Breaking Dawn
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Who wants a continuation to Breaking Dawn *NO TWI-HATERS!*
Hey, I like that you had the nerve to put it out here.It was interesting and enjoyable enough to keep me reading until the end. I liked it enough that I'd be willing to read the ending if you do decide to continue it.
Bravo. Well done.
I am continuing it, when I'm done, I'll post
I think Stephanie left the possibility open:Page 689 of Breaking Dawn
"Of Course, this isn't over. The Volturi won't forgive what happened here."
Edward was the one to answer that. "They've been seriously shaken; their confidence is shattered, But, yes, I'm sure they'll recover from the blow someday. And then..." His eyes tightened. "I imagine they'll try to pick us off saperately."
"Alice will warn us when they intend to strike," Siobhan said in a sure voice. "And we'll gather again. Perhaps the time will come when our world is ready to be free of the Volturi altogether."
"That time may come," Carlisle replied. "If it does, we'll stand together."
Stephanie definatly left the possibility open:(Breaking Dawn, pg 689)
..."Of course, this isn't over. The Volturi won't forgive what happened here."
Edward was the one to answer that. "They've been seriously shaken; their confidence is shattered. But, yes, I'm sure they'll recover from the blow someday. And then..." His eyes tightened. "I imagine they'll try to pick us off separately."
"Alice will warn us when they intend to strike," Siobhan said in a sure voice. "And we'll gather again. Perhaps the time will come when our world is ready to be free of the Volturi altogether."
"That time may come," Carlisle replied. "If it does, we'll stand together."
yeah, I want a next book, all I have for now is my imaginattion
I believe that there should, there are so many more paths that this saga could go down, later life with Reneesemane( can't spell it) and how she grows up and Jacob is really protective as he inprinted on her and her schooling life and when she stops growing.
yup..I guess it would be nice to hear about Reneesmee and Jacob's story...
I would also like to know what happened to all of the humans like Jessica, Angela, Mike and Bella's parents.It would be really interesting.
and Renesmee's point of view as well.
Great story Andromeda. It's a bit too much like Bella's though.
:)
I think this story (The Twilight series) should be done. Let Stephanie Meyers go on wrighting something else. Make a new story rather than whoring out Twilight.
I liked it acually but more detail and hunny i think you might have a story! Keep writing!!!
I read the whole thing, and while I think it has potential, I believe that the relationships that she has with each one needs to be more developed.Stephanie covers the one between Reneesme and Edward/Bella in her book, but doesn't really touch on the others in any amount of detail.
I think that you have a great imagination and can show the conversations well. But the descriptive parts need to be more developed.
Don't stop writing! Keep at it.
Thank you, remeber this is just a rough draft, I am adding details as we speak!
I honestly hate Renesme, so I would not want one at all
Jessica wrote: "I honestly hate Renesme, so I would not want one at all"Why would you hate Renesmee?
I'm very curious about that...
and hate is a very strong word btw.
No... I hope there isn't any continues for Breaking Dawn, becuase th book drags it on and on and on!
I just want a 10 year later thing, so we can see what happened and where they are at now
OH YEAH - it would be so awesome to continue the series on.
Hells yeah I would want it continued, however I don't care for a focus of RenxJacob I would want more BxE =D
Yeah, you have a lot of potential to be a future author! Good job, keep writing!
Has anyone read the Short Second Life Of Bree Tanner? Well if you haven't,but you have read Eclipse, remember that girl that the Volturi killed in the field after the battle, her name is Bree Tanner. And Stephanie Meyer wrote a novella about her vampire life.Anyways, I continued the story, from another vampire in that clan of newborns.
Noelle wrote: "I think they should do a book when Renesmee is grown. That would be an interesting story!"I'd love to see that too! The Renesmee and Jacob life story!
Totally Glee Obsessed (Penelope) wrote: "Chapter two...“Awesome!” I shouted. I ran to the calendar and crossed out the circled date.
“Renesmee, it’s time.” Alice said. “C’mon!”
“Alright, I’m coming.” I said. And I ran into t..."
She's seven. She's making out with a 20+ year old and she's seven. That's so disgusting.
hasn't anyone ever heard of FANFICTION?
I applaud your bravery and tenacity for even attempting to continue anything twilight. Fans can be really protective and picky when you start playing with what some would consider 'the sparkly vampire bible' lol. I personally think it's fun to explore new ideas...and what might have been. Keep writing sweetie...you'll find your audience!
