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message 1: by Seth (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) Today's topic is: first person. (this means you have to write in first person . . . about anything!

I was sitting on the hill when I saw an angel with black wings descending from the skies.


message 2: by Catamorandi (new)

Catamorandi (wwwgoodreadscomprofilerandi) I saw a girl in the road. I picked her up, and she was grateful. I took her to an afternoon play, dinner out, and an evening opera. She told me that she wished I would've taken her to the arcade instead of the opera.


message 3: by Eric▲ (new)

Eric▲ | 38 comments i forgot what i was gonna say



message 4: by Arthur, Live a little Give a lot (new)

Arthur | 554 comments Mod
Boy. The wheel of time. The bow of betwixt scurry. My home is weak. Mentalist weak. And I shook. Whether I was strong. Whether I was fast. I had then control. The situation was better than worse. I had it under control. But that was my condition. Where was the quality to come? Who better than I could make things worse? I will keep until I am not in a position to, until unable.


message 5: by Clare D' Lune (new)

Clare D' Lune Ok lemme tell ya ALL about being first person. See, there's the first lady, but hey, what can I say? My wife just got voted for president. What am I supposed to do? Keep having myself called 'First Lady'. Nosirri. And First man just sounds stupid. So I decided that I was gonna be called First Person. The End....


LOL I know that was stupid. I'm in a goofy mood right now.


message 6: by Clare D' Lune (new)

Clare D' Lune I am dancing. I am singing. My voice rises to the heavens. I let the life force of the world fill me. I look around, marveling at God's wondrous work. It fills me with such unutterable joy. Joy to know I am alive. Joy to know that we are not alone. I want to do everything. I want to do nothing. I want to spend the rest of my life singing and dancing in praise of the Lord. I want to help others see the light. Above all else, I want to please my loving Lord. In this, my God, help me.

Amen.


message 7: by Seth (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) Amen? Nice Clare


message 8: by Clare D' Lune (new)

Clare D' Lune LOL what can I say? I am really bored and really hyper. SOMETHING always comes of it. That was kinda a prayer storyish thing. Just be glad that I'm not in my Thee-Thou-Amen mood. Then I use those word in my normal conversations! Just ask my IMing buddies. They hate it when I start talking like that. And when I start going:

"Hi, sup?" said clare, knowing that she asks this everytime"

they then wonder what is wrong with me.


message 9: by Arthur, Live a little Give a lot (new)

Arthur | 554 comments Mod
I can not help, I'm not you. I wouldn’t have these problems, which has been in such a way. It was all a surprise and too sudden for me. I will say I have trouble. I need time to really recover. I'm almost desperate. The birds do not sing in my favor. They are discouraged. Turning people’s usual whisper encouragement, they ignore me. The tree of fruits has already ripped from the cold, have fallen.


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