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Who wants a continuation to Breaking Dawn *NO TWI-HATERS!*
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Oct 29, 2011 05:41PM
THANK YOU JORDAN!!! I have other writing, do you want to hear it.
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sure! post it whenever. i will get to it as fast as i can. if you keep writing like this, you should see a publisher. (i am serious about my reading :))
((Here, I'm sending you a request for a group, scroll down on he list of disscussions until you see the tab, Andromeda's writing.))
got it! TOTALLY TEAM EDWARD!!! YAY! i have been waiting for a twilight related group request!
There are enough openings at the end of Breaking Dawn for at least another book and more depending on how that book turns out. There is also a lot of room for some prequels.
Hey, Kirby, what part did you stop at?
I'm not going to read your story because I never read fanfics. Nothing against you.However, from reading this topic, you should know this about the online world.
1.Really, really learn to take constructive criticism. If you aren't able to, you will never grow as a writer.
2.People don't HAVE to read what you wrote. Somebody had read part of it and commented on it, and you got mad that he said something about it without reading it all. Idk, maybe people have things to do other than sit at the computer and read all of your writing? Not being rude, just letting you know how it works.
3.This isn't the right place to post your writing. Go to the tab at the top of the page that says explore, and under that, Creative Writing. Then you can add your writing. It might get more response there.
I'm not trying to be rude, really. This is good advice that you can really use.
I did post it under creative writing, and nobody could find it when I told them where, stop doing this to me people, and stop posting things if it's not about the book or group. And if your gonna be rude try to post it in a nice way, dont me mean then say, oh I'm not being mean or rude, cause thats your opinion and to other people you sound... well, RUDE!
You can always give them a link to it.I was telling you how other people will react, so if it sounded rude, that's not my fault. And I'm not going to appologize for giving you advice, but I'll get off your topic now.
Andromeda-Call me Andy wrote: "That's it so far. Tell me what you think!"i like it! did u just make it up on the spot? its actually really good...have u eva written a book before? if u eva do id like to read it...u have got the gift.
I think there should be because of the cliff-hanger Meyer left us with... it makes me mad everytime I read it.
I have written other books, I did make it up on the spot, I'e benn writing for about 3 years, and I've been writing this for about 1, 1/2 years.
Andromeda-Call me Andy wrote: "I have written other books, I did make it up on the spot, I'e benn writing for about 3 years, and I've been writing this for about 1, 1/2 years."kwl hav u eva got anything published? i think u should.....if u eva do make sure u tell us cuz i wanna read it. wot r some of ur books called and about?? oh can u help me wiv some good sci-fi names plz its for hmewrk thankxz!
I hae never been published, but I am working on that. I write alot of Fan-fic, and some original work. One is called symbols, its under the young adult section, in creative writing, and I also have written lord of the rings continued, after you accept my friend request, I will invite you to my group where all my writing is!
I would love to see a continuation
I would love to see a continuation in Emmetts point of View. Get to know more about him and his story!
♥ whoah! Andromeda-Call me Andy .. i think that's stephannie writing those GREAT GIRL!!!
I DO I DO!!!!!!!!!! THE TWILIGHT SAGA IS MY LIFE! IF STEPHANIE MYERE DIDN'T CONTINUE IT I WOULD DIE!
Okay so I want more!!!! I want the whole story! I did not know a thing about 'Twlight' until a year ago. I moved to WA and got to looking at reviews, then I found the entire series on sale at a yard sale. Girl said she d give me a deal if I bought them all. So I did, and I was HOOKED!!! I read them all!!! And that is a HUGE accomplishment!I never read then! Now since reading the series I have started reading other books and have found a LOVE for reading! I dont care what anyone says this series sparked the reading fire in me! haha I WANT THE BOOK!!! Take your time I understand these things take time, but this bit you gave just left me wanting more!!! :D
Before you post plz read story, I've had so many people comment and didn't evn know the story was here. lol
I WANT TO SEE ANOTHER BOOK WITH RENESMEE AND JACOBS LIFE AS SHE GROWS UP
Gabriel wrote: "No thank you..."What do you mean no thank you!
Maddie wrote: "I WANT TO SEE ANOTHER BOOK WITH RENESMEE AND JACOBS LIFE AS SHE GROWS UP"Thats what I wrote on the first page, go down a couple comments on 1st pg.
Gabriel wrote: "No thank you..."Well no is the opposite of yes, and thank you is the opposite of please...
