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message 151: by Guy (last edited Oct 27, 2011 05:28PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments With a prince like that
the Queen in the guilt mirror
went for the blue pill.


message 152: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments *



The Prince swept Snow off
Her feet, then dumped her for the
One in the tower


message 153: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Was her dress sheerer?
She squinted in the mirror,
her eyes now blearer.


message 154: by Jessica (new)

Jessica (eyrer) Her beauty split off
at the ends of her split hair,
her future in strands.


message 155: by M (last edited Oct 28, 2011 11:43AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Her fate in her hands,
her fingers in her long hair,
moonlight on the strands.


message 156: by Jessica (new)

Jessica (eyrer) The moonlight circled
her fingers, coiling around
dry bones and powder.


message 157: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments A match spit and flared.
Sparks and smoke followed the fuse.
Hair and dry bones flew.


message 158: by M (last edited Oct 28, 2011 07:32PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments I just started a haiku thread in another group, based on this one Jessica started. It isn’t my style to be explicit, but it’s amazing how explicit you can be with implication. (It's a group that’s no place for minors.) Here’s one of the last ones I posted:

She talked with her legs,
and the things they had to say
convinced me at once.


message 159: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Be careful, Alex! The most dangerous things aren’t explicit.


message 160: by Guy (last edited Oct 28, 2011 09:01PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments M wrote: "I just started a haiku thread in another group, based on this one Jessica started. It isn’t my style to be explicit, but it’s amazing how explicit you can be with implication. (It's a group that’s ..."
:-) M I just visited it! DCC can write - how am I going to keep up?!

And while this is excellent!
She talked with her legs,
and the things they had to say
convinced me at once.
My perverse little brain so wanted it to scan:
She talked with her legs,
and the things they had to say
convinced me to stay
.



message 161: by Guy (last edited Oct 29, 2011 07:46AM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Wow, have you guys been busy! Doesn't anyone here have a real life? (Who am I to talk, of course.)

Anyway,

That they reached the floor
gave hope that her legs would grace
the path to my heart.


message 162: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Laughed while trying to swallow your spit!? You sure you weren't just spitting at my verbiage! LoL. Glad you're okay! And that's Fiennes (I think - no I didn't check either). He has become the rather unattractive Voldermort in my mind's eye!

She came to his house
with the hope that he'd see her
not just her ankles.


message 163: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Good night!


message 164: by Hanzleberry (new)

Hanzleberry (doughboyissweet) | 1065 comments HA! HAHAHAHAHAHA! His birthday suit? HAHAHA!! :D


message 165: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments I never said what her legs convinced him of. She may have had fat legs or unshapely (what they used to call “piano legs”), that convinced him to melt into the crowd or make haste in the other direction.

When he saw her feet,
he guessed Darlene was the kind
who live in salons.


message 166: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Yes, M, but what was not said was made very explicit!


message 167: by Jessica (new)

Jessica (eyrer) Her face and loose lips
peeled canvas fibers in strips
with her flat, light lisp.


message 168: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments *



Her lips caress mine
Sending warm chills up my spine
And our lives align


message 169: by M (last edited Oct 29, 2011 03:27PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Perfect rhyme, Kat!


I knew by the drapes
she’d been here. They hung in shreds
from her chalkboard lisp.


message 170: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments The shredded draper
lisped her name in warp and weft
of crumpled linen.


message 171: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments What he had dreaded
was that Marvilene’s sharp tongue
would leave him shredded.


message 172: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments *



This feeling of dread
Eats away in my stomach
Corroding my mind


message 173: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments What was there to do
but take phenobarbitol
and chew up some Tums?


message 174: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments *



Life has chewed me up
And spat me back into the
Fast flowing river


message 175: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Chewed pieces of me
float down the Mississippi,
spun by each eddy.


message 176: by Jessica (new)

Jessica (eyrer) I end, a trickle
soliciting something mad,
something new and had.


message 177: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments I start, am fickle
teasing from life something bad,
something trite and sad.


message 178: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments What to cook tonight?
Hmm. I’ll mix up something trite,
a delicious bite!


message 179: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments *



The fangs sank into
His soft, silky skin and I
Drank up my dinner


message 180: by Jessica (new)

Jessica (eyrer) Chunks of human flesh
are not so despicable
if seasoned with thyme.


message 181: by Guy (last edited Nov 01, 2011 08:04PM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments There was a time when
the act of eating with you
did not click your bones.


message 182: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments But that was before
you died and I dug you up.
You’re much more fun now!


message 183: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments All nerves, her husband.
She tried giving him a bath.
He went to pieces.


message 184: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Nothing left but bones
and hair. Emily scrubbed him
and bleached him with care.

Then she phoned Maxwell
& Sons, suppliers to med-
schools, of skeletons.


message 185: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments LoL! Too, too good!


message 186: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thanks, Guy! I thoroughly enjoy writing this sort of thing.


message 187: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments How do you like the BH's spin on this game? (I'm supposed to be working right now, and so am unable to concentrate on creating anything nearing the creativity here!)


message 188: by Jessica (new)

Jessica (eyrer) Ran out of toothpicks.
I strummed tendons with chopsticks
and sharpened new bones.


message 189: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments I asked Nelda Jean
why she liked that greasy spoon.
“They have good toothpicks.”


message 190: by Jessica (new)

Jessica (eyrer) They get right between
the gaps of my crooked teeth,
all I really need.


message 191: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Before hemorrhoids
and dentures, O what steak nights,
toothpick adventures!


message 192: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments A toothpick stake out.
Hot wings, hot sauce and prayer.
Strong coffees and tums.


message 193: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments *



Coffee is the drink
Of the day, energizing
and enriching us.


message 194: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments lol



Once a month is not
Enough, I need to see you
Every single day


message 195: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments OMG! Thats funny, and bad, at the same time XD



I really wish my
Thumb drive would please come to me
NaNo WriMo waits


message 196: by Jessica (new)

Jessica (eyrer) Blank pages mock me
as I strain toward the hundreds,
not thousands. Hundreds.


message 197: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments *



The writing won't stop
Never, in a hundred years
Did I wish for this


message 198: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Kat, that is excellent! Loved it.


message 199: by Caitlan (new)

Caitlan (lionesserampant) | 2869 comments thanks Guy :)


message 200: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments You guys are night owls! Here are a few that occurred to me a few minutes ago, while I was ironing a pair of pants.

Not to write thick reams
of twaddle, but one sentence
recalled for ages.

Living, not reading
or writing, gives a writer
something worth saying.

She was diagnosed
with verbal diarrhea.
Prescription: hard times.

I wouldn’t bother
to read the kind of novel
anyone could write.


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