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[Rachel]

I'm trying to follow this:
http://www.wikihow.com/Plot-a-Story
And get a concrete plot before I start actually writing

[[ constellation mokke ], Headmistress of Magic Department Slivica]

I skimmed through it.

[Vish]

Good Luck, Matt and Rachel!

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P.S. *glomps Jazz*

[Rachel]

T^T I'm on point 3

I'm stuck :(

I'm trying to think up a possible ending...

Here's a quick Summary of the book I'm writing:

A girl at birth get's the soul of an evil witch stuck in her because the witch was way too powerful and blah blah blah... Well she didn't know this until years later when she's 14 and starts to have serious mood changes, and things around her start to explode. So when she finds out that in reality she's actually a witch with an evil witches soul stuck in her body, she tries to find a way to separate her soul from the evil witches, but her Gram says it's impossible. She still doesn't give though and starts to travel the Fantasy World (haven't thought up a name for it yet) in search of someone or something powerful enough to split the souls.


AND I CAN'T THINK OF AN ENDING.

[[ constellation mokke ], Headmistress of Magic Department Slivica]

I'm writing a story too! >;O

Still stuck on the prologue. Pffttt. Hmph.

Bye bye.

[Rachel]

AND BY VISH

[Matthew, Chief of Chimeras Kymeran]

@Jasmine

Lets see who gets to the first chapter first(a good one)
> <

[[ constellation mokke ], Headmistress of Magic Department Slivica]

❊Rachel❊▂▂▂ℬα¢☺η♎ wrote: "T^T I'm on point 3

I'm stuck :(

I'm trying to think up a possible ending...

Here's a quick Summary of the book I'm writing:

A girl at birth get's the soul of an evil witch stuck in her beca..."

When I read the part when the girl tried to separate them, it reminded me of Nabari no Ou. The main charrie, Miharu, tried to separate an ancient and powerful power that dwells in his body but now, he's trying to use it and he sacrificed his indifference just so he could save a friend. *shrug*

[Rachel]

T^T

[Rachel]

I've never actually watched Nabari no Ou

So, you have any ideas for an ending?? I'm seriously can't think of anything that could be continued in another book,

[Matthew, Chief of Chimeras Kymeran]

It also reminds me of harry potter....
and of several other stories combined

[[ constellation mokke ], Headmistress of Magic Department Slivica]

I'm going to send you the unfinished prologue of my current story Rachel. Let me know what you think about it so far.

@ Matthew: I could just go back and revise my old story's prologue and get to chapter one before you. But, I doubt it's going to be any good. -__- There are so many different starting points and I can't pick one. One takes place in class, another in a park/whatever, another in an amusement park... *facepalm*

[Rachel]

Okay :3

@Matt I actually haven't read Harry Potter either

[Rachel]

Jas, what I'm going to do is write the story first THEN the prologue. I figured it would be easiest that way.

[[ constellation mokke ], Headmistress of Magic Department Slivica]

I can't do that. Then, the prologue would probably sound strange to me.

[Rachel]

Okay, just a suggestion :3

[Matthew, Chief of Chimeras Kymeran]

Here is a peace of a story I never finished:(view spoiler)[
Prologue:

