVER kill a main character.
Sariah wrote: "Of course not! It's only, hmmm, 60 some pages (book pages, not regular pages) into the book! Plus, authors never kill their MAIN characters, for some reason.
I might. ;D"
Sariah wrote: "Of course not! It's only, hmmm, 60 some pages (book pages, not regular pages) into the book! Plus, authors never kill their MAIN characters, for some reason.
I might. ;D"
How does this work, exaclty
CICI wrote: "Wow 60 pretty good my longest is 40 at the moment. Oh and heres a tip. NEVER EVER kill a main character.Sariah wrote: "Of course not! It's only, hmmm, 60 some pages (book pages, not regular page..."
I know. But 'twould be funny. ARE YOU ALL RIGHT????? That creeper dude!!!!!!!! AUGH, I'M STILL FREAKING OUT!!!!!!!!!
Um, oh, uh, sorry. Just post your writing!
ok, like if I have it on Goodreads, I post a link or the text or both?
Ok, done, so...if anyone is willing to help, please, by all means
Cici, could you please make a folder for my writing so that I can post it?
i could if you want. where you want it?
It can be anywhere. I don't care.
um...hi?? I'm new to writing, I just started about a week ago so I'm still working on it and I have basically no idea where this story is heading...so, I was looking for some constructive criticism??
here's the link : http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...
I just got freaking mass lightbulb!!! (or however you say it) Slash and L go on an adventure, ending up meeting a few guys who all seemed determined to arrest them, kill them, and tie them in webbing!
Sariah *Politics. Ugh.* wrote: "Hi there! I'm Sariah! I am obsessed with my story, Mira! Well, not exactly obsessed, of course."UPDATE: Mira sucks.
Gwen: i dont evn knowLorelei: um srry but WHAT???
Phoenix: im going 2 sleep
Mel: hm?
Jett: gots no idea
Gwen: gots AGAIN???
L: mergh...ouchSlash: boom. still hurting
L: what was that bomb's number?
Slash: Stop poking me
L: Not me
Slash: Oh. Ears hurt...a lot.
Memo from Agent 5 to Professor Ardent:Sir, I think you should see what we discovered on ex-target's systems. If only for a laugh...or head-scratch. We are blinking in confusion.
hahahaSlash: I hate robots
L: I know, right? They didn't have to try blow us up
Slash: weirdos
L: Hey guys! Stop. Poking. Us.
Slash: Ears still bleeding. A lot.
Jett: ok srry 2 wake u up guys but at my apptmt 2night i found out were getting another 1!!!Mel: i was about 2 complain cuz my phone woke me up @ 1 in the morning. then i had 2 shoot myself when i read ur txt
Lorelei: +faints+
Gwen: plz plz plz NOOOOOOO
Phoenix: if this is another l/slash we will all have 2 blow up this place & get the heck outta here
L: I wonder how the 51ers are doingSlash: Can't really worry right now
L: What? You're eating the ice cream? All of it?
Slash: No. Have people still poking me
L: Oops. They didn't stop?
Slash: Nope
L: KNOCK IT OFF PEOPLE!!! Better?
Slash: Nope. Thanks for trying, anyway.
Jett: i bet newbie lasts a weekPhoenix: i bet they last 3 days
Lorelei: theyre gonna live a month
Mel: a month? ya right. i bet newbie wont survive the first surgery
Gwen: u guys bet on how long newbies will survive?!
Mel: yep. u made me lose 50 bucks. i thought u would live 6 days
Gwen: thats...unsettling. o, and i thought we didnt get money?
Phoenix: we dont. we bet monopoly money
Gwen: i bet 60 they dont last two days
L: Hi guys. I know you're probably reading this.L: Seeing how you hack and all
Slash: Sill bleeding!
L: Well, we're gonna die. Happy?
Slash: Maybe. I'm poisoned. Again.
Phoenix: i got in!!!! finallyMel: oo. ouch. poor them
Mel: u know, l wasnt too bad
Gwen: u rlly think that?
Gwen: RLLY. ya couldve fooled me
L: Slash, stop it!Slash: Stop wha-*dfsfa*
L: Yuck. Barf.
Slash: Any ice cream left?
L: I won't answer that question Hey is that your BF?
Slash: NOOO!
