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message 201: by M (last edited Nov 03, 2011 06:20AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Sheer laziness and lack of discipline are keeping me from writing anything good. I wish I could blame it on insomnia or my wife!


message 202: by Guy (last edited Nov 03, 2011 06:58AM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments All quite excellent, M. And I might even remember at least one of them. But which one?


I read a line once
that hadn't been written yet.
It lives forever.


message 203: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Guy! (I think.)

I can’t say just why, but I have a feeling Alex is going to give some man a very difficult time.


message 204: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments ahahaha XD wow Hanzle must be very very complex XD


I must decipher
This message, or a thousand
Troops die in combat


message 205: by Hanzleberry (new)

Hanzleberry (doughboyissweet) | 1065 comments lOL! I'm all complexity! ;D


message 206: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The code unsolved, she
fell asleep. Her thousand troops
met the Grim Reaper.


message 207: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments *



The Grim Reaper laughed
These thousand people would make
For a nice break-fast


message 208: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments “What a swell breakfast,
a thousand soldiers, gulped with
my cup of Folger’s!”


message 209: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments M, thats awesome


message 210: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thanks, Kat!


message 211: by Caitlan (last edited Nov 05, 2011 09:05PM) (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments *welcome....i can't come up with anything after that lol....uh this is gonna suck



The cup of Folger's
Was nice and sweet, and better
Tasting with soldiers

XD


message 212: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Toothpicks are gratis
when one is lucky enough
to be eating soldiers.


message 213: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments “With all the killing
and mayhem, I’ve hardly time
to burp,” chuckled Grim.


message 214: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments "Actually, with all
The killing, I'm getting a
Little bit tired."


message 215: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Old Grim never sleeps,
though tired. All that coffee
just leaves him wired.


message 216: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Grim is with each birth
inspired. He walks the cold night
hot, bloodless and fired.


message 217: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Eyeless, he sharpens
his scythe for the old, toothless,
beautiful, or lithe.


message 218: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments I just got some nice news! Three Haiku that this game helped me to create have been accepted for publication next month in the on-line Haiku poetry web page Small Stones. Nice smile! And thanks WSS haiku-ers for the inspiration.


With his eyeless eyes
Grim remains blithe to the who,
regardless how wise.


message 219: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Congratulations, Guy!


message 220: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Thanks M.


message 221: by Jessica (new)

Jessica (eyrer) Yay! Congrats.


message 222: by Guy (last edited Nov 06, 2011 08:43PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Thanks, Jessica.
Fiona @ Small Stones is looking for new Haiku. See her site, a handful of stones for more details — and some nice, and unconventional, Haiku.

I know that all here write well enough to also get published.


message 223: by Caitlan (last edited Nov 06, 2011 08:01PM) (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments Congrats Guy!


But how does the Grim
Who doesn't have any eyes
Re-sharpen his scythe?


message 224: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments By instinct. When he
does forget, it’s sharpened in
hell by King Gillette.


message 225: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments M lmao! Too too funny.


Grim rarely fusses
with the edge of right. To all,
she cuts truth's insight.


message 226: by Guy (last edited Nov 08, 2011 08:35AM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Oops! Thanks, Kat!


message 227: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments yw lol



Grim also cuts down
The will to live; truth and life
Will die hand in hand


message 228: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Apathy was my
affliction till I got a
gambling addiction.


message 229: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments Hey, guys, do you mind if I compile our poems about Grim? I'll give credit to everyone who contributed a haiku.


message 230: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments It’s fine with me.


message 231: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments I might have to change I's to she's


message 232: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Fine with me, too, Kat. I have enjoyed what that path has reaped - in Haiku, so to speak!


message 233: by Caitlan (last edited Nov 08, 2011 06:59PM) (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments XD

Al? You're the last one :)


message 234: by Guy (last edited Nov 08, 2011 07:10PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments I was addicted,
well caught, no more than three times
to she I knew not.


message 235: by M (last edited Nov 09, 2011 04:40AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Ah, what fingers to
be caught with, who malingers
in such dreams fraught with!


message 236: by Guy (last edited Nov 11, 2011 02:48PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments There were her nails, too,
painted and hot, a frisson
of my clotted blood.


message 237: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Nice one, Guy!


message 238: by Guy (last edited Nov 09, 2011 07:07PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Thanks M! That one was a surprisingly difficult birth.

But I admire how high you have set the bar! I am still busy fitting in time to write the interweaved rhymers while trying to keep up.

I hadn't a clue
of what a Haiku could do.
Now, what about you?


message 239: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments We had no worries,
but listened to tales after
Gramps turned down the lights:

outlandish stories
of pirates’ sails, armored knights,
and Martha’s red nails.


message 240: by Guy (last edited Nov 13, 2011 12:13AM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Hey, that's okay Al. We've all been there and done that. And all the best to you and the others stuck in the middle of the beginning of the end of terms.



I long to belong
to her hand, her long fingers'
grace to understand.

Time in them lingers
a quiet space, held along
her high cheekbone's grace.

With her arm in hand,
fingers still, I touch her face
my breath slows to nil.


message 241: by Caitlan (last edited Nov 11, 2011 04:26PM) (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments Here is the compiled version :)

http://theoriginalartkat.deviantart.c...


message 242: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Kat, these have come out in a surprising coherent and interesting poem. Thanks for compiling them!

.guy


message 243: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Kat, you’ve made a wonderful collage of these random verses! How in the world did you come up with the idea for it?

Her breath slows to nil.
I search her purse for a ni-
troglycerine pill.


message 244: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments Thanks Guy and M :) I just...actually, I don't know where the idea came from XD lol


message 245: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Al, yes, I think we are pretty good at this Haiku writing thing. Hope you're catching up on the z-z-z-s. And yes, nitroglycerine is related to dynamite. My grandfather took it to help his angina.

I fumble the pill,
tiny nitroglycerine,
for her heart restart.


message 246: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Warner Bros.?


message 247: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments Writers Block?


message 248: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments I bought some water
at a near Wal-Mart. She gasped,
“Don’t be still, my heart!”


message 249: by M (last edited Nov 13, 2011 02:26PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments She writhed and kicked him
in the head, and it might not
have been quite so bad

but for the abscessed
tooth he had and a lip that
grew swollen and bled.


message 250: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Egads, you guys! These are making Grim look down right soft.


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