Chapter two... “Awesome!” I shouted. I ran to the calendar and crossed out the circled date.
“Renesmee, it’s time.” Alice said. “C’mon!”
“Alright, I’m coming.” I said. And I ran into the bathroom.
“Alright we’re going to start with…” And she went into detail about the makeup she was putting on me. Two hours later I opened my eyes and saw a beautiful girl sitting on a chair facing the same mirror that I was. It was me I looked like I was 19!
“C’mon Ren, let’s go!” she said.
“Alright guys here she is.” Rose said.
“Aww there’s my little girl!” Mom said. Sometimes she acted like a thirty year old mom, sometimes like her regular forever 18-year-old self.
“Alice you shouldn’t put so much makeup on her. She‘s not old enough.” My dad said. Always talking so regal. After all he was 117. Wow my dad has been 17 for 100 years.
“She looks the age.” Alice said
“But she’s only seven years old. Today is her birthday.” He said
“Alright then how about next time you do her makeup. You seem to know a lot about that.” Alice said.
“Well maybe I should. And you listen here….” My dad started.
“Hey, guys!” I shouted. “Stop fighting, please.”
“Cake time.” Grandma Esme said coming out of the kitchen holding a small cake with one candle. It was small because I was, of course, the only one who ate. Even though I don’t really like cake.
“Jacob’s here.” My dad said.
“Nessie, I need to talk to you…. “Jacob said.
“No need, Yes.” I said, and I kissed him while he slipped an engagement ring on my finger.
That day I heard some commotion downstairs, I heard some people shouting and a girl screaming. I went down stairs and asked what was happening, but they wouldn’t let me down the stairs. I didn’t care. I ran past Emmet and Jasper and saw what was going on.
A girl was in the living room, on the floor, jerking and screaming. Her head flailing everywhere.
“Bella get Renesmee out of here!”
I saw Grandpa Carlisle bite her, and then Emmett carried me up the stairs. I heard what was going on. Grandpa had found a girl that was hurt and he was turning her into a vampire.
The girls name was Emily. She was thirteen years old. She would live with us for as long as she wished or hoped.
Later that day I went to check the mail.
“Dad, do you know anyone in Italy, cause there was a letter from Italy in the mail. I have it here.”
“What?” My dad said.
“Yeah. It doesn’t say who it’s from either. It just says To: Mr. and Mrs. Edward Cullen. And you’re the only Mr. and Mrs. Edward Cullen I know.” I said.
My father told me to leave the room, so I did… But I still have mind reading. I probably didn’t tell you yet, but I inherited some of my family’s powers. But all I know of is my mom and dads power.
Later I asked all the questions about what they were talking about behind my back. Like….
“Who are the Volturi? Are they the ones in Italy, and are you really leaving to go there?”
“Yes, we are leaving.” My father said.
“Why? Who are the-”
“They are the most powerful vampires in the world.” My mother explained. “The ones who came to judge you when you were young.”
“Oh, them.” I said. “They tried to kill me.”
“Yeah them.” Alice said entering the room.
“Hey, you’re the one who disappeared right before they came.”
“Yeah, but I still came back.” She said
“Yeah I guess.”
Then there was a knock on the door. And the pungent aroma of wet dog. That could only mean one thing. Jacob.
It was raining out side so that would explain why it was wet dog that everyone smelled.
“Would someone put the dog out, its starting to smell.” Rose said as she walked in.
“Shut up.” I said throwing a magazine at her.
“Perfect, he new issue of fashion weekly, thanks.” She said sarcastically after catching the magazine in thin air.
“Shut up.” I said again.
So I went to get the door.
“Hey Nessie.” Jacob said.
“Hey you. Were you running in the rain again?”
“Yeah why.”
“Could you please not next time?” I mean I can stand it. But the others in this house also have sensitive noses.”
“Oh sorry honey. So what were you planning for “the big day”?” He said putting quotations around “Big Day”
“Well I was thinking….” I started
And within 10 minutes we were planning the wedding.
The sound of a knock at the door woke me up the next morning. I looked at the clock, wow it was almost 11:30. I must have slept in. knock, knock, knock. I heard again.
“Oh, the door.” I yelled.
I ran through the house, through the kitchen, and through the living room. When I finally got to the door it was Jacob.