The city glowed under the light of the noonday sun, above the city lay an ocean of blue called the sky, small wispy clouds lazily floating on the surface of that ocean. Tall skyscrapers reaching toward the clouds, their shiny surface reflecting the light of the sun. Below these tall towers of glass, lay hundred of small buildings, with thick black lines separating one from the next. On these black tarred roads, and along the side walks surrounding them, metal vehicles roamed, people walked, ran, rode bikes, all with a destination in mind. The city was an orchestra of sound, you could hear the wind currents blowing across the sleek surface of the towers, the beeping of horns form the cars below, the buzz of millions of conversations going all at once, the music of street performers, these sounds rang through the sky. The people had now real problem or worries, they just lived there lives with a mundane calmness, no thought of the physical world around them, or of the world they could not see.
The air began to ripple, like a reflection upon the surface of water, being disturbed. The bright circle in the sky began to change, across the sun, a thin black curve appeared along its edge. The sky began to darken, the glorious blue being disturbed by tints of purple. Then the rippling stopped, all was the same as before, except for one thing, below in the city all was silent. There was no wind, not a living creature moved, not a sound, just complete silence. Above the sky scrapers two men stood, they stood there as if the very air held up there weight, between them in the sky the moon was beginning to swallow the sun. The man on the left wore an expressionless mask upon his pale white face. His hair was a lustrous snow white, matching his skin. His suite was a brilliant chalky white, spotless as if the dust, and dirt avoided it gleaming surface. Finally his eyes, they opposed the rest of him, for they were a solid pure black, they were an absence of white, a void of all light.
Across from the guy on the right was a mirror image to his brother, so much so that the structure of his face copied his brothers. The difference was in the color. As his brother glowed with a light whiteness, he glowed with a dark blackness. His hair was shone with the color, of pure obsidian. His ashen colored skin , dark as a shadow. He suite was made of dark raven black material, its surface clean of all impurities, as dark as a starless night. His eyes covered with a radiance of pure white, clear brightness, an ocean of light. The two powerful beings floated above the city in silence.
“There are no more doubts brother, we are sure of it now,” said the white one, his voice flat and expressionless. His clear voice filled the city, though, not one of the million people would hear it.
“Yes, for the first time in any reality or time, the boy has appeared” replied the black one, his voice a similar calm monotone. The moon had slowly made its way across a fourth of the sun, darkening the sky, casting shadows across the land. The skies normal bright blue had now transformed to crimson red. The city below them was tinted in red, as it reflected the light of the sky. The air remained still, not even the slightest breeze licking the glass surface of the buildings, all was completely silent under the eclipse.
“He will become curious, and eventually, what has been foretold will reveal itself to him” continued the white one, his face remaining expressionless during the conversations. Cloud were beginning in to form in the sky, appearing in a light purple as they did. They held great controversy between the newly maroon red sky, and the old calm blue.
“There will be a long and treacherous journey ahead for all beings, mortal and immortal alike” the black one went on, they talked as if they were small talking over mundane manners over a cup of tea. The moon had half eaten the sun by this time, a dark rust covering the sky turning it garnet red.
“Yes, but we must remember, we are forbidden from interfering” warned the white one, now every inch of the city below was glazed over with ruby light. The sun now almost a three fourths of the way across, it only had a quarter of the sun left to swallow. The sky was now covered with a foam of dark violet clouds upon the red sky.
“I know brother, they must find the path themselves, BUT, if they don’t, then all the realities will be in peril” calmly retorted the black one. The moon had began to move faster, for now it fully covered the sun. They sky had now turned to a dark black, tinted with scarlet red. Every part of the city below lay in a shadow. The edges of the moon outlined by the bright orange flames of the sun.
“Now we must wait for the boy to find his path...” stated the white one, the sky beginning to lighten as the moon made its way, fleeing from the sun. The sky slowly transforming from dark blood red to a brilliant blue.
“...and for the story to begin” finished the black one. The moon just a sliver upon the sun now. The sky almost completely blue, the clouds retreating over the horizon, the city's crimson glaze leaving it.
A strong wind blew through the city, covering every building of the city. The air began to ripple once more. Once again the sound of the city could be heard, as time retook its course. The eclipse ended, the sky once again clear, and blue, the buildings once again glowing under the sun, humans once again going on with their lives. Around the sun the two men had vanished not a trace of there existence left behind. Life went on in the city, not a soul thought of the strange event, not a mind would remember, not a question will ponder what happened. The world went back to normal, all the humans would go on living, unaware of the event that had just took place among their city. (hide spoiler)]

[Rachel]

*dies*

Matt... You underestimate my laziness...

[Matthew, Chief of Chimeras Kymeran]

You underestimate my RUTHLESSNESS

READ...NOW e.e

[Matthew, Chief of Chimeras Kymeran]

Continue Reading... -.-

[Rachel]

I read it... I read it...

*dies*

[Matthew, Chief of Chimeras Kymeran]

Did you finish yet? O.o

[[ constellation mokke ], Headmistress of Magic Department Slivica]

R-Dog...

[Matthew, Chief of Chimeras Kymeran]

yay!

[Matthew, Chief of Chimeras Kymeran]

so?

