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“Your life does not get better by chance, it gets better by change.” –Jim Rohn
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I definitely think that, although in the Author’s Note Krakauer says that he “will leave it to reader to form his or her own opinion of Chris McCandless," Krakauer sways the reader. His persuasion is strong enough for me to decide that Chris died by chance and not because of his own faults. He was ready to leave the wilderness but the obstacle of the flooded river, “opaque with glacial sedimentary and only a few degrees warmer than the ice,” forced him to turn back and stay put at the bus (Krakauer 170). There’s one indication that Chris was simply unlucky and he might be alive if it weren’t for the ominous conditions of nature. Krakauer believes that, “He seemed to have moved beyond his need to assert so adamantly his autonomy, his need to separate himself from his parents. Maybe he was prepared to forgive their imperfections; maybe he was even prepared to forgive some of his own. McCandless seemed ready to go home” (168). Thus, I don’t think his reluctance to forgive his parents had anything to do with his survival. I think his inability to lower his expectations and his belief that “a challenge in which a successful outcome is assured isn’t a challenge at all” actually enabled him to survive even longer because he fought until his death (182). Also, Krakauer says that “you don’t dare let your guard down” and “you learn to trust your self-control,” so maintaining your expectations is a self-help technique (142)
Their reasons to escape were different and similar. I think they were different because Chris “wanted to prove to himself that he could make it on his own, without anybody’s help,” while Krakauer worried more about what other people thought of him (159). Chris relies on his self-assurance and Krakauer relies on others’ assurance because he said, “I didn’t want to go up on the Thumb... But the thought of returning to Boulder in defeat wasn’t very appealing either. I could all too easily picture the smug expressions of condolence I’d receive from those who’d been certain of my failure from the get-go” (146). When he told people he climbed the Thumb he was disappointed with their indifferent reactions. That hurt him. Krakauer could have easily died out there due to the pressure he felt from society to succeed. When Chris was ready he would leave the wilderness and it wouldn’t have anything to do with the speculation of others.
Their reasons to escape were different and similar. I think they were different because Chris “wanted to prove to himself that he could make it on his own, without anybody’s help,” while Krakauer worried more about what other people thought of him (159). Chris relies on his self-assurance and Krakauer relies on others’ assurance because he said, “I didn’t want to go up on the Thumb... But the thought of returning to Boulder in defeat wasn’t very appealing either. I could all too easily picture the smug expressions of condolence I’d receive from those who’d been certain of my failure from the get-go” (146). When he told people he climbed the Thumb he was disappointed with their indifferent reactions. That hurt him. Krakauer could have easily died out there due to the pressure he felt from society to succeed. When Chris was ready he would leave the wilderness and it wouldn’t have anything to do with the speculation of others.

Regardless of how similar Krakauer and McCandless are, one of them is smarter than the other. In a way, these two are like the two hemispheres of the brain (bear with me on this one). While I'm not denying Krakauer's free spirit, he took into consideration what others felt and what would happen if he were to be gone. He represents the tactical, rational left brain. The fact that he eventually understood and forgave his parents shows that he took the time to listen and to think before he acted; looking through a logical lens at his situation. With that knowledge, he figured out why he was put under tremendous pressure and that is why I believe he lived. McCandless on the other hand represents the emotional, fluid right brain. He listened to what his parents had to say, as well as other people he encountered, but it seemed to go right out the other ear. McCandless went out into the wild to make a statement against his parents which can be seen as selfish and spiteful and on top of that, he didn't acknowledge his impact on the different communities that he had entered. He was always on the move, never taking a moment to reflect on what was going on; the phrase live fast and die young actually suits McCandless very well. To use the left/right brain allegory on these two men puts into perspective the values that they took when they went on their adventure, and it also shows which one was more successful.