“What are you doing here? You know Alice is going to be here soon.”
“Sooner than you think.” Alice’s high little soprano voice said.
“Ahh.” I shouted.
“Alright you come outside, c’mon, with me.” Alice said
“I just want to give Renesmee something.” Jacob said holding a small box.
“Fine, fine, fine.”
“Renesmee, this is the ring we are going to use in the ceremony. It was my great, great grandma’s.”
“It’s beautiful.” I said.
“Ok, now you out!” Alice said.
“Fine, fine, fine.” Jacob said imitating Alice.
“Why you!” Alice said, and then she chased him outside.
I heard the sound of ripping clothes and growling, then the sound of a wolf running away, and whimpering.
“You better not have hit my fiancé!” I yelled out the window.
“Don’t worry, I didn’t, he just phased to run away faster.”
“Good.”
It was only a week before the wedding. Billy, (Jacob’s dad) was still having a hard time.
I could hear them on the phone now.
“No, dad I don’t care if she’s a vampire…… Well she’s gonna be your daughter in law in 1 week, so your coming to the wedding one way or another, I can have Sam or Seth wheel you over, or you could come on your own will to your own son’s wedding…….Why? Because you missed Rachel and Rebecca’s wedding, your own daughter’s wedding, my own sister‘s wedding….. Good I’ll see you there then….. Okay bye. He’s coming!”
“Really, that’s great!”
“Yeah. But I really think that the Rebecca and Rachel thing put him over the edge. It was a miracle to get him to answer, now that he’s discovered caller I.D.”
“Ha, that’s funny.” I said, laughing at Jacob’s joke.
“Alice come here, do you have the dress yet?”
“Sure I have the dress. I love the theme you did. It’s close to your Mom and Dad’s theme, but you made it your own.
“Yeah, I loved my Mom and Dad’s wedding, or at least what I’ve heard of it.”
The wedding was the next day, (Sorry I’m skipping so much like days but this is my journal and I’ve been so busy planning the wedding I haven’t had much time to write.)
So the wedding was the next day.
“Alice, are you going to do my makeup?”
“Yes.” Alice said.
“And, Emily you have you, Alice’s, and Rosalie’s bridesmaid dresses?”
“Yes.” Emily said.
“Alright.” I said with a sigh.
“Jacob’s here” My dad said walking into the room, all casual.
“Oh my god!” I said. “He’s not supposed to be here until 3:00”
“Hey Baby, how you doing” Jacob said coming in. It had been much easier since we gave him a key.
“How am I am Doing? It’s 1 day before my wedding to a werewolf and I’m a vampire, or at least I’m half vampire. And…”
“Ren please just shut up and stop worrying.” Emmett said.
“You try not worrying.” I said.
“Just relax, Ren, deep breaths.” Aunt Rosalie said. I didn’t realize I was yelling at Emmett.
“Sorry I’m just nervous.”
“You out!” Alice said walking back into the room.
I didn’t realize that I was crying now.
“It’s alright Renesmee; everything is going to be fine.” My dad said comforting me.
“I want mom!”
My mother had gone on an extended hunting trip, so she can control herself when Charlie and Renee (Her Parents) and Jacob’s pack, came to the wedding.
wow...that was fast!! just finished the first part 5 min ago. I'll read this now and get back to ya...but Kuddos on the enthusiasm for continuing!
Jordan wrote: "Andromeda/Emily/Cazix/Willa/Call me Andy wrote: "Other people beside YOU, please tell me what you think, and you kow who you are."
I think that you have a future of writing missy! I mean you know,..."
I agree. Totally Obessed Glee, you're really good! Amazing. I love writing too. so us writers got to stick together! :D
I think that you have a future of writing missy! I mean you know,..."
I agree. Totally Obessed Glee, you're really good! Amazing. I love writing too. so us writers got to stick together! :D
I'd like to hear the Renesmee/Jacob story. Then we could also find out what has happened to Bella and Edward etc. but without the focus being on them. I'd also love a werewolf perspective on the whole thing or even just a werewolf story in general outside of the main story. The wolves were always my favorite parts in the books.http://divaliciouzbookreviews.blogspo...
Amanda wrote: "I'd like to hear the Renesmee/Jacob story. Then we could also find out what has happened to Bella and Edward etc. but without the focus being on them. I'd also love a werewolf perspective on the wh..."