[[ constellation mokke ], Headmistress of Magic Department Slivica]

How did we start with all this story talking anyway?

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hihihi

[Matthew, Chief of Chimeras Kymeran]

§åñ ¢ðvêr Ìñ§åñ þågê§ wrote: "How did we start with all this story talking anyway?"

I stated I was writing a book XP

[ᑕᗢᗝᒪḰᓮᖙᖇᗢჯ123 ☆*･゜ﾟ･*\(^O^)/*･゜ﾟ･*☆]

I CAN'T BE BOTHERED TO READ N9OW BUT WILL AT HOMJE IF I REMMEBER

[Lyric]

~watchig all this with amazment~

BRB

[Matthew, Chief of Chimeras Kymeran]

@Cool Kid ^^

(view spoiler)[ *in a menacing voice* oh, you WILL remember e.e (view spoiler)[ (hide spoiler)] (hide spoiler)]

[Rachel]

I GTG but I'll get on my iPod maybe :P

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UGH caps -_- sozy

[Matthew, Chief of Chimeras Kymeran]

@Rachel

What did you think? O.O

[Rachel]

OH YEAH!

It was good, had lots of details :D

You should continue~

NOW I HAVE TO GET OFF BEFORE MY MOM KILLS ME

[[ constellation mokke ], Headmistress of Magic Department Slivica]

This is my unfinished prologue. My current story idea.
The W is a drop cap on MS Word.

(view spoiler)[Wahhh! Wahhh!” The baby’s cry filled the silent and tense room. Then, sighs of relief and joy broke the silence and turned the tense room into a room where one can be at ease. The baby was then scooped up and wrapped in a beautiful white linen blanket.

“Milady!” said a woman holding the newborn, a tired smile on her face. “It’s beautiful healthy girl.” The woman showed the crying baby’s face to the newborn’s mother. “What is to be her name mistress?”

“Give her to me,” the mother whispered. The woman -a servant- gently placed the baby girl beside the newborn’s mother. The mother smiled, it was a tired smile as she watched her baby slowly settle down from crying. “Yurina,” She said finally. “Her name is Yurina.”

The servant looked at the little baby’s face and whispered, “Yurina. That’s a beautiful name mistress.” She looked at the other servants, expecting them to agree with their mistress.

The servants started to murmur, agreeing with that ‘Yurina’ was the perfect name for the newborn child. They all knew that their mistress was a clever and wise woman. In their language, Yurina meant ‘heaven child’. Yurina was a name comprised of the two words that meant heaven and child: yuri and na. Combining the two words not only made a beautiful name but it could also bring good fortune to the family.

The mother nodded, smiling at her newborn daughter, who was now sleeping quietly. Her small fragile arms could be seen curled up against her small chest inside the blanket.

“Zurin!” cried a woman in a green robe. She rushed to the mother’s side and took her hand, squeezing it. “I congratulate you on your first child dear sister.” She said, her eyes on Yurina. “As a token for your happiness along with Peak Lord Lennon, I offered you this gift.” The woman waved a young girl over. By looking at her clothes, one can tell that she was a servant.

The girl bowed, holding a wooden box above her head. On the cover of the box, there laid a small diamond. It’s beauty shone as the light greeted it. Around the diamond were symbols of luck, fortune, prosperity, love, and peace.

“Open the box girl,” the woman said.

The girl obeyed and opened the box carefully, making sure it doesn’t fall, for she knew the box held a precious item. Inside was a dazzling blood red ruby necklace. The chain was made of sliver and the ruby hung from a crystal stone. The servants of Zurin, the newborn’s mother, strained their heads to catch a glimpse of the stunning ruby necklace. Even Zurin was stunned by the beauty of the necklace.

“This is my gift from my husband, Emperor Lyron,” the woman started, smiling. “When I had given birth to our first child, Prince Ryko.”

“Dear Ellianna!” Zurin whispered, sitting up. A servant rushed to Zurin’s side to help her sit up on the bed. “This was my brother’s gift to you?” Zurin shook her head. “Oh Aurine, this was your gift! You shouldn’t give it to me!”

“I insist sister,” The woman -Aurine- said. “This brought me great luck. May this bring you luck from the heavens as well.” She smiled and waved a servant to take the box to somewhere safe.