I appreciate Cassia's shift to the author and his role in the nonfiction, because sometimes these discussions lean toward judgment of subject (which has no place in literary analysis) rather than analysis of, say, the fiction/nonfiction borderlands in these works, the truth versus the Truth, the author's methods in creating a narrative out of a REAL life. Perhaps someone might take up why Krakauer inserts "his" chapter where he does. And why. And indeed, carry on with Cassia's prompt. A worthwhile discussion of chance/change considering that the text addresses freedom versus restraint, a prevalent theme in American literature. If you've already posted, you are welcome to post again and (re)visit some of these issues. Onward.

From Krakauer's chapter on himself it is certainly easy to draw many similarities between the two men. I think that Krakauer does this in part to show his empathy with McCandless and to illustrate the reason he feels the need to write this man's story. But also to set McCandless free. I think that proving through comparison that McCandless was not going into the woods to die imparts more truth to the reader than showing only McCandless's story.

My take on McCandless is that like Krakauer he wanted to "get away," and figure out in a sense the world. I think that both Krakauer and McCandless are strong, but in different ways. Yes Krakauer achieved his goal, and in the end survived, but McCandless unlike Krakauer didn't have a plan or a thought on when he would go back, Krakauer was going to go back when he finished his task. McCandless I believe shows strength in his determination to "go into the wild," I believe if McCandless had lowered his expectations a different story would be written, and I as a reader wouldn't be getting the same emotions. McCandless didn't have to lower his expectations because I believe when entered the wild, he let go of all the expectations and just lived. Krakauer had an expectation all along, to climb devils thumb, McCandless just wanted to live. I don't think if McCandless had tried to understand his father, that it would have changed anything. I believe that yes, McCandless anger and dissapointment with society may have started with his father, but it didn't end with him. It ended in his journey and everything he saw and learn, thats what he came to understand in the end. Take for instance the excerpt from Chris's highschool friend describing a friday night with chris, " It was the weirdest friday night of my life. But Chris that kind of thing a lot."(114) He is describing a night where Chris brought himself and his friend into the " bad " part of town. His misunderstanding with the world and society may have started earlier with his father, but in time he began to find it in other places as well, which leads me to conclude if he had "understood," his father he may have survived, isn't possible.. I don't know if I agree with the idea that Krakauer is somehow showing a strength he has that McCandless doesn't, I go to what Sally says, and that the chapter on Krakauer isn't a way to show a strength he has, but to show some similarites between the two men, and a hint as to why he needed to write this story.

While many criticize Chris for this crucial miscalculation in his plans, I think that it was pretty easy to overlook this small detail. After all, forging rivers was not really essential for his survival, so it wasn't something that he should have paid much attention to. Chris should have made it out alive, but he was simply unlucky. As Roman Dial points out, he "doesn't see any difference between his own widely respected deeds and McCandless's adventure, except that McCandless had the misfortune to perish." Indeed "not so many years ago it could have easily been [Roman] in the same kind of predicament," (185). Just because Chris died does not mean that we should jump to the conclusion that he was ill-prepared and ignorant of his environment. He was knowledgeable enough to tell the difference between caribou and moose, even when more experienced hunters cannot. I think that in looking at Chris it is more important to judge him by his actual adventure, and not by its outcome, and when we do this it becomes apparent that he deserves more credit than we may initially give him.

