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i do that also.
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I usually do that, like if its a topic I like and I can tell that people post often on it...there's another group where I posted poetry I took the time to type up...but no one comments..instead they comment on the links people post of their poetry..and again I get ignored in the rps GHA!
thats stupid. sometimes i just dont understand y people click the links. there still going to read anyway whats the point on going to another webpage??
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Where's Kat? It said that she was online on my friends' page...
XDD I know! I took the time to type up my poetry so you could read it and make comments and things for me to work on ((its a writting group)) and nothing :/
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Kat wrote: "ON! WASSUP, MY FRIENDS!!"YO KAT,
yesh sure i like poems. I write poetry but i had a writer's block XD i can post some of my old ones.
((:D))
The Sea
The sea is a dangerous place,
for those who have a fear of drowning,
but he couldn't help but feel,
like the water was his home.
How many times have I warned this foolish man?
to leave while his mind was still his own,
but he came still,
with his make-shift boat,
and rugged sails,
he come to float on troubled waters,
and although I enjoyed the company,
after so many years of nothing but waves,
and ugly sea creatures,
I could already forsee what his fate could not.
We would often sit together,
him in is tattered ship,
and me in my sad boat,
floating along the breeze,
calling the sea our home,
speaking of what the sky must hold,
for the sea was vast,
but the sky reached into forever.
And everyday in our adventures,
I warned him,
to leave while he still could,
before the waters swallowed him whole,
and there was no turning back,
but the silly man would never listen.
How long was he there?
Its seemed like a lifetime,
talking about out dreams,
if we could get away from the sea,
I might have one day fallen in love with the man,
but I knew the sea would take his heart,
and I knew his fate from the beginning,
but I still couldn't let the sea take him,
like it had done to me.
The sea is a terrible madien((sp)),
tearing people from the land,
telling them that the sea is their home,
that she loved them,
loved them like I love the man,
but now the man is gone,
his tattered boat,
carried off but the restive waves,
into the ever open mouth of the sea,
and now its just me,
me and my sad boat,
floating on troubled waters,
calling the sea our home,
until another unlucky soul gets called home,
by the sea.
The Sea
The sea is a dangerous place,
for those who have a fear of drowning,
but he couldn't help but feel,
like the water was his home.
How many times have I warned this foolish man?
to leave while his mind was still his own,
but he came still,
with his make-shift boat,
and rugged sails,
he come to float on troubled waters,
and although I enjoyed the company,
after so many years of nothing but waves,
and ugly sea creatures,
I could already forsee what his fate could not.
We would often sit together,
him in is tattered ship,
and me in my sad boat,
floating along the breeze,
calling the sea our home,
speaking of what the sky must hold,
for the sea was vast,
but the sky reached into forever.
And everyday in our adventures,
I warned him,
to leave while he still could,
before the waters swallowed him whole,
and there was no turning back,
but the silly man would never listen.
How long was he there?
Its seemed like a lifetime,
talking about out dreams,
if we could get away from the sea,
I might have one day fallen in love with the man,
but I knew the sea would take his heart,
and I knew his fate from the beginning,
but I still couldn't let the sea take him,
like it had done to me.
The sea is a terrible madien((sp)),
tearing people from the land,
telling them that the sea is their home,
that she loved them,
loved them like I love the man,
but now the man is gone,
his tattered boat,
carried off but the restive waves,
into the ever open mouth of the sea,
and now its just me,
me and my sad boat,
floating on troubled waters,
calling the sea our home,
until another unlucky soul gets called home,
by the sea.
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YO KAT,"
Hi.
@ Ellia, sure! I love poems. :P
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Post YouTube videos, links to other groups, etc. I don't care. I take a look at them myself. :) If there's anything inappropriate, just give a warning so we know. ^_^
Silent Man
He lifts a delicate finger,
as if to make a point,
but he closes his mouth,
and he closes his heart,
to the world and those around him.
He rolls his glassy eyes,
like the things you say are rediculas((sp)),
but he waits patiently,
and lets you finish,
the rant you were explaining.
He's a silent fellow,
with much to say,
but can't find the words,
to say them,
he'll wait awhile,
with his lips persed,
and hands on his lap,
he'll let you speak,
and talk him down,
but your voice,
he doens't seem to listen,
he's someplace else in his mind,
a place were there is comfort,
and all the words he needs is there,
just beyond his reach.
He lifts a delicate finger,
as if to make a point,
he opens his mouth to find the words,
and you do stop and listen,
to the man,
the silent man,
who so kindly whispers,
the words he needed to say,
he wiated a while,
until he was sure,
and then,
this man did smile.
He raised his eyes,
to meet your own,
and then the man did speak,
'I love you' he said,
so simply sweet,
that you couldn't help but smile,
he smiled too,
and closed his mouth,
the silent fellow,
with much to say,
returned to his land of kindness.
He lifts a delicate finger,
as if to make a point,
but he closes his mouth,
and he closes his heart,
to the world and those around him.
He rolls his glassy eyes,
like the things you say are rediculas((sp)),
but he waits patiently,
and lets you finish,
the rant you were explaining.
He's a silent fellow,
with much to say,
but can't find the words,
to say them,
he'll wait awhile,
with his lips persed,
and hands on his lap,
he'll let you speak,
and talk him down,
but your voice,
he doens't seem to listen,
he's someplace else in his mind,
a place were there is comfort,
and all the words he needs is there,
just beyond his reach.