“If you insist,” Zurin sighed. “And, thank you.” Zurin looked at her servants and waved them out. “You may go. Thank you.”

The servants nodded and back out of the room swiftly.

Aurine walked over to Yurina and picked up the sleeping girl, stroking Yurina’s soft, rosy cheeks. “A beautiful child she is.” She kissed her forehead. “What is her name Zurin?”

“Yurina,” Zurin answered. “Heaven Child.”

“Ah! A name with good meaning,” Aurine said. “Grow up strong and healthy; be a woman like your mother, Yurina.”

“Mama,” said a quiet young voice. (hide spoiler)]

[Matthew, Chief of Chimeras Kymeran]

Wanna see a (test)scene I planned out involving the characters: Grief and Sloth?

[[ constellation mokke ], Headmistress of Magic Department Slivica]

Did you read?

[Matthew, Chief of Chimeras Kymeran]

yep, it was pretty good XD

[[ constellation mokke ], Headmistress of Magic Department Slivica]

There's no meaning for details to appear, the conversations are enough. And then, little Ryko comes in and then everything goes downhill from there. I started it on my iPod and added things in when I started typing it on MS Word.

Yes, I want to see the "scene" please.

[Matthew, Chief of Chimeras Kymeran]

I have to type it...

[[ constellation mokke ], Headmistress of Magic Department Slivica]

Ohh.... I'll wait.

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๓คttђєฬ wrote: "@Cool Kid ^^

*in a menacing voice* oh, you WILL remember e.e "

.....BAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

[[ constellation mokke ], Headmistress of Magic Department Slivica]

๓คttђєฬ wrote: "I have to type it..."

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i72Dgs...

[Matthew, Chief of Chimeras Kymeran]

All I got:
The man began to walk faster, he could just feel it...he was being followed. The man wore a simple business suite, carefully carrying a brief case in his hands as he hurried through the streets. He suddenly stopped, something was off about this street, bu he couldn't put his finger on it. Never mind that now, he scolded himself and continued walking, glancing back to see if he could spot his pursuers...no one, the cost was clear. The man took a deep breath, relaxing a bit. I'm just imagining things, getting paranoid, he told himself, and he almost believed it...almost. Unfortunately at that moment it hit him. Where was everyone? The street was completely bare of human life, not a person or vehicle in sight.
He bolted into an alley way, his heart beating like a race horse. His mind came out empty for an answer to this...whatever it was. He looked up, coming to his senses only to find a dead end in front of him. He cursed himself and quickly rotated around to get his way out of here. As he began to make his way to the entrance two dark figures appeared in the opening. He couldn't make out there faces, or even the details of their clothing, all he could see was their silhouettes in the street lights. He stopped, holding his breath as the two men, for they were men, stood there.
“Excuse me. C-can I help you?” he quavered. The only reply he got was a chorus of cold laughter coming from the men.
“This guys funny Sloth, are you sure we have to kill him?” asked the man on the right, he was shorter then his partner, Sloth.
“Orders are orders Grief. You know how Pride can be when someone messes up.” Sloth replied, though his tone that of boredom and a lack of interest. Surely I am hearing the wrong, did they just say “kill”? The man rationalized to himself.
“Don't remind me” Grief, if that was his name, groaned,“I just meant, I don't see why we have to kill him...” The man taking in rapid breaths now, what could he do, they just kept on talking as if he wasn't there. Who are these people?
“Stop being such a pain. Like it matters to me whether he dies or lives, its all the same. What does matter to me is not being yelled at by Pried again, or even worse...Lust” Sloth sighed.

[[ constellation mokke ], Headmistress of Magic Department Slivica]

That took a loonnng time. T__T And, no more?

[GonnaWingIt, Adviser Averina]

Onnn~
... kinda

[[ constellation mokke ], Headmistress of Magic Department Slivica]

I'm about to go off soon...

[GonnaWingIt, Adviser Averina]

OFF I'll brb

[[ constellation mokke ], Headmistress of Magic Department Slivica]

By the time you come back, I'll be zzzzzzz. *yawns* So late... Good night. See you tomorrow. *yawns again*

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