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message 51: by Savannah (new)

Savannah | 2093 comments What?!? AWwww I never got to read your story


message 52: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
It's too long to type but I'll give you a summary if you want


message 53: by Savannah (last edited Jan 03, 2012 08:21AM) (new)

Savannah | 2093 comments grrrrrr. fine. >:P


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Aifos (theheirofErisHORTIQUE) | 117 comments ooooh :(


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Savannah | 2093 comments this will be hard because there is SO MANY MORE ROMANS THAN GREEKS although i hate to admit it.


message 56: by Aifos (new)

Aifos (theheirofErisHORTIQUE) | 117 comments that's true but maybe the seven demigods would fight together next to the greeks or maybe... agh, i'm so pessimist: duels
everyone has already thought about that...


message 57: by Savannah (new)

Savannah | 2093 comments no like the whole greek camp and the whole roman camp i think is what she means.


message 58: by Savannah (new)

Savannah | 2093 comments well, i guess not SO MANY MORE, but more.


message 59: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (last edited Jan 07, 2012 05:07PM) (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
Okay since no one else is writing, I'll write mine... Part 1 of...um... I don't know
Percy POV
It had all started with a simple bet. Show the Greek are worthy of staying in New Rome but playing war games tonight. Simple but risky. Percy hadn't meant to make this bet but Octavian had pushed him too hard. With the big show he made describing of the weakness of the Greeks and all that crud, how could he resist showing him up. Fortunetly or unfortunetly the fifth cohort was playing on their side which meant if they lost, disgrace would be brought back to the cohort. Cheerful situation isn't it? It's not like he didn't have fate in them, he had been with the Greeks and fifth cohort long enough to know they could handle the others, in a FAIR situation. But Percy knew this was definetly not fair. Octavian would have many tricks up his sleeves and he'd be ready this time. Just a moment ago Percy saw him running through the battle field, grinning from ear to ear. Obvious much? He also knew a bit more of how the Greeks fought thanks to Percy but he at least he still had strategy on his side. Yes Annabeth, who else honestly? She was going over the plan, occasionally pointing to different places in the battle field or to a happy Octavian skipping along. The plan seemed pretty good if not expected. Percy turned to see some Romans march along casually shooting curious glances at the map hidden by Annabeth... but the problem was making it stay unexpected.

There's my first part, what do you think?????


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Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* wrote: "Okay since no one else is writing, I'll write mine... Part 1 of...um... I don't know
Percy POV
It had all started with a simple bet. Show the Greek are worthy of staying in New Rome..."


amazing!!! keep writing plz!!


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Aifos (theheirofErisHORTIQUE) | 117 comments :DD


message 62: by Savannah (new)

Savannah | 2093 comments haha good!!! :) i can't keep goin i'm not in a writing mood...


message 63: by Savannah (new)

Savannah | 2093 comments Um so I was looking at fan fics- and I found this had capture the flag with the romans AND the meeting!!! it's great. it's on goodreads too...

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 64: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
Okay who votes I continue my story or change the topic?


message 65: by Savannah (new)

Savannah | 2093 comments ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm


message 66: by Savannah (new)

Savannah | 2093 comments WHAT DO YOU THINK?


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Savannah | 2093 comments continue.


message 68: by Savannah (new)

Savannah | 2093 comments sorry i forgot my manners....


message 69: by Savannah (new)

Savannah | 2093 comments CONTINUE PLEASE!!!!!!!!


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its great!!


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Percyfreak- (coltofpersonallity) | 163 comments jason pov percy and jason looked dead at each other croud was around to see greeksvs romans.jason aboared aa magical hourse that can float. percy had a pegasus the flew into the air jason flipped the coin percy clicked a pen jason had electricity around him and storm clouds perct created a mini hurricane they charged each other. jason heared a lot of "lets go percy" and" lets go jason. " bring it storm face"percy screamed."lets go fish boy"jason said. there swords clashed


message 72: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
I love it dude!