Gabriel wrote: "Gabriel wrote: "No thank you..."Well no is the opposite of yes, and thank you is the opposite of please..."
Thank you isn't the opposite of please! I should think the opposite of please is more like, "DO IT NOW, YOU WORTHLESS PIECE OF USELESS FLUFF!"
...I'm sorry.
And seriously, Andromeda-Call me Andy, you can't just yell at people to read your fic. It won't work, and besides people aren't here to read Twilight fanfiction, there here to discuss things. It's a discussion. See?
Have you tried putting this up on any other websites?
Lily wrote: "Gabriel wrote: "Gabriel wrote: "No thank you..."Well no is the opposite of yes, and thank you is the opposite of please..."
Thank you isn't the opposite of please! I should think the opposit..."
That's very incisive.
Gabriel wrote: "Lily wrote: "Gabriel wrote: "Gabriel wrote: "No thank you..."Well no is the opposite of yes, and thank you is the opposite of please..."
Thank you isn't the opposite of please! I should think th..."
Which part?
Lily wrote: "Gabriel wrote: "Lily wrote: "Gabriel wrote: "Gabriel wrote: "No thank you..."Well no is the opposite of yes, and thank you is the opposite of please..."
Thank you isn't the opposite of pleas..."
The part about fanfiction.
Gabriel wrote: "Lily wrote: "Gabriel wrote: "Gabriel wrote: "No thank you..."Well no is the opposite of yes, and thank you is the opposite of please..."
Thank you isn't the opposite of please! I should think th..."
Yes, and I made this disscussion and I'm only here to get constructive critisism, so stop.
Gabriel: How? I just meant that this isn't the place for it, especially if the person who wrote it is going to continuously complain about not recieving feedback.
Looking over it, I think I may have sounded a little...angry. Sorry.
Andromeda-Call me Andy wrote: "Gabriel wrote: "Lily wrote: "Gabriel wrote: "Gabriel wrote: "No thank you..."Well no is the opposite of yes, and thank you is the opposite of please..."
Thank you isn't the opposite of pleas..."
Sorry. I'm done posting in your topic after this, but are you really? Because you got angry at me for 'being rude' when I told you what you should do with this. Furthermore, let me suggest a website for you: http://www.fanfiction.net/
There you can post your stuff where people are trying to find fanfic, and you might get better results.
Lily wrote: "Gabriel: How? I just meant that this isn't the place for it, especially if the person who wrote it is going to continuously complain about not recieving feedback.
Looking over it, I think I ..."
Its ok , but nobody coud find my story so I MADE this disscussion for it, you can post yur opinion about or not about my book.
Lily wrote: "Gabriel wrote: "Gabriel wrote: "No thank you..."Well no is the opposite of yes, and thank you is the opposite of please..."
Thank you isn't the opposite of please! I should think the opposit..."
lol "DO IT NOW, YOU WORTHLESS PIECE OF USELESS FLUFF!" <3 it lmao but it is true thanks aint the oposite of plz.......
i really like it you really have talent ! and i think you will be an amazing writer
Well i think breaking dawn should be continued as i don't think the story is complete....volturi part is still left as they are shown as an egoistic group so how can u expect them to take their defeat so lightly ........it can be written in that fashion ....... the story is just so beautiful....i wish it could continue.......!!!!!!!!!!!!
i like it !!!when you writing the next chapter on it
I'm writing it now, I will post it when I'm done!
i do want a continuation but im not sure what itd be about
Andromeda Nicole-{Call me Andy or Nicki} wrote: "That's it so far. Tell me what you think!"was this part of breaking dawn or is it in another book? please tell.. if it is another book i totally want to read it!
I would another book in Bella's pov. Then one in Renesmee's pov!!! :) :) :) :) :)
Andromeda, I totally get why you posted this in a discussion, but even now people are answering this as a discussion and not reading your fan fiction. You should probably take Colbys and others advice and move your story to fanfiction.net or another site like it. Not exactly a Twilight fan but your story was ok. Keep writing :)
Prabhjit wrote: "Andromeda Nicole-{Call me Andy or Nicki} wrote: "That's it so far. Tell me what you think!"was this part of breaking dawn or is it in another book? please tell.. if it is another book i totally w..."
Its another book, after bd
I like your story. Your version of Renesmee's life is interesting. As for the negative comments do not let them stop you. Keep writing because there will always be people out there wanting to step on your dreams. You just have to keep it moving.
WE have the same name lol, sorta
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