What I have gathered from this reading is that Jon Krakauer and Chris McCandless share many similarities, as well as an outlook on life. But what Krakauer holds over McCandless is the fact that he actually had outdoor experience. As Krakauer quotes himself, "If something captured my undisciplined imagination, I pursued it with a zeal bordering on obsession, and from the age of seventeen until my late twenties that something was rock climbing"(134). When Krakauer tells of his Devils Thumb adventure/journey, we recieve the notion that this guy knows what he is doing in the wilderness. We realize that he has experience and knowledge in rock climbing, judging by his decisions on when and how to climb Devils Thumb.
Now with Chris, I would like to say that I felt the same sort of experience and knowledge with him, but instead I felt a different kind. With Chris he was brave, he was raw. He did not go by the books, or by the weather patterns of the Alaskan wilderness. Instead he kept to his head and left when his heart told him to. I saw Chris as a genius in so many ways (from just doing what he did was an incredible feat to me), but in the end it came down to what he did not know. How did he know the river would flood? Which brings me to the conclusion that perhaps it was just nature itself that caused the suddenness of Chris's death. Could nature be the explanation for why Krakauer got safely down Devils Thumb and why Chris died? Perhaps it did not depend on either man's knowledge or experience with the Alaskan wilderness, but instead the way in which the Alaskan wilderness treated them. So maybe what I am trying to say is yes, it is by chance that one man got out alive and the other one died. But I can not help but think if the weather conditions were ideal/different in both cases would either man have struggled, let alone die?
I very much enjoyed this section of the novel- to gain a little insight of the life of Krakauer and how erily it relates to McCandless's life. I liked how it felt to actually be put out on Devil's Thumb with Krakauer-what a thrilling and suspenseful experience. I try to think of what I would have done if I was in either one of these man's shoes: climb or don't climb back up Devil's Thumb or cross or don't cross the freezing river? What would you have done? How do we decide such things?

The similarities between Krakauer's father and Walt McCandless are uncanny: both were extremely successful men who commanded attention and were eager for their sons to do the same. Born with a streak of independence and a drive to accomplish whatever they set their minds to, both Krakauer and Chris were dimly aware of how their journeys "wouldn't be easy... but that only added to the scheme's appeal" (135). I can even see a similarity to Krakauer's secret yearning for human relationships in Chris' personality, though he tries his best not to be tied down in one place--however, Krakauer felt guilty and ashamed about claiming to enjoy solitude, like on page 137, when he said, "the pleasure I'd felt in this woman's company...exposed my self-deceit and left me hollow and aching."
In that sense, I don't believe that the fact that Krakauer survived his expedition was merely due to chance. Krakauer knew all along that, despite his love for leaving and exploring a world of possibility, his true love lay in human relationships, rather than the wild. Chris experienced too much betrayal in his family life (having a father lead a double life would push most people over the edge, I think) to put much stock in interpersonal relationships, and in the end it was his desire for brilliant and dangerous beauty that led to his demise.

I like what Caroline said about Krakauer's personal chapters being a "hint as to why he needed to write this story". It's pretty clear that Krakauer identifies strongly with McCandless. I think his sections read as a sort of validation for Chris. He says "But my sense of Chris McCandless's intentions comes, too, from a more personal perspective" (134). McCandless's journey and death was met with mixed reactions- many people question whether he was suicidal, and Krakauer writes of the response letters he received that "heaped opprobrium on McCandless, and on me as well, the author of the story, for glorifying what some thought was a foolish, pointless death" (71). Even in this discussion, Tina refers to McCandless's trip as potentially "selfish and spiteful". Krakauer saw in McCandless many of the same qualities he himself felt and possessed: "And I suspect we had a similar intensity, a similar heedlessness, a similar agitation of the soul" (135). I think he inserts the story of his climb up Devil's Thumb because it allows him to tell the reader from a first hand, personal account, of his motivations for this seemingly crazy expedition, and to draw comparisons between himself and McCandless, thereby throwing some light on the big question of "Why?" that surrounded Chris's adventures.
Krakauer devotes a page or so to beautifully describing the complex emotion that drove his own climb, and connecting this to McCandless's journey. Krakauer "was stirred by the dark mystery of mortality. I couldn't resist stealing up to the edge of doom and peering over the brink.....In my case- and, I believe, in the case of Chris McCandless- that was a very different thing from wanting to die" (155-156). Where people have condemned Chris for being selfish, stupid, or crazy, Krakauer instead sees the complexity and I think indeed beauty in what Chris must have been feeling to drive him out into the wild, and wrote this book as a means of essentially siding with Chris. And haven't we all felt this feeling? Like when you are on top of a mountain or the edge of a cliff and you can't resist looking over and you almost feel like jumping. There's no way to rationalize that really; it is an unbidden, primal thing. But that's what it seems drove both Krakauer and McCandless, and Krakauer understands this.

