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message 8251: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The ghostly autumn
air had her rainwater eyes
and rust-colored hair.


message 8252: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Lovely, M!


message 8253: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Thank you, Ryan!


message 8254: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Evenings soon were strown
with leaves gusts skidded down walks
and spilled over eaves.


message 8255: by Ryan (last edited Jan 06, 2021 04:23AM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments An empty canvas,
the path ahead. Behind, snow
conceals our passing.


message 8256: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments They stopped, hearts racing,
palms sweaty. Behind a bush
there lurked a yeti.


message 8257: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Love it!


message 8258: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Ryan, you and Alex are wonderful! This is the most fun I’ve had in a writing group in a long time. CJ and Courtney and Garrison have my undying gratitude for keeping the pirate ship afloat.


message 8259: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments When turbulent seas
rocked the boat, three pirates stood
tall, kept her afloat


message 8260: by C. J., Cool yet firm like ice (last edited Apr 05, 2021 10:35PM) (new)

C. J. Scurria (goodreadscomcj_scurria) | 4485 comments I secondly agree about Garrison! Definitely has been consistent with keeping this group alive!

Edit: I mean Courtney as well who's doing great at keeping the contests going!


message 8261: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments While you look tasty,
(said the yeti), nothing beats
a good spaghetti.


message 8262: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (Laughing.) Ryan, that will be fun to try to follow!


message 8263: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments He sped his hulking,
hairy self to Fifth and Vine,
to the Pasta Elf.


message 8264: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Haha! These are great :)


message 8265: by Ryan (last edited Jan 07, 2021 02:43PM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Since going keto,
he won’t touch elf, unless it’s
elf from the top shelf


message 8266: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments A platinum blonde
brought his plate. Gorgeous, she smiled:
“Top shelf comes with Cate.”


message 8267: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments I ate a Kate, (his
spelling was crummy) cooked rare,
now she was yummy!


message 8268: by M (last edited Jan 09, 2021 10:47AM) (new)

M | 11617 comments He was a yeti,
a snow cruncher, once fearsome,
now a rug muncher.

The hunger! One thing
could stanch it: wine and a plate
of steaming Blanchett.


message 8269: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments LOL! RotFL! So good.


Blanched Blanchet with wine
blanc started the feast, Penne
pesto funghi was next.


message 8270: by Ryan (last edited Jan 19, 2021 10:56PM) (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments He’s been practicing
not needing anyone else.
Silent, the tree falls.


message 8271: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Topsiders blossomed
Sperrily from ancient boughs
of the deck-shoe tree.


message 8272: by Anne (new)

Anne (annefrn) | 916 comments Snowflakes dropped, twinkling
As cardinals sat on posts
Searching for a meal.


message 8273: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Dawn brought their drifting,
crystalline form. Trees recalled
the night’s howling storm.


message 8274: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments memories of trees
float on a breeze, whispering
leaves tumble at dawn


message 8275: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments A sky of antique
stationery glowed beyond
the snow-clad dairy.


message 8276: by Anne (new)

Anne (annefrn) | 916 comments Cinnamon sugar
scents fill the room, as we search
for tasty treasures.


message 8277: by Guy (last edited Jan 27, 2021 08:36AM) (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Hot hot finger tips
And sweet heat for my pursed lips,
Two cookies in hand.


message 8278: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Al wrote: "Guy wrote: "Hot hot finger tips
And sweet heat for my pursed lips,
Two cookies in hand."

wait, did you change it to cookies?"


Yes. ;-)


message 8279: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments Al wrote: "Sneaky. It was better as muffins."


I preferred cookies to muffins, and so also changed the pronoun to 'my', even though adding the pronoun is a bit antithetical to proper Haiku, but... :-) [Shrug.]


message 8280: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Muffins with stuff in,
cookies and cream. Row your boat—
life is but a dream

:)


message 8281: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Milford’s trophy wife
was a dream. Old friends called her
Miss Cookies and Cream.


message 8282: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Sometimes dark, others
light. Without makeup, even
poor Milfred took flight


message 8283: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments (Laughing.)


message 8284: by [deleted user] (new)

into the unknown
he goes, leaving behind him
the glitter and gold


message 8285: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments A woman approached
through neon mist. Engraved gold
glimmered on her wrist.


message 8286: by Anne (new)

Anne (annefrn) | 916 comments Gold. Pirates' passion
Lay deep, undisturbed; sea nymphs
Protecting their own.


message 8287: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The sea nymphs guarded,
early and late, rotting chests
of pieces of eight.


message 8288: by Anne (last edited Jan 31, 2021 10:57AM) (new)

Anne (annefrn) | 916 comments Couldn't resist, M... :)

Eight sea nymphs guarding,
their chests rotting; gold pieces
haunting divers' greed.


message 8289: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Among the ship’s ribs
and ballast stones lay scuba
gear and mossy bones.


message 8290: by Ryan (new)

Ryan | 5334 comments Never again will
ye see land
- carved on a chest
by some ghostly hand.


message 8291: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments A seaweed forest
hides ornate rails in shadows
cast by passing whales.


message 8292: by Anne (new)

Anne (annefrn) | 916 comments Silly sharks savor
sand, seashells, spinach and screws;
scorning scrumptious scrod.


message 8293: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Wow, Anne! Except for the conjunction, every words starts with an s.

“Sharks who boast a sleek,
trim bod,” they thought, “have cut down
on haddock and cod.”


message 8294: by Anne (last edited Feb 01, 2021 04:47PM) (new)

Anne (annefrn) | 916 comments and here's more... :)
Pirates persevere
pushing pills, peddling Prozac,
pilfering poppies.


message 8295: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments The sea nymphs’ long-tined
combs are pearled, the sparkling spoils
of a dreamlike world.


message 8296: by Anne (new)

Anne (annefrn) | 916 comments Nestled in coral
angelfish weave to and fro
safe in their haven.


message 8297: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Where strands of broken
seaweed swung, a mouse swam by
with an aqualung.


message 8298: by Anne (new)

Anne (annefrn) | 916 comments M wrote: "Where strands of broken
seaweed swung, a mouse swam by
with an aqualung."


Love it!


message 8299: by M (new)

M | 11617 comments Sun shafts pierce the weed
that festoons iron-bound chests,
a trove of doubloons.


message 8300: by Guy (new)

Guy (egajd) | 11249 comments The lost loons drifted
beneath the patchwork sunlight,
chests pressing the weeds.


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