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Moekins13 wrote: "Me too, the rules are kinda bendy. Its where your ass is planted at the moment that counts :). Plus when we stage a coup we let a couple of the Italians in. Shhh, don't tell! ,"
Oh yeah that battle was epic. The Italians won by bribing everyone with sex and gelato. Don't ask, Dani, it was a tragic day.
Oh yeah that battle was epic. The Italians won by bribing everyone with sex and gelato. Don't ask, Dani, it was a tragic day.

I can't even oh..."
Hah I love sneaky ninjas! (You'll really appreciate that word if you read NSI. So funny that you use it now).
I haven't read Amy Lane yet, which is to my shame. I think that I have a pretty broad taste level, but tbh, I mostly like books by writers like Aleksander and Josh Lanyon. They really are more my style. Oh and Mahsa's "Muffin" - which is such a shame was lost in teh revamp of AFF.net. (warning if you look that story up it does not have a hfn or a hea and the sequel is very slow in updating)
Then, lol, there's my other spectrum: RJ Scott and Kate Sherwood. I mean for goto buys. I tend to read other stories as well.
I'm not sure what made me pick up a copy of Shying Away, but I did and ... it's a really slow moving book, not something I always like, but I did like it. And The Christmas Throwaway was another I liked which was filled with a lot of things I generally don't find myself drawn to: overly perfect characters and ... is it okay to call it "fluff" when I liked the book?
I'm tired and rambling =D haha if you want my all time favorite writer: Jonathan Kellerman. I haven't put his books on my list because I want to take my time and re-read/review each one lol. In case you haven't read him, his main sidekick and secondary character is gay and so well-portrayed =D.
Wow do I type a lot. I should go to bed.
Dani wrote: "Marleen wrote: "Marleen wrote: "So do I. What bugs me is when we start reading layer after layer of emotions in the eyes. 'There was anger in his eyes, but behind that a touch of long-buried h..."
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Dani, you should check out this on-line comic:Teahouse which is both pretty and lots of fun and try Twisted Hilarity's The Last Pure Human which is something that really shouldn't work for me but manages it anyway. Great sense of humor.
PS. Don't try either if you are feeling serious. On the other hand, they can be a great pick me up for "gloomy".
Night, night.
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Dani, you should check out this on-line comic:Teahouse which is both pretty and lots of fun and try Twisted Hilarity's The Last Pure Human which is something that really shouldn't work for me but manages it anyway. Great sense of humor.
PS. Don't try either if you are feeling serious. On the other hand, they can be a great pick me up for "gloomy".
Night, night.

Oooh, Starfighter. That hasn't updated in awhile. *frustrated*

The glorious torment of WIP addiction. When they do get updated I act like a 12 year old that just scored front row tickets to a Bieber concert though. So the feelgood outweighs the frustration...most days..

That was me, Mandy. I wanted at least one private full-on sex scene between Austin and Peter at the end of a rather long story, even in an epilogue a year down the line? I don't care if that made the book even longer since I love long books.
But...this is how Dani sees her boys and I'm just thankful and still amazed at getting such a good read from a self-published author.

That was me, Mandy. I wanted at least one private full-on sex..."
<3 I can understand that being a bit frustrating.
Aiko wrote: "Kate Mc. wrote: "Oooh, Starfighter. That hasn't updated in awhile. *frustrated*"
The glorious torment of WIP addiction. When they do get updated I act like a 12 year old that just scored front r..."
It's definitely not fun to wait for a story. I don't do read them very often.
Kate Mc. wrote: "Oooh, Starfighter. That hasn't updated in awhile. *frustrated*"
I know. =( But being able to buy chapter two would be great.

I think I was just so completely engrossed in their relationship I didn't notice the lack of anal! LOL
But I just reread it yesterday, thinking about your comments, and I am definitely looking forward to maybe another story in the future where they get it on.;) But in the meantime that sex scene in the carpark was HOT! I think I was just ecstatic to read an m/m romance that didn't use the ubiquitous, "F*ck Yeah, ream that ass" type dialogue/scenario. Which seems to be all some writers are capable of!;)

Most definitely. It's so hard to say goodbye to a character that if I get an opportunity and it makes sense in the story, I'll put them in. Angelica will also be featured in NSI so =D.
MandyM wrote: "and I am definitely looking forward to maybe another story in the future where they get it on.;) But in the meantime that sex scene in the carpark was HOT! I think I was just ecstatic to read an m/m romance that didn't use the ubiquitous, "F*ck Yeah, ream that ass" type dialogue/scenario. Which seems to be all some writers are capable of!;) "
If peter used that type of expression, it would be a performance. It wouldn't ever be serious @@. I do get how that can be sexy to some people, though. I think at times I've been turned on by that. I definitely have to be in the mood and I have to be reading Erotica. SG definitely doesn't fall under erotica category. Some of my future shorts might though =D (*snort, shorts, snort*)
I liked their carpark scene too lol. And I might write their first time, but honestly, Austin when he's uncomfortable and embarrassed? Not so much sexy as snort-worthy.

Dani, I'd read anything you write for Austin!

oh! I see porn in my future! *clap hands together in delight*
And SG might not be erotica, but that on the "hood of the car scene thing" was mighty hot ^^

=D A writer at a loss for words. It's terrible lol. I feel like that when I come to this thread. Everyone is just so awesome to say things like that.
Aiko wrote: "Dani wrote: "SG definitely doesn't fall under erotica category. Some of my future shorts might though =D (*snort, shorts, snort*)"
oh! I see porn in my future! *clap hands together in delight*
And..."
=D Porn! It's always better when you know the characters inside and out (*snicker, inside and out, *snicker*)
I did love that car scene and I do love Peter and his domineering. RAWR.