Contrarily, with “In Cold Blood,” Capote is hardly written into the story. It makes it harder to trust his words – so many times, I found myself questioning what really happened and what was a fabrication of Capote’s desired turn of events. But since Krakauer dedicates a large portion of this book to his own story, we are able to have a better sense of what might be the truth or what might be the “truth.” I think it makes it easier to understand certain parts of the book, such as my personal feeling of justification for McCandless’s abandonment of his family and society. Because I know that these events or the feelings that the events provoke in me are based off of some sort of reality that the author has at least experienced, I have more trust for them. I have more trust in the author and more trust in those feelings that I find myself having. I felt a little bit betrayed or naïve when we learned more about Capote’s life and how it impacted “In Cold Blood,” but Krakauer makes me feel safe again as a reader as I put my trust into his hands.

I want to reiterate what Sally discussed in terms of how comparable Chris and Krakauer were on the basis of experience with the wild. During the reading, I was continuously surprised by how similar the author is to the main character, which likely explains his devotion to this story. Both became intrigued and invested in the wild as children, leaving them yearning to experience it in its entirety for the rest of their lives. I think it is unreasonable to claim that Chris had a lack of experience with the wilderness, which could have led to his failure living in it. We learned of Chris young experiences with his family as a child in the previous section. Chris and Krakauer ventured into the wild on separate tasks. Krakauer was determined to climb Devil’s Thumb, which requires a very different level of experience than what Chris needed, so I do not think they can be compared on this level. Basically, their experiences with the wild were similar yet different. Their similarity also exists when looking at their level of preparation and research into their adventures, especially in Chris’ case. The major mistake that I think Chris made was at the point when he was ready to leave the bus and get out, back to society. He should have known that the river would now be impossible to cross. As a result of this mistake, he was stuck in the place he had always wanted to be but was now satisfied with living outside of. However, I will argue on Chris’ behalf that his lack of preparation was nonetheless, part of his plan. He planned to figure most of his journey out as he went along, for plans, and timing, were what he was eliminating from his life. This was part of the beauty in his process of freeing himself.
Chris was not looking to climb a challenging mountain, nor was he looking for ways to forgive his father. Chris was looking to live off the land, with no connections to the society he had forever wanted to escape. He was looking for freedom, for a way to prove that he could live independently, and to show that he was not under the control of his parents. I don’t think that Chris should have lowered his expectations in search of forgiveness for his fathers, because I think that Chris would have been disappointed if he found that his time and efforts to walk into the wild had led him to the feeling of forgiveness. That was not what he was searching for, unlike Krakauer. Chris had become “Satisfied, apparently, with what he had learned during his two months of solitary life in the wild…It was time to bring his “final and greatest adventure” to a close…He seemed to have moved beyond his need to assert so adamantly his autonomy” (168). Chris had become satisfied with what he had found, done and accomplished. At this point he was ready to return to the real world, yet he found himself caught by nature, with potentially no hope in ever making it out alive.
“We were similarly affected by the skewed relationships we had with our fathers.”
“The fact that I survived my Alaska adventure, and McCandless did not survive his was largely a matter of chance.” (155)
But was it really just chance?
Today, let’s focus more on the author rather than the character of this piece. Four characteristics of Krakauer stand out to me: his reasons to escape, his relationship with his parents, his expectations being lowered, and the forgiveness of his parents. Like McCandless, Krakauer had similar reasons to escape, and a similar relationship with his parents. Neither were satisfied with the way their fathers brought them up, and believed the only way out of their “volatile and extremely complicated ways” was to completely disconnect themselves from their known lives. (147) The two young men differed in the other two characteristics though, and perhaps it was these differences that proved to be fatal; Chris failed to lower his expectations when challenged by nature, and could not find it within himself to forgive his parents. So my question for you is, what if Chris had lowered his expectations like Krakauer had? What if he had tried to understand and forgive his father? How does Krakauer show strength of character that Chris does not possess? Do you believe that these four characteristics were the reasoning behind Krakauer’s survival or do you agree with him that it is simply chance?