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Cat *living for the One who breaths life into me* | 192 comments Mod
wow, that is beautiful. let me guess, it was inspired by your fiance, right? that is really good.


Cat *living for the One who breaths life into me* | 192 comments Mod
That is sweet. Did you give it to her? I can't speak for her but most women I know love it when a guy write a poem about them.;)


Cat *living for the One who breaths life into me* | 192 comments Mod
Archer wrote: "She has read it and I put that and others into an anthology but I've not published it yet"

It's really good. If it goes on amazon I would buy it. ;) ps, I bet she loved it.


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

My poem. Hope you guys like it.


Without You
by Alice


Without You there's no light,
No guide to the darkness.
Without You there's no happiness, no joy,
as it was you that completed my life.
Without you there's no adventure, no freedom
As I stay trapped in my life long prison.

Without You there's no love, no kisses by the sunset,
No one to say I'm beautiful even when I doubt it,
No one to say 'I'm there for you",
And your reassuring arms wrapping around me,
comforting me and telling me its going to be alright.

Without You, there's no purpose, no meaning in life,
Nothing to pursue or have a passion for when I know that passion was you.
Without you there's no laughing, no smiles,
as I drown in my unshed tears of sadness.
Without you there's no comfort, no safety,
as I feel in danger and insecure.
Without you there's no good, nothing pure,
as my soul turns black and eats me from the inside out.

Without You I'm empty and lifeless as a ghost.
Without you I've let my fears overcome me,
let my sea of emotions carry me into oblivion,
and I don't exist any more.

With you, I felt alive.
Your easy going smile and your love,
was all that I needed in my life.
With you, I experienced what it truly felt like to be in love, so thank you.
I never realized the meaning of "living like there's no tomorrow", until now.
There is no tomorrow, no next week, no next year.
Because you're gone.
And as I grow old and you stay young, will you call me beautiful then?
As I gaze at the clouds wondering if you can see me,
hoping that this was just some bad dream, I'd wake up to find you next to me, holding my hand.

With you or without you, I will love you always.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/6...


Cat *living for the One who breaths life into me* | 192 comments Mod
to Alice: wow! may i ask, where did the isnirpation come from. for me, i am realy reglious, as you prob can tell from my poetry, and a lot of my writing has to do with God. where does your isniration come from


message 7: by Shannon (new)

Shannon They are both really good :)


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