Please read my story

[Dylan]

This is a story I'm working on. I'd really appreciate if you'd read it. Then tell me what you think. Thanks! :D

Drunk on Blood:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

ch2:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Ch3:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Enjoy!!! :D

[Dylan]

So how do you like it? Any advise for me?

[Dorie]

Dylan, just wanted to post to say I enjoyed reading your story. My advice? Keep writing! I look forward to reading more.

[Lori, Super Mod]

Dylan, I just wanted to point out a few spelling errors (not trying to be a pain, but they sort of jumped out at me)

Resmiee - is this supposed to be resume?
Pathesis - you mean Pacifist?
Emediately - should be Immediately.

Just for starters. Run the story through spellcheck and it should correct everything for you. Not a bad begining tho!

[Dylan]

I've added a little more if you want to go back to that link. Enjoy! :D And thanks for the suggestions, I appreciate it! Tell your friends! :D

[Dylan]

So what does everyone think? Is my story o.k.?

[Dylan]

I've got ch.4 done. Please give feedback. :D

-Dylan

[Dylan]

Chapter 5 is done. This new chapter is a little violent so don't read it if you can't read violent stories. I appoligize to younger readers.

-Dylan

[Dylan]

Chapter's 6 & 7 are done! Please read and give feedback! :D

[Dylan]

Has everyone forgot my story?

[Dylan]

Thanks! :D

[Dylan]

Chapter 8's done. Please read and give feedback! :D

-Dylan

[Lori, Super Mod]

Dylan.... woah boy. Post #11 is going to alienate the members. Dont push your stuff. Let them read it and comment on it if they want to.....

I dont think it is necessary to post every time you update to it. Just trying to give some constructive feedback.