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[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) This is Halloween, this is Halloween...


message 153: by Matthew (last edited Mar 09, 2012 05:35PM) (new)

Matthew (phoebus) | 115 comments Mod
Heheheheheheh

I am coming up with this sort of Fake Utopian Society

“The Thirteen Celestials”
*Whom they worship, and whom leads them. No one has ever heard their names, or seen their faces...
(view spoiler)

“Social Class”

Seraphim:

Cherubim:

Ophanim:


[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) Continue.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eI-wzS...
It's a FT funny moment, but it's in Japanese.

G2g practice piano. See you in about an hour.


message 155: by Matthew (new)

Matthew (phoebus) | 115 comments Mod
The society is basically brainwashed, this is where most of the beginning of the story will take place


[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) Are you gonna start writing now?


message 157: by Matthew (new)

Matthew (phoebus) | 115 comments Mod
Made more progress...

(view spoiler)


[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) Good, good. Keep up the good work. -.-


message 159: by Matthew (new)

Matthew (phoebus) | 115 comments Mod
my notes make no sense to anyone but me XP


[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) Of course. You made up how you do your notes.


message 161: by Matthew (last edited Mar 14, 2012 06:50PM) (new)

Matthew (phoebus) | 115 comments Mod
Each word or phrase represents a paragraph, or a couple sentences in my mind


[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) ...*yawns*


message 163: by Matthew (new)

Matthew (phoebus) | 115 comments Mod
I hate the idea of plain boring distinct Good vs. Evil sides *ugh*


[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) It's too common.


message 165: by Matthew (new)

Matthew (phoebus) | 115 comments Mod
In my book
there is no good side

There is only
Chaos vs. Logic
Those sides are neither Evil or Good

Then there is the others, they are not necessarily a distinct side. They just dislike each other, and have a feud.

Then there is humanity...who are doomed and have no hope...they are at the mercy of the immortal powers


message 166: by Matthew (new)

Matthew (phoebus) | 115 comments Mod
Oh, and I want the bad guys to win
Cause why not *shrugs*


[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) So, basically, it's only negative people plus humanity, who are neutral?


message 168: by Matthew (new)

Matthew (phoebus) | 115 comments Mod
There is neutral people to :P


[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) Humanity is neutral, right?

I don't remember when but in my mind, I was forming a story with the bad guys winning something against the goods and they started ruling this world... And, it was 99.99% impossible to fight back until a few generations past and blah blah blah blah....


message 170: by Matthew (new)

Matthew (phoebus) | 115 comments Mod
So.

Tick and Tock are going to be "Clockworkers

Lila and Ollie are going to be "Lust and Pride"

Joy and Hope(yes, they are bad-ish):
Their job, they are the "leaders" of the brainwashed Utipian society...so, they are "the brain washers"


[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) Brain washers. Ahahahaha! XD


message 172: by Matthew (new)

Matthew (phoebus) | 115 comments Mod
Then I love the combination:

Grief and Sloth...they would be the most hilarious killers...I can just imagine


[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) Send me a line of the story if you think it's a good one. I want to read.


message 174: by Matthew (new)

Matthew (phoebus) | 115 comments Mod
I haven't written anything...


[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) When you do.


message 176: by Matthew (new)

Matthew (phoebus) | 115 comments Mod
k

Here is a peace of a story I never finished:(view spoiler)


[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) More. I want more of that story of yours.


message 178: by Matthew (last edited Mar 14, 2012 07:24PM) (new)

Matthew (phoebus) | 115 comments Mod
u liked it? O.o


message 180: by Matthew (last edited Mar 14, 2012 07:27PM) (new)

Matthew (phoebus) | 115 comments Mod
I don't the writing is to immature and not well developed. I am way better now, this was in...*thinks back*...in October(ish) *ugh*


[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) It's still good though.


message 182: by Matthew (new)

Matthew (phoebus) | 115 comments Mod
I hate it -.-
I hate anything I make that isn't perfect


[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) ...Rewrite it so it fits to your liking.


message 184: by Matthew (new)

Matthew (phoebus) | 115 comments Mod
No, I threw away this story. Now I have a far better one in the process of being made XD


[ constellation mokke ] (plueblue02) ........................................................I'll finish it....if I feel like it..... >.> <_< -.-


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