message 73: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (last edited Aug 13, 2012 09:41PM) (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
I felt like randomly saying this...
Nico paced near the bars of his jail cell restlessly, occasionally sending a few darkened glares at the guards standing by. It'd had been like this for days, endless waiting, endless darkness. He'd been foolish to go to the Doors of Death himself, no one would have dared be that stupid... well... except for Nico. "Hey!" he yelled at me as I narrated his actions with my fabulous accurately. Nico glared and opened his mouth to shoot a come back went the floor underneath him growled... yeah growled... like a dog... I don't know how... but it growled... it freaking growled... Nico jumped back in surprise "Gaea?" he asked tentatively then hardened his tone "What do YOU want?" He suddenly heard the faint sound of another person's breathing, he turned to see a dark figure standing near the corner of his jail cell, he grimaced: Gaea. "Hello my little captive." her voice imitating his mother's sing song voice. Hehe ooooo that must make him maddddd.
"SHUT UP!" Nico growled and turned his attention to the goddess "So? What do you want?"
Gaea clicked her tongue in disappointment "No threats?
"No threats."
gaea took a step closer studying his pale face... it looked like a vampire's... OMG Twilight NOOOOOO! DIE DIE DIE! KILL IT WITH FIRE! GET THE STAK-
"AGAIN SHUT UP!" Nico yelled as Gaea scratched her head perplexed... was the son of Hades talking to some sorth of ghost... or had he really snapped so eaily in these few days of isolation, awww Nico needs a friend! Ill go get Barney! : D
Nico tightened his jaw and clenched his fist, he would get that stupid daughter of Zeus for this later. Ahem, stupid AWESOME daughter of Zeus, goshies get yo facts straight foo'!
Nico sighed and turned to Gaea "So potty face what do you want? Because if you're here to make me part of your army. having your ugly face here won't help the deal." Ooooo burnnnnnn, Gaea's smile quickly was whipped off and replaced with a raised eyebrow "Clever son of Hades but not clever enough. I'm merely here to ask of a favour is all."
"What kind of favour?"
Gae hesitated "DId you ever watch... High School Musical?
Nico furrowed his brows "Errr... no. That's kinda stupid."
"NO IT IS NOT!" Gaea shrieked, Aphrodite fit much? "It is perfect!"
I'm not done writing but I randomly got inspiration xd


message 74: by Savannah (new)

Savannah | 2093 comments AWESOME!!!


message 75: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
Thanks xD You see? This is what I meant by really weird ideas when Im sleepy xD


message 76: by Savannah (new)

Savannah | 2093 comments Weird... But awesome.


message 77: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
:3 Yay! Exactly what I was going for xD


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Binali (bookbutterfly_wormsaresolastyear) | 576 comments HILARIOUS


message 79: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (last edited Aug 13, 2012 09:36PM) (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
Nico scratched his head, never in all his years had he ever seen this, a High School Musical loving goddess. What's next, Kronos secretly loved Hannah Montana? Oh gods the horror. He glanced up looking for hidden video cameras. No luck in finding them. He turned back to the Goddess
"... Have you been drinking something?"
Gaea glared at him "No I have not Son of Hades. That would be as traitorous as giving in to that repulsive god of wine."
"The wine dude is pretty co-
"ENOUGH!" she screamed stamping her foot on the ground "YOU MUST PERFORM A MUSICAL WITH ME!"
Nico took a few steps back "Um... what?"
"A MUSICAL!" her eyes seemed to stare off into blank space "A battle to the death musical.."
Nico scratched his head "Since when did this become Broadway?"
"Since I said so captive." Gaea said snapping her fingers at him, ooooo she just went there.


message 80: by Savannah (new)

Savannah | 2093 comments THIS IS SO AWESOME!!!!! I just started laughing like a madman cuznim tired too.


message 81: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
xDDD Being tired is no fun, you're crazy but you everytime you try to do some evil ploy you fall asleep xD


message 82: by Savannah (new)

Savannah | 2093 comments Haha ;)


message 83: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
Binali wrote: "HILARIOUS"