I know right? why didnt meyer make aentire book separatly about jake and nessie or SETH! I want to see a book about seth and if/when he imprints one of these days! :D
I know right? why didnt meyer make aentire book separatly about jake and nessie or SETH! I want to see a book about seth and if/when he imprints one of these days! :D
Madi (Wolf Girl) wrote: "Amanda wrote: "I'd like to hear the Renesmee/Jacob story. Then we could also find out what has happened to Bella and Edward etc. but without the focus being on them. I'd also love a werewolf perspe..."Ya it would be a really interesting perspective because so much revolves around the Bella/Edward saga (which is understandable given the story is theirs) but the werewolves are just so awesome!
http://divaliciouzbookreviews.blogspo...
Amanda wrote: "Madi (Wolf Girl) wrote: "Amanda wrote: "I'd like to hear the Renesmee/Jacob story. Then we could also find out what has happened to Bella and Edward etc. but without the focus being on them. I'd al..."
I know right?!
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I enjoy reading anything that Stephenie Meyer writes... but yes... I would like to read more about Jacobs life now that he can't be apart from Renesmee... It would be exciting!
there is a nook book fan written sequel to Breaking Dawn written from Reneesme's point of view. It is called First Light and is free to download.
That sounds fun...I'll have to check it out. There is a forum in here somewhere I read several chapters someone had written and pasted in. It was actually quite entertaining. I'll try to 're-find' it and let you all know if you wanna take a peakie.
OmG...I am soooo silly. It was this one lol. Sorry it's late and I'm a little loopy. So anyhow, if you are reading this...scroll up a bit. Very nice work ;-)
Totally Glee Obsessed wrote: "Here is the next story, after Breaking Dawn...(P.S. I wrote it!)
My name is Renesmee. Renesmee Cullen
And this is my story...
Someone screamed loudly.
“The placenta must have deta..."
ok.. I'm just busy at the moment but I promise to read it tomorrow.. I just read the comment "YOU GOT TALENT! " above and now I'm intrigued..ü
Karen wrote:there is a nook book fan written sequel to Breaking Dawn written from Reneesme's point of view. It is called First Light and is free to download. I personally don't like fan sequels... they never make sense like the original written stories by Stephenie Meyer...that's why i never read them... it's just my personal opinion...
I don't particularly want another book, just wished that the book wrapped up the series. A sort of 20 years later kind of chapter.
I don't usually like fan stuff either but like I said, it was free so I figured it was a shot. It wasn't too bad but I wasn't a real big fan of how it ended.
No there shouldn't ever be a continuation! It's bad enough that the movies win out over harry potter at award shows. I couldn't take another book/movie beating out one of my beloved books/movies.
ooh that's tough. I love both series equally...
Harry Potter was much better. Much higher quality to the writing of J.K. Rowling. Nothing against Twilight, the books are entertaining, I just personally feel that Harry Potter will stand with classics much longer than the Twilight series.
Karen wrote: "Harry Potter was much better. Much higher quality to the writing of J.K. Rowling. Nothing against Twilight, the books are entertaining, I just personally feel that Harry Potter will stand with clas..."That's because Twilight is not considered to be a well written book (series). I've never read the Harry Potter books (& don't plan to) but I have read the Twilight series, and as far as just the writing goes it's not very good. The story was entertaining & hit at a moment that was perfect for it & then was marketed down our throats. My Mom read both series and said the Potter books were well written and was a fun series to read.
Teytahni wrote: "Chapter two... “Awesome!” I shouted. I ran to the calendar and crossed out the circled date.
“Renesmee, it’s time.” Alice said. “C’mon!”
“Alright, I’m coming.” I said. And I ran into ..."
Geez this is freaking longgg!!!!
Ive bee writing it for 2 years
Totally Glee Obsessed wrote: "Ive bee writing it for 2 years"I liked the story, it just needs some tweaking. It may be better if she atleast makes it to 18 before a wedding, 10 sounds a lot creepy. I do understand that she ages differently, but still. I liked how the Volturi made an appearance.
Keep writing no matter what anyone says. Maybe your talent is more in editing or maybe it is in writing, just keep going.
Maybe a short story with the release of Morning Sun could happen. That would satisfy those wanting Edward's version of Twilight and those wanting a wrap up of the series. Just don't give us 200 pages and charge us $25 because it's a hardcover.
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Yea we do! Thanks for the friend invite.