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message 8301: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The marsh sounds of frogs,
the cries of loons, filled autumn’s
oil-sketched afternoons.


message 8302: by Anne (new)

Anne (annefrn) | 916 comments Loony froggy tunes
Cried out in the cool autumn
Seeking company.


message 8303: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The headlights stagelit
a bridge’s broken railing
enameled with ice.


message 8304: by Doug (new)

Doug | 89 comments Beautiful satin
Lovely home for soul and bones
Beautiful Glads


message 8305: by Anne (new)

Anne (annefrn) | 916 comments Winter's sun yet weak,
Welcoming, melting, warming,
Preparing for Spring.


message 8306: by M (last edited Feb 28, 2021 01:54PM) (new)

M | 11617 comments A satin nightgown,
floor-length, plum, relic of rooms
from which she had come,

modeled her shoulders,
suggested her waist, boudoir
mirrors, things unlaced.


message 8307: by M (last edited Mar 27, 2021 05:13AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments She woke as the cat
leapt down from the windowsill
of a distant dusk.


message 8308: by Ryan (last edited Apr 10, 2021 02:15PM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Very nice, M!


message 8309: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Across the hardwood,
a soft scrape of paws, her dreams
filled with raking claws


message 8310: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Ryan, what happened to your 5-7-5 that was up there before? I intended to reply, but the day had other plans.

The cat sniffed tumblers’
half-drunk whiskeys, stretched, then sought
her bowl of Friskies.


message 8311: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Love it!

I took it down as I didn’t want to breach any profanity rules. I wasn’t happy that it conveyed exactly what I was trying to say anyway.


message 8312: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The brick walk submerged
in violets told her spring
had somehow arrived.


message 8313: by Ryan (last edited Apr 12, 2021 09:47PM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Even violets
failed to thaw the winter
thriving inside her.


message 8314: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments His tone made her heart
a long icicle, her mood
a sour pickle.


message 8315: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Under bed covers
his tones were harsh, his odour
worse—distinctly marsh.


message 8316: by M (last edited Apr 17, 2021 03:08AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments Her thoughts were nettles
by a disused road, its end
a vine-covered bridge,

Life assumed the guise
of rusting nails, flaking paint,
rotting rafter tails.


message 8317: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Not having published,
he perished, relinquishing
the dream he cherished.


message 8318: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments “I want a Craftsman
house,” said Floyd. “Something wooden,
broad-eaved, bungaloid.”


message 8319: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4485 comments Sorry this one is inspired by Ryan's "violets" poem:

Red posies stretch up
like gentle hands growing. To
grasp the sun in day.


message 8320: by Guy (last edited May 04, 2021 10:07AM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments The poppies danced out
from the other weed-like blossoms
to Pink Floyd's bloomers.


message 8321: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The catalpa stump
rotted, leaving a vined hole
in the disused park.


message 8322: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments The lovers, stumped,
Could not find the perfect place
To park at the park


message 8323: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments She’d read of the park,
its glacial air. A parka
seemed the thing to wear.


message 8324: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4485 comments A hoodie, parka,
immersed by earbuds' sound. The
anti-social- a
lone ready for the town!

(I know mine falls past 575 I couldn't fit that last part in, lol).


message 8325: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (Nice rhyme, C. J.!)


message 8326: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4485 comments Thanks M!


message 8327: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Neighbourhood hoodlums
in hoodies hid their earbuds,
the sounds of music.


message 8328: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments They calmed disputes
acrimonious with strains
of Thelonious.


message 8329: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4485 comments He sat conducting
Upon a white "seat"- horns loud
from various "strains"

(lol)


message 8330: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Music-like, the strains
sounded like trainers straining
to train conductors.


message 8331: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments He masterminded
the schemes, and orchestrated
works of destructors,

but lacked a talent
for themes, and was ranked among
semiconductors.


message 8332: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4485 comments He felt had no place
in life till his luck turned: His
"peep" touched a circuit and became a conductor!

(Ok I gotta stop these, lol!!!)


message 8333: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4485 comments I think these are definitely inspired by M's posts... ;)


message 8334: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments What remained of youth
but a husk? Narcotics dulled
her longing, but dusk

brought a disturbed sleep
of unpaid debts, dim lounge light,
burned-out cigarettes.


message 8335: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (Great one, Alex!)


message 8336: by Ryan (last edited Jun 04, 2021 05:51AM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Oh, no, I was not
late my whole life, just early
for my departure.


message 8337: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (Excellent, Ryan! An unexpected twist.)


message 8338: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Thanks, M. I’m rusty!


message 8339: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (last edited Jun 04, 2021 06:51AM) (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4485 comments To Take off in life
beyond the "normal bounda
-ries:" soar like a Plane!


message 8340: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4485 comments Story lives have twists
Though cruel like life they "might" have
happy ending still...


message 8341: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4485 comments Murder mystery
Why would we read it? A movie
twisted to motion


message 8342: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The old police chief
muttered, “Murder.” Narquist, gagged,
swung from a girder.


message 8343: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Unsure of the facts,
the old chief frowned. Narquist stayed
mute, just hung around.


message 8344: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Narquist was beyond
haranguing. His murder left
the old chief hanging.


message 8345: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments From an age-darkened
pine wall, a fuse box surveys
the speckle-tiled floor

of a laundry room
in which fall, through blinds,
on flickering staves,

the notes these late-spring
afternoons compose: a mute
yet impassioned score.


message 8346: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments So good, M!


message 8347: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Ryan! I'm not sure what happened after the first stanza. It was like a bottle rocket that flew off into the woods.


message 8348: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Alex!


message 8349: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments As the grounds assume
their summer palette, clusters
of daylilies bloom.


message 8350: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4485 comments The fighters on grounds:
One, with Tai Chi, seemingly
passive. "Let's BATTLE!"


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