Someday...soon? (maybe? LOL)
Ttran wrote: "I still lol when I remember Austin's half shaving ass in the end."
The bold: I lawled.

Done :)
And I had completely missed this thread and the awesome bunny slippers picture :D
Yay for you. I rushed over to the GR version of your blog and left a comment...if you can stop dancing around the house long enough to read it. #1 on Amazon is pretty awesome! ;)

I saw and thank you, Kate, so much. It's terrifying and awesome at the same time. I think I nearly fainted when I saw it today. But after that, I did dance around, ngl. It wasn't a pretty sight.
Marleen wrote: "Congratulations! It's deserved!"
Thank you very much. Is it wrong you just made me giddy?
Ttran wrote: "Congrat Dani!"
Thanks!
Moekins13 wrote: "Very good job! And I agree with Marleen, well deserved!"
Moekins, Thank you so much, now I'm giddy twice!

Spontaneous victory/happiness dances are never very graceful or coordinated. But still the best dances there is :D *do a little hip wiggle and beam*

Awesome =D it's good to hear the book can stand up against a reading again. That doesn't always happen.
You're going to give me heart failure with all these good things you're saying!
Aiko wrote: "Dani wrote: "But after that, I did dance around, ngl. It wasn't a pretty sight."
Spontaneous victory/happiness dances are never very graceful or coordinated. But still the best dances there is :D ..."
The last time I was coordinated was in fourth grade or so when I threw a baseball at Linda Brin's head and actually hit it dead on. SInce then my coordination has fallen mainly in the get-to-the-bathroom-without-tripping-over-my-own-feet stage.

I'll just include it here, even though it's from NSI. FYI the first dialogue tag is Riley. I'm not ready to post what comes before or after it =D But it will be posted as part of the preview eventually (it's basically in the first few pages of chapter 1)
As always, this may be changed, tweaked or destroyed in editing =D Read at your own risk.
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I could do nagging. But I'm babysitting Daryl for her already, which I think is enough headache.


This one's not even in teh book. It was just Peter exasperated the other day while I was editing for the 35th time lol:
PETER:Raising 6 yr old not as difficult as dating man with the maturity of one.
And this one prob won't be in teh book (but it might, I keep deleting it, readding it, deleting it):
Cai: "I...um, I think maybe if I went to prison, I wouldn't worry about conjugal visits, Julian."

You're not allowed to talk about Darryl's chaps unless you want to sleep with him. I'm putting my foot down, Tim =P.
Kate wrote: "I could do nagging. But I'm babysitting Daryl for her already, which I think is enough headache."
Man, I can't thank you enough for that either. I can finally lay down and think about Cai's plotting and not Darryl horning in with an argument he and his LI are having (or he and Cai are having or he and Austin are having or he and Peter, Zhavra, Angelica and... pretty much anyone who dares brush against the chip on his shoulder).
Dani wrote: "Cai: "I...um, I think maybe if I went to prison, I wouldn't worry about conjugal visits, Julian." "
You have to work that in somewhere, somehow. :D
And yes Tim, part of Daryl's pissy behavior is because I borrowed the chaps. I have NO idea why he's raising such a fuss over the drink that got spilled on them. Something about did I know how fucking hard it was to get leather cleaned. I dunno, I stopped listening to him. Meanwhile he's tied up and gagged.
You have to work that in somewhere, somehow. :D
And yes Tim, part of Daryl's pissy behavior is because I borrowed the chaps. I have NO idea why he's raising such a fuss over the drink that got spilled on them. Something about did I know how fucking hard it was to get leather cleaned. I dunno, I stopped listening to him. Meanwhile he's tied up and gagged.

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I can see this site could become addictive, and that's just over the comments without getting to any stories. ;-) As a newbie, i'm just gonna (well, try and force myself to) sit back and observe for awhile so i don't come up with a terrible case of foot-in-mouth disease.



i think the goal is self-preservation. ;-) i'll throw in a comment every now and again, mostly to keep "Diva Dani" honest. ;-) [ seriously, i'm SOO glad to see her getting the appreciation. i thot it was great in every way, but i thot that might be just me. ]
Tim wrote: "i thot it was great in every way, but i thot that might be just me. "
*snort laugh* You and most of the m/m readers on GR and Amazon apparently.
;)
*snort laugh* You and most of the m/m readers on GR and Amazon apparently.
;)

You have to work that in somewhere, somehow. :D
And yes Tim, part of Daryl's piss..."
Lol I'll have a.better one. I hope.
Oh, Kate, not the pink chaps. Why kate? Why?
Damn tablet won't let me multiquote grrrr!
@ Lisa Glad you're enjoying :)
@marleen naked mantoys work best. Esp the ones that think they're tougher than him.
@aiko she did it, yes, but think of the good part now: Darryl is bound and gagged! Uh oh Julian heard that...
@Tim diva dani ... new pen name? :)
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LOL. I recommend you do not drink water if you ever decide to read my 1 and 2 star reviews then either, they tend to get a little snarky. I can't afford to buy you new keyboards that often. (Oh, stay away from my The Locker Room review too. It is a sneaky like ninja 5 star review.)