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†Devil's Archangel§ (Mephiles) | 692 comments Mod
This is were you can run and play or you know whatever.



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message 2: by Miles (new)

Miles (georgegooberman) Carp and Pile came out of the forest.

"beautiful." carp said. The vast field stretched out
For miles.

there were no wolves, but there were animals everywhere. Rabbits, foxes, birds, ferrets, a mongoose. This place was hunting heavan.


message 3: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) kara smiled and lunged at the nearby rabbit."this place is wonderful!" she said


message 4: by Miles (new)

Miles (georgegooberman) carp looked around "yeah. Pile and I discovered this place about a week ago. it's kinda been our secret hunting grounds when the forest dosnt have anything." he snapped at a bird flying by.

Pile took off, laughing and chasing a fox.


message 5: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) "so I guess its a secret between all three of us now huh?" kara asked between chews


message 6: by Miles (new)

Miles (georgegooberman) "i guess it is." Carp leaped into the air and caught the bird in his mouth.

"though, i wonder what happened to the pack that was here. i mean, they sure didnt starve to death." Pile asked as he darted after the fox.

"obesity problems perhaps."

they both laughed


message 7: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) kara laughed with them catching a fix this time


message 8: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) (meant catching a fox -_-)


message 9: by Miles (new)

Miles (georgegooberman) Carp lay on his back, his mouth full of bird, the sun shining on his face. This was perfect.

Pile continued to chase his fox deeper into the field.


message 10: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) kara sat next to him closing her eyes at the sun marveling the warmth


message 11: by Miles (new)

Miles (georgegooberman) Pile was running after the fox. He was getting closer. closer.

Then he felt a sharp pain in his paw. He stopped and saw some blood was trickling out of it. Then he saw a snake, that had bit him. He clubbed the snake with his paw killing it.

"damn thing." he thought to himself.

Then he heard hissing. He looked behind him and saw two more snakes. A glance to the left had him see several more slithering out of the grass. more came out on his right. they were coming out from all directions.

"uh, Carp? did you notice all these snakes?"

Then he turned around and came face to face with a wolf skull. A snake was slithering out of its eye socket.

"Its a death trap. RUN!"


message 12: by Miles (new)

Miles (georgegooberman) Carp looked up and a snake bit into his neck.


message 13: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) kara leapt back claws extended out as she bat away a snake "come on both of you!!"


message 14: by Miles (new)

Miles (georgegooberman) Pile screamed in the distance as dozens of snakes attacked him. Carp ripped the snake off but two more grabbed onto his legs. He looked at her

"run. run while you still can."


message 15: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) kara's widened "NO! I'm staying we got into this together then we'll end it together!" and with that lunged at the snakes attacking carp all jaws and claws


message 16: by Miles (new)

Miles (georgegooberman) Carp kicked the snake off and bit another. together they slashed and bit many of the snakes. but it seemed for every one they killed, two more would take their place.

Carp felt himself weakening from the venom.

"Pile. We have to get to Pile."


message 17: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) "yes." kara whispered and limped over to pile with the help of carp got them farther and farther away from the once wonderful spot


message 18: by Miles (new)

Miles (georgegooberman) By the time they reached him Pile was bleeding everywhere and was shaking from all the venom. They started to drag him through the grass.
They were nearing the edge of the forest when carp felt a sudden pain in his chest he collapsed and blacked out.


message 19: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) "Carp!"Kara shouted in alarm then winced in pain as the venom coursed through her veins "we're almost-there- come..on."she said mustering up all of her strength to half carry half drag them fully into the forest.


†Devil's Archangel§ (Mephiles) | 692 comments Mod
"Over here!"A voice howled to them but there was no wolf in sight.
"You will die if you don't get healed quickly come over here!"Then out of nowere there was a wolf by a tree.


message 21: by Miles (new)

Miles (georgegooberman) Pile just lay in a quivering heap. Long since passed out. Carp awoke slightly "the.....go...wolf.." He passed out again.


