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Unwind
me: ((lol! have fun there guys))*hangs pendulum from non-existant ceiling. transports death row guy onto table underneath. takes tape off his mouth. ties his hands and legs down. pulls pendulum back* HAHAHAHAHA HEE HEE MWAHAHA HAHAHA HA HAHAHA
mimi: omg madeline!unnamed guy: HELP MEEEEEE!!!!
me: *pauses synical laughing to stare at mimi* what???
mimi: *shakes head in mock disappointment*
me: WHAT!?!?!? *drops pendulum to put hands on hips and glare at mimi* ohmygod! man i missed my chance for dramatic effect!! *watched blade swing with excitement* seriously though what, mimi!?!?! *never taking eyes off pendulum*
Me: *stares up, shocked* WHAT?!?!??!?!? THAT-THAT- THAT'S HORRIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mimi: nevermind. *watches pendulum swing*unnamed guy: *watches pendulum as well, gets hyponitized*
Me: That is a very inventive author.....
Me: *looks at Mimi and Madeline* Okay.....
me: *watches unnamed guy's lips tremble with fear waiting for the scream**starts laughing synically again*
me: *looks around for mimi* Mimi? are you going to miss this or are you just at a loss for words??
me: oh good *smiles sweetly* unnamed guy: OOOOOOOUUUUUUUCCCCHHHH *blade hits guy's stomach and he screams in anguish*
me: finally *demented vioce*
mimi: hahahahaha!!unnamed guy: WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME?!?!? I DIDNT DO IT!!!!!
me: you've already professed your guilt. i think. but you were blamed and we have nothing better to do with you so we might as well...unnamed guy: *sreams again louder**blood paints the floor*
me: ...have a little fun
me: *dodges blood as it spurts all around the guy* gross but mwahaha
Riley: If pro-life people thought that was okay, I don't know what to believe any more.
me: we should destroy this room when he dies *looks around at walls and floors coated in some guys blood*
Riley: Ew. And disturbing. And this is coming from someone who killed the milkman for chocolate cake.
mimi: omg i jsut realized that now!!
me: ((lol haha. that was my first reaction because i have been thinking about twilight. the commercials come on like every ten minutes now!))i have changed my thoughts in regard to written violence recently and i have a very distriptive style sorry Riley.
*blood hits riley's arm and madeline laughs until she almost pees herself but does not dare leave this scene she has been waiting for*
mimi: *laughs at madeline's description*
me: i try *notices screaming hasnt been mentioned in a while. looks at guy and bares vampire fang teeth* almost there. so what do we do with the halfs?? burn them with room/building thing?
me: good good *hears the blade as it grates the metal table* *laughs like Cruela Devil except crazier and louder and longer*you get the fire i will dosolve the metal in the room *smiles*
Chandani: *shudders* omigod--thats-thats just HORRIBLE! *startes at Seth in horror*
mimi: okay! *leaves and comes back with fireball in hands* i borrowed these from the wicked witch of the west. im sure she wont mind.
Chandani: *smiles widely because she knows something* OH I KNOW WHO THE WICKED WITCH OF THE WEST IS! i read her life an times. Wicked. it was good!
Mimi: chandani, why are you staring at seth??
Chandani: But if I know god old Elphaba shes going to mind that you took her fire balls..
me: well if she does we will just make it rain *smiles maliciously(it seems i am doing a lot of that lately oh well)**beams shot out from hands and the table melts into a water thick liquid and mixes with the puddles of blood that the halfs created**walks to the door* let's watch it burn for a while then get the heck out of here!
Chandani: *looks around anxiously* *mumbles to self* i have to put out the fire...i have to put out the fire... i have to put out the fire... i have to put out the fire...
me: NO! dont you dare Chandani!! we'll be in ssoo much trouble!!! *screams over the crackle of the growing fire* we can control it! it wont leave the torture room!!
Chandani: *gives mimi a solemn stare* Im sorry mimi. But i now know what i have to do. *grabs fireman suit out of now were and begins putting out fire with magical fruit punch hose*
Chandani: *stops mid fire-dousing* What?
Chandani: i must save this innocent man!
me: (fruit punch hose???) STOOOP!! *attacks Chandani. takes fangs and destroys hose* Dont make me bite you!!!!
mimi: HE'S NOT INNOCENT! unnamed guy: YES I AM!!!!!
Chandani: *stares in anguish* MY FRUIT PUNCH HOSE!!! NOOOOO!!!!!!!! *reaches into pocket and grabs vial of arsenic* YOU SHALL PAY! MWAHAHAHHAAHAH!!
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Books mentioned in this topic
Blowing My Cover: My Life as a CIA Spy (other topics)Breaking Dawn (other topics)
(All rights to this idea go to Neal Shusterman)
Summary
Unwinding is an amazing, perfect idea. It satisfies both the “pro-choice” and “pro-life” parties. All abortion is demolished until the child reaches the age of thirteen. Then, between thirteen and eighteen, a parent may choose to Unwind their child. The only thing is that the child must live on. Unwinding is the process of taking apart the teenager (Using 99.4% of their entire body) and giving it to a hospital. It is almost like you are donating something to them. Though, it is your parents who make the final decision, not you.
Reasons for Law-ship
Unwinding needs to become a law. Now. There are many reasons for this. In the near future, the “pro-life” party will start to revolt against any abortion doctors there is, killing them. If we don’t do anything now, what started out as a kind argument between the two parties will turn into a bloody war. There is nothing that we can do about it. Accept to pass this bill. That is the only way to save our world. All the while, it will be saving millions of people’s lives by being able to graft other body parts to a different body. Like grafting a branch to a tree. It’ll grow in the end. It’s just like unwinding. This will save millions of dollars, because all of those complicated heart surgeries will no longer be needed.
Rules and Penalties
Of course, with every law, comes rules and penalties.
1. You must teach the process of unwinding and grafting in all medical schools around the world. If not, that particular medical school who does not (within a month after this bill’s passing) will be shut down.
2. Their will be at least seven harvest camps set up in each state. (This is where you will access the Unwind’s abilities and find out what kind of person will need their parts. The process of unwinding will also take place within this fenced area, and each one should hold at least 1,000 unwinds at one particular time.) If this is not applied within five months of this bill’s passing, that state will become a territory and will not have any form of government. All of these harvest camps should be state-funded, and more important than schools.
3. If anyone is caught helping or taking in an AWOL (runaway) Unwind they will be sentenced a life-time in jail.
4. If any harvest camp, anywhere, unwinds a person over the age of eighteen they will be sentenced to a lifetime in jail.
Please take this into consideration
I beg of you to pass this law. If you do, the United States will thrive. Hundreds of billions of lives will be saved, all because of you.
Author Note: Neal Shusterman owns this idea, and I do NOT believe that for any reason this should REALLY become a law, but since I just finished Neal’s book, I thought it would be fun.