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message 151: by Olivia, everything in moderation :P (new)

Olivia (livibooks3) | 229 comments Mod
I woke up later, everything swimming into place as I blinked away the starry blackness


message 152: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
The crazy old lady was standing over me holding Sarah by the arm "if you want sarah to stay in 1 piece, you will fight the catfish" she threatened.


message 153: by Olivia, everything in moderation :P (new)

Olivia (livibooks3) | 229 comments Mod
"Okay, okay!!!!!!"


message 154: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
"Jeez, that is no way to treat your son and future hero!" I said, sarcastically.


message 155: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
"ya whatever, just come with me." she said "o ya, heres your friend back" and the old lady shoved Sarah toward me.


message 156: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) I grabbed Sarah by the arm, and steadied her, "You alright?"


message 157: by Olivia, everything in moderation :P (new)

Olivia (livibooks3) | 229 comments Mod
"sort of.." she said quietly, her eyes roving around wildly.


message 158: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
Then she fainted.


message 159: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
"Great, I said, next victim of this place... wait where exactly are we?" I thought for the first time.


message 160: by Olivia, everything in moderation :P (new)

Olivia (livibooks3) | 229 comments Mod
"Hey tell me where we am!" I yelled at the old lady. "And explain more!"


message 161: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
"I've already told you everything you need to know" she cackled mysteriously "Now I want you to meet a friend of mine"


message 162: by Olivia, everything in moderation :P (new)

Olivia (livibooks3) | 229 comments Mod
"Oh no" i said. "Who?"


message 163: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) The old lady, just smiled, and there was a bright light. I blinked, nearly blinded - by the time I got my vision back, instead of the old, ugly lady, there was a motherly looking figure in her place.


message 164: by Olivia, everything in moderation :P (new)

Olivia (livibooks3) | 229 comments Mod
"Ahh! you just... just..."
"Changed my appearance? I know." She smiled. I wasn't sure if it was scarier or not in her new face.


message 165: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
" So this is what you looked like when you.. conceived me?" It pained me to think of her as a mother figure.


message 166: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
"yes, basically. Now my son, let me tell you a little secret", but just then Sarah woke up, "but I'm not saying it in front of her" the old lad-i mean my mom spat.


message 167: by Olivia, everything in moderation :P (new)

Olivia (livibooks3) | 229 comments Mod
"Why not?" I challenged. "Its your fault she's here."


message 168: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
"where am i?" Sarah mumbled dazed, still crumbled on the ground, "what happened? did I walk into another pole?"


message 169: by Sarah (last edited Jan 25, 2009 06:44PM) (new)

Sarah | 5 comments "i cant afford any more brain loss here..."


message 170: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) "Sarah, can you... go... over there for a few minutes?" I asked, waving my hand towards a tree, "I'll call you back over as soon as... my mom and I are done talking."


message 171: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
"first tell me where I am, and what happened." she demanded.


message 172: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) "Um... later..." I promised, then rushed to explain after seeing her expression, "I don't get it myself, and I don't want to tell you anything wrong!"


message 173: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
"that'll work....for now. I'll go, but when I come back, you have to tell me everything thats going on here", and with that Sarah walked away.


message 174: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
I turned away from Sarah, and gave my mother a glare. "Tell me, now!" I insisted, triumphantly.


message 175: by Olivia, everything in moderation :P (new)

Olivia (livibooks3) | 229 comments Mod
"well....." she still was reluctant.


message 176: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
And then her mother sighed, cleared her throat, and began the story of it all.


message 177: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
"well, you know Johnny, I think hes a quaterback, from your school? Everything started with him." she started out.


message 178: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) "Johnny?" I asked, bewildered, "Why Johnny?!"


message 179: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
"He was our king, and he betrayed us. Johnny sold us to the catfish as slaves!" she yelled.


message 180: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) "I thought I was the king," I replied, flatly. How come Johnny always got everything first?!


message 181: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
"You are king, he was just king before you because" she paused and took a deep breath before going on "because Johnny is your twin brother."


message 182: by Olivia, everything in moderation :P (new)

Olivia (livibooks3) | 229 comments Mod
"wait" i said. "please tell me you're joking. Not JOHNNY?!!"


message 183: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) "Yes, Johnny," My mother replied, "He's your older twin brother."


message 184: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
"He was king a couple years ago, at first everything was nice and peaceful. He seemed like the best ruler we ever had. However then little trout babies started disapearing, and after a while everyone started disapearing!" she said as she continued on with her story.


message 185: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) "And you blamed Johnny?" I asked, really confused, "Why?"


message 186: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
"one day a mother found Johnny selling her baby to a catfish!!!Do you have any idea what the catfish do with the sold trout??" my mother asked almost hysterical "they eat them!!"


message 187: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) "Ah... okay..." I could feel my more apathetic side start to show - who really cares about trout anyway?


message 188: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
"uh, just wondering, but why do you care about the them so much? theyre just trout" I asked before I even realized what I was saying.


message 189: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
"Trout?! Because trout have special powers, that they use to defend our kingdom. Without them, our kingdom can be destroyed by the Unwanteds"


message 190: by Olivia, everything in moderation :P (new)

Olivia (livibooks3) | 229 comments Mod
"What are those?" I said.


message 191: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) "I think in your world, you call them pandas," She replied, after a long moment.


message 192: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (last edited Feb 05, 2009 05:22PM) (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
First trout, then pandas, what was with all the animals! There was only one explanation for all of this, this had to just be a dream.


message 193: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) With that thought, I threw my arms in the air, and shook my head, "This is bizarre. I don't care! Just get out of my head!"


message 194: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
So I woke up in bed in my room with my mom making me hot chocolate and it was all just a dream-I wish. Instead everything just got worse from there.


message 195: by Mallory (new)

Mallory (malloryrose17) "Get out of your head...? What...?" My mother asked, obviously confused, "I'm not in your head..."


message 196: by Olivia, everything in moderation :P (new)

Olivia (livibooks3) | 229 comments Mod
"AHHHH!!!!! JUST FORGET IT!" I yelled


message 197: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (last edited Feb 09, 2009 06:19PM) (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
"I want out of here and I want out now!!" I demand, I just couldn't take anymore of this nonsense! "bring me back to my normal life!! NOW!!"


message 198: by Olivia, everything in moderation :P (new)

Olivia (livibooks3) | 229 comments Mod
"No." She said. I sat down hard on the ground. "Either we all die and you stay because you are dead, or you help us. Either way, you stay."


message 199: by Sarah, The Flying Monkey (new)

Sarah | 279 comments Mod
A trout puppet marched up to us and saluted my mom "ma'am, the catfish have attacked the paloeny area". My mom sighed and replied softly "and so the war begins".


message 200: by Zandy (new)

Zandy | 173 comments Mod
The next thing I knew- five other trout puppets had lifted me up and were carrying me to a nearby cave. When I screamed for them to put me down, they just ignored me and started talking. Their conversation sounded like this "Gashi.. pamma! Ogataki yo yo me, tah tah fey rey."


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