†Devil's Archangel§ (Mephiles) | 692 comments Mod
The wolf dissapered and picked up Carp so Carp looked like he was flooting in the air. "Fallow me or you mite die too."The wolf was somewhat far away. Near a giant rock.


message 23: by Miles (new)

Miles (georgegooberman) ((hey alana? u there?))


message 24: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) ((hey,im here sorry >_<))


message 25: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) kara wasn't sure if she could walk anymore,so just slumped down on the ground howling quetly in pain


message 26: by Miles (new)

Miles (georgegooberman) Carp awoke again. He was by a strange wolf. "Who...who are you? Where's...the others...." It hurt for him to talk, the venom was destroying him.


message 27: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) "i gotta...keep walking...no..matter what."kara said to herself and started to walk again spotting carp and another wolf."Carp!"she called out


message 28: by Miles (new)

Miles (georgegooberman) Carp turned his head "Kara! Kara!" He was cut off by a fresh burst of pain. His shouts turned to whimpers.


message 29: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) "darn it! im so sorry i couldn't keep on walking,are you okay?"she asks as a spasm of pain flashes through her


message 30: by Miles (new)

Miles (georgegooberman) "you...you came back for me..in the snakes" Carp remembered back to when he was a pup and was left alone in the woods. But this wolf was different. She had stayed and helped him "thank you"


message 31: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) "that was nothing you still got hurt-ahh!!!"kara howled loudly at the pain and slumped down again "me and my stupid hunger always getting people hurt." she muttered


message 32: by Miles (new)

Miles (georgegooberman) "wasnt...your fault. All mine. Should never have gone there and dragged u there. im so sorry." Carp held a paw up. It was covered in blood. "Im a goner." He quietly sed to himself.


message 33: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) "No!! please!"her head shot up into the air and howled out "some one save him!!!"


message 34: by Miles (new)

Miles (georgegooberman) "no one...would want a useless loner like me anyhow." he put his head down. He felt himself growing weak again. His vision began to get fuzzy.


message 35: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) "STOP IT DON'T SAY THAT!!"kara screamed and a greenish blue light outlined her body as she healed him with all the power she had.""but wait...i control wind how come im healing?"" she shook off her thoughts and focused on carp "you'll be alright carp just don't leave me!"


message 36: by Miles (new)

Miles (georgegooberman) Carp felt the pain receding. His felt his strength grow and his vision return. "what? whats happening?" he stared in amazement.


message 37: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) "I-I'm healing you."she replied


message 38: by Miles (new)

Miles (georgegooberman) "how.....wow." despite having been with paw, carp was still amazed whenever a wolf used a power. " I didn't know u could do that." then he remembered "NO NOT ME GET PILE NOTME"


message 39: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) "right!"kara said and went over to pile healing him.


message 40: by Miles (new)

Miles (georgegooberman) Pike had stopped breathing. He was bleeding everywhere. His eyes were fogged and his mouth was Foaming. He had long since gone
Unconscious from the dozens of snake bites.


message 41: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) "NONONONONO!!!!"kara shouted "Come on,pile i know you're in there get up!!"


message 42: by Miles (new)

Miles (georgegooberman) Carp ran over. "Pile! No! Pile!" He screamed. His best friend. Was gone. "No! NOO! NOOO!" He was sobbing and screaming. "Wake up! No..no no."


message 43: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) "WAKE UP!!!!!!"Kara screamed as tears fell onto his bloody fur.


†Devil's Archangel§ (Mephiles) | 692 comments Mod
The wolf ran to the ground to them and picked up the 2 other wolfs. "Dang it why are you Forest wolfs always so fat."He got bit by the snakes and he still ran. He looked at them and put the other one in a little cave were lead up to The planes Den. "All 3 of you will die very soon." He then cut his bit down on all 3 of there necks drinking all the venom out of there blood. He later fell on the side of the caves wall tired and in pain.


†Devil's Archangel§ (Mephiles) | 692 comments Mod
The wolf ran to the ground to them and picked up the 2 other wolfs. "Dang it why are you Forest wolfs always so fat."He got bit by the snakes and he still ran. He looked at them and put the other wolf that he placed on the rock and entered a little cave which lead to the Planes Den. He then bit down on all 3 of there necks drinking all the venom out of there blood. He later fell on the side of the caves wall tired and in pain.


message 46: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) "thank you for saving us."kara whispered


†Devil's Archangel§ (Mephiles) | 692 comments Mod
He looked at her. "Why were you here?Forest wolfs have nothing to do here.You if just in case you have not seen you can not survive the snake attacks. What is your names?"He looked mad but also relived at the same time.


message 48: by Miles (new)

Miles (georgegooberman) Carp paused to catch his breath and analyze the situation. The he spoke "I am Carp and this is Pile and our friend Kara. We came here because we thought it was abandoned. Thank you for saving us. Very much." He paused. "Who are you?"


message 49: by ν1ятυα (new)

ν1ятυα (goawayplease) "are you in the forest pack also?"Kara asked


†Devil's Archangel§ (Mephiles) | 692 comments Mod
"No."He looked at them and smiled knowing they were not dead or dying. "I am Hawk the alpha wolf here. And well you guys are lucky to still be alive." Still laying down trying to take the poison in to his body.


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