He lifts a delicate finger,
as if to make a point,
he opens his mouth to find the words,
and you do stop and listen,
to the man,
the silent man,
who so kindly whispers,
the words he needed to say,
he wiated a while,
until he was sure,
and then,
this man did smile.
He raised his eyes,
to meet your own,
and then the man did speak,
'I love you' he said,
so simply sweet,
that you couldn't help but smile,
he smiled too,
and closed his mouth,
the silent fellow,
with much to say,
returned to his land of kindness.
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The Sea
The sea is a dangerous place,
for those who have a fear of drowning,
but he couldn't help but feel,
like the water was his home.
How many times have I warned this foolish man..."
:O Wow! That's amazing!
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XDD its the style I write in :P but I understand.....my poems more of a narritive poem :D
Jasmine ~Imma Fearī Teiru Nakama~ wrote: "Yeah, but stanzas make the poems look more...formal. :P Do you post them in the writing part of your profile?"
<.< There's a writting section of the profile?
<.< There's a writting section of the profile?
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[ constellation mokke ], Headmistress of Magic Department Slivica
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<.< There's a writting section of the profile?"
Yup!
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FAKE. XD
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FAKE. XD"
Aero wrote: ""
Totally.
Ellia wrote: "Where would it be at? XDD"
Ask Kat. I forgot where it is.
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@ Ellia: Found it! See the arrow next to Explore? Click on it and click on creative writing. Then, click on my writing and it should bring you to another page where you can write and stuff.
Let me hear your voice within the darkness
Make this sinking heart fade into nothing
On this empty canvas of deception
I will paint all of my feelings
Again
A never-ending fantasy, I feel that it is what I've reached
"What could this state of being be?"
My body temperature is weak
Save me before I can't be saved
Laughter is eating me away
I am locked in this present day
In my mind, the future is painted in grey
Fantasies that I've longed for
From those deserted lies
If you wish to continue, then lie some more
Flowing from the depths of my own heart is
Love that I had etched upon its surface
Deep in this illusion, I can hear you
But your voice is at its furthest
If there is a form so I can touch it
If it breaks apart from all the sorrow
Then I do not need to have my eyes here
Hold me tight and don't let go
Leia!
A never-ending fantasy, I asked as I laughed sadly
"What could this state of being be?"
Echoing, the words that were said are in grey
Eternity cut my breath short
With gentleness, it came
Leaving me to fall into my misery and pain
When the ticking hands of time have stopped, then
Our little world will soon be ending
The only hope we have is in our own words
But they really have no meaning
Laugh a little more, laugh while you still can
Pray a little more, pray while you still can
If you cannot hear me after all that
End my life and say goodbye now
Let me hear your voice within the darkness
Make this sinking heart fade into nothing
Buried with the canvas of deception
Is us two within the painting
If there is no way of making proof that
We were once together in this world, then
Burn my body up into black ashes
End my life and say goodbye
Leia!
Leia!
This is how I feel today
Make this sinking heart fade into nothing
On this empty canvas of deception
I will paint all of my feelings
Again
A never-ending fantasy, I feel that it is what I've reached
"What could this state of being be?"
My body temperature is weak
Save me before I can't be saved
Laughter is eating me away
I am locked in this present day
In my mind, the future is painted in grey
Fantasies that I've longed for
From those deserted lies
If you wish to continue, then lie some more
Flowing from the depths of my own heart is
Love that I had etched upon its surface
Deep in this illusion, I can hear you
But your voice is at its furthest
If there is a form so I can touch it
If it breaks apart from all the sorrow
Then I do not need to have my eyes here
Hold me tight and don't let go
Leia!
A never-ending fantasy, I asked as I laughed sadly
"What could this state of being be?"
Echoing, the words that were said are in grey
Eternity cut my breath short
With gentleness, it came
Leaving me to fall into my misery and pain
When the ticking hands of time have stopped, then
Our little world will soon be ending
The only hope we have is in our own words
But they really have no meaning
Laugh a little more, laugh while you still can
Pray a little more, pray while you still can
If you cannot hear me after all that
End my life and say goodbye now
Let me hear your voice within the darkness
Make this sinking heart fade into nothing
Buried with the canvas of deception
Is us two within the painting
If there is no way of making proof that
We were once together in this world, then
Burn my body up into black ashes
End my life and say goodbye
Leia!
Leia!
This is how I feel today
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Go onto your profile, it's right below the 'quotes you like' and right above 'groups you're in'.
:) You can also go to the 'Explore' on the top of your goodreads page, and click on 'Creative Writing' and click on the 'My Writing' thingy on the right. :D
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HEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY"
HEEEY RACHEEEELLLL.
Aero wrote: "u hav a lot of feelings i woould say"
I'm in a good and a bad mood today.
I'm in a good and a bad mood today.
It's too long so I'm not gonna read it :3
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Make this sinking heart fade into nothing
On this empty canvas of deception
I will paint all of my feelings
Again
A never-ending fantasy, I feel that it ..."
Amazing! It's gooodd! :) What's does Leia mean? Is it a name?
Like what I said to Ellia, you should post it on you profile if you haven't done so yet.
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