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Nov 26, 2008 10:10AM
susie was walking on the sidewalk heading toward the park
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when she thought she heard someone call her name.
it was Adrian. she had been crushing on him for years
Adrian smiled "hey susie. i saw you walking and i wanted to say hi"
"I was on my way to the park to pick up my little sister," Adrian said.
"How have you been? I see you still don't have the blushing thing under control." Adrian continued.
"yeah, im working on it" susie blushed even more
"I always did find that rather adorable." he commented.
that made her blush even more "uh..thanks"
"umm... well I was going... umm... I.... no I guess I am free. Why?" Susie asked unable to focus on anything but those deep blue eyes.
"Sure." Susie replied, she didn't want to seem overly excited but she was screaming on the inside. "Do you want to pick me up or do you want to meet some place?" *please pick me up, she thought, then it would be a date date...*
"Yeah Italian sounds great." she answered. "I guess I'll see you then." With a smile on her face she turned and walked away.
when he was out of hearing distance she creamed as loud as possible. everyone stared at her so she ran home
Once at home Susie had a hard time picking the perfect outfit for the date. She wanted something form fitting that showed off her body she spent so much time maintaining yet she didn't want to seem easy.
she found her awesome black converse shoes and put them on
(Converse... very sexy lol)
Just as she slipped her shoes on the doorbell rang. "Wow he's actually early" Susie said out loud as she rushed to the door.
Just as she slipped her shoes on the doorbell rang. "Wow he's actually early" Susie said out loud as she rushed to the door.
Adrian smiled at her wow.. he thought
"You look amazing!" he said. "Are you ready to go?"
susie gladly took his arm and they headed out
Susie was surprise by the car sitting in her driveway, "Wow you must be doing really well for yourself." She said.
Adrian smiled "yeah i have a part-time job, and my parents payed for half of it"
((they are in highschool))
((they are in highschool))
"your welcome" he smiled and got in
Susie was actually a little surprsed to be able to say that it was clean.((how old are they??))
((they are in high school but they have to be at least 16.... so 16, 17 or 18))
She was a little nervous and didn't talk much on the way to dinner. Which was fine with Adrian because he himself was also a bit nervous.
She was a little nervous and didn't talk much on the way to dinner. Which was fine with Adrian because he himself was also a bit nervous.
They walked in and susie was focusing on her nails but as soon as she lifted her head to look her mouth dropped. The restaurant was simply BEAUTIFUL! she had never been to such a place.
"wow" she looked around and saw him smiling at her
"What?" She asked as they were being seated. "Why do you keep looking at me like that?" she blushed a little and tried to focus on something other than the beautiful boy sitting across from her.
susie happily took his hand "you look great too"
"So what have you been up to? How have you been? Have you been dating anyone? How's school?" Adrian asked, trying not to make it obvious that he was really interested in who she's been seeing.
susie laughed "that's alot of questions." she took a deep breath "im fine, same old usual stuff, i haven;t dated for two months, school good"