thx ^-^


message 84: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (last edited Aug 14, 2012 11:22AM) (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
Nico couldn't resist rolling his eyes at that, oooo little one has sass.. he rolled his eyes at that too, NO ROLLING EYES AT ME! I'M AWESOME!
Gaea studied his expression with a hint of curiosity "Rolling your eyes twice at Mother Earth? Not very wise my boy.. you know you'll give in... musicals do that to a person.." the lights dimmed Nico held back a curse as a spot light suddenly shined on the goddess. Great she has more attention on her, that's what he needed. THAT'S NOT WHAT I NEEDED! I WANT TO BE A ST-
Nico silenced the daughter of Zeus by a random bunch of skeleton army taking the keyboard from her hands. They kindly handed it to the real Narrator which was kinda locked up in the closet for some strange reason... Anyway back to the story. The goddess had changed out of her dirt entourage into a silk sea green dress.
Please. That is so last- the author slammed his book on the child of Zeus's head, that would keep her busy for now.
Nico stifled a laugh and turned back to the scene before him, the goddess stepped up to a microphone "Testing one two three, testing one two three." she was still using his mother's voice he noted, her real voice was probably too ghastly. Half the world would be clutching their ears in pain... He grinned
"What you gonna start your musical now. Should I got get Zac Efron?"
Gaea wrinkled her noise in digust "Ewwwww no! Im not Sharpey gods."
Nico shrugged "Could've fooled me."
Gaea smiled "I'll take that as a compliment, now, hit it girls!" SUddenly the whole room exploded in a mass of light. Nico blinked a few times trying to adjust to the drastic change of light. He groaned, oh god not the-... the..."
Gaea grinned "Yes child of Hades. I have flashed us into your worst night mare...My pink show room." she said delight making her voice trill.
Nico suppressed a scream. Pink. Pink pink and more pink. The stage was all pink so were the walls so we're the microphones, and now, so we're the back of his eyelids. It. Was. Torture.For the first time in his life Nico actually wanted to go back to jail. It'd be less torture than this. He glanced over and saw a hint of purple in the other wish pink room. He ran to it quickly but before soon his eyes widened in horror. No... It couldn't be. It was... A Justin Bieber poster. He felt his eye twitch. He was doomed.


message 85: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (last edited Aug 14, 2012 02:37PM) (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
Gaea grinned and walked over "You see you've met my idol." she stroked the poster, "He's beautiful isn't he?" Nico twitched, the author twitched, the daughter of Zeus in the closet twitch, heck I think the whole world twitched. This... This had gone too far. Gaea was a-a... Beliber.
No wonder the world was destined to end, with her bad taste in music you'd be surprised we lasted this long.
Nico calmed himself then took one long look at Gaea "Miss I think someone drugged your lunch today."
Gaea furrowed a brow "... It's morning..."
"... Errr... Yeah... I can see into the future... Magic Hades deal... I'm a bunny on steriods... Gotta run!" he ran for the door but shortly got cut of when Gaea grabbed his collar and dragged him over to the stage. Nico kicked and screamed and called her Lady Gaga all the way.
Wimmppppp~
The author sighed, he needed a restraining order.
Gaea dropped him in the arms of an Elmo statue and went over to the microphone. Instantly she was swarmed by little children in T's.... Literally T's. This is not just an excuse for a bad pun... Ok maybe it is. Nico wondered what the T costumes stranded for Titans? Tanks?... Toilets? Anyway they all danced around her as she tested out her voice on the mike "JUST GONNA STTTTANNNNNNDDDDDD THERE AND HeAr MY CrY. THAT ALRIGHT BecaUSE I LOOOVVVEEEEE tHe WAY YOU LIE."
Nico squirmed uncomfortable in Elmo's arms. She wasn't using his mother's voice now, that's for sure. He suddenly felt something touch his hair. He furrowed a brow and reached over to find a tiara. "What the.." he glanced down "OH GODS IM IN A DRESS! I THOUGHT THIS WAS GROVER'S THING!"
He looked over at Elmo, he was in a tux. Nico screamed and jumped out of his arms to land on his face.


message 86: by Savannah (new)

Savannah | 2093 comments HAHAHAHAHA WESOME


message 87: by Savannah (last edited Oct 24, 2012 05:30PM) (new)

Savannah | 2093 comments Hello friends. I have been doing this thing called "100 One-Shots of Percy Jackson". It's... well... read for yourself...

One-Shot 1: Introduction

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...


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Savannah | 2093 comments One-Shot 5: Seeking Solace

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...


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Savannah | 2093 comments One-Shot 10: Breathe Again

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/3...


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message 98: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
Holy Savannah, does are pretty good bro, you got a really good gist on the characters :)


message 99: by Savannah (new)

Savannah | 2093 comments Lol thanks :) I'm working on Insane... I just can't figure it out!!! I'm doing it so Leo has a certain way he does pranks:

I.
N.
S.
A.
N.
E.

but I can't figure out the steps to go with the letters.


message 100: by Yuman (last edited Nov 05, 2012 10:53PM) (new)

Yuman (yumnaep) | 480 comments .... how about .....



Ignore rationality
Never mind the danger
Silencio
At least a mechanism
No more breath mints
Engineering is Essential


??? these are less steps...more rules. sorry i'll keep on thinking, but i hope it